THE LOCKET (22) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
Oyen oyen
Lovey Dowey update
Marjavan iss sweety maan pe
Hain kitna nautanki kiya geet ke Saat

Oh baby she is so innocent
Oh 2 days bhari pad Gaya na 😆


Sherni geet was so much fun to watch

I loved how u showed every ones reaction wonderfully


Loved Arjun taking caring of his wifey just brilliant
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
Maan n Dev ke Arjun jiju chalu hain... Maan too wants to see his Giit J... Moron.. N Dev N Maan dono milkar Giit ko ullu bana rahe the.. but bada maza aya bachelor party mein.. Poor Maan.. if dev wouldn't have saved him... his Giit would have make him to run behind her..😆 haww.. Giit's besharam maan planning everything ... 😉Awesome update.. loved it..❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
Awesome update ,loved geet state while opening her bridal shower gifts
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
Wao Beautiful banner thanx for update going to read update bbyee
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
Part 94
I loved every part of it.Sasha was someone who had earned my respect. In most FFs I have read Sasha had not only been negative but downright evil. But here was a Sasha strong, confident and modern woman who has a strong self dignity and self respect!!! Loved her and Dev's friendship!!! Bridal shower was fun and loved the song by Geet...and the way Maan came in front to appreciate and acknowledge her love

Part 95

Naughty!! That's the best way to explain this. loved how the guys planned and finally got the girls. Loved arjun, the perfect husband and a father to be. Jealous bambi was a treat but I loved how innocently she fell for Maan and Dev's trick. Maan's dialogues in his attempt to be drunkard had me laughing!!!

Most importantly it was the last part, the intense yet sweet moments that took away my heart!!! their yearning, longing and waiting for each other made it beautiful!!! Loved it totally di and I am sorry for being late!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
he he he we got Shasha's love story also. 😃
Maan is such a draamebaaz. poor geet kaha phasi Dev or maan both are devils-in-team..😆

nice update avi.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
wow...amazing update...🥳...Maan acting drunk...😆😆😆...beautiful song...👍🏼...awesome gifts......so cute moments of Maaneet...👏👏👏...they can't stay without each other...😛😛...don't know what they will do to meet each other before their marriage...😉😉...loved it very much...❤️❤️❤️...eagerly waiting 4 the next update......thank u 4 pm...😃...pls continue soon...😊...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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maaneet in ur words makes them more loveable... sachi😳

sms waala was so sweet... Pyaar aa raha hai tum pe 😳😳 chura liya meine😉

dev maan is so so sweet... apni bachelors party main bhi they r missing their biwi 2bs😆 ... maan ke kithne nek vichaar hain sab ke baare mein... feminine gundis??😆😆😆

loved this jealous track... but i loved more when dev came up with the awesome idea and maan became aalampana😆

Ek chooma Baadshah-e-Hindustan ke liye".
😆

sab ne sochke besharam gifts hi diye hain geet ko😆

story ke ending se pehle more pair .. sasha and ankur👏

eager to know what will be the wedding gift😳😳😳...

mere dev tara ko nazar andaaz kar diya is baar bhi😭

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Posted: 11 years ago
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enjoy the weekend

meet u soon...

take care

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Posted: 11 years ago
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If I may say that as I read the update ...I was technically Dancing and going Gaga over this "Half buttons-undone-thudilicious- Hot-Desi-Maan" 😳 😆

And then when this hot Maan called his innocent Naraaz seductress : "Baby doll" I was in singing mode: baby doll main soney Di ...Yeh duniyaaa..duniya pittal Di...*Ehem clears throat ... Yeh that's what u made me into Avi Ji ... Singing and Dancing Maaneet Fantasy dreamer somehow pulling off reading the actual chapter doing these theatrics! Heheee

*** But seriously Thud was that moment when this sweet simple Geet gave into the moment and happily danced in his embrace...and that pic to compliment the scene I imagined brought back thousands of amazing memories from the Geet FB-page where all I remember doing was analysing every nook and corner of the scene and gagaaing in the then Gurti/Maaneet moment *** haaayeee... Thank you for such a dreamy memory Ji

I can't tell u how apt Palin was in giving u the title of writing Pass-com ! U
really have made your own genre and niche in this ffworld of GHSP... no where can anyone compete u with it ...Aap Toh ustaad Ho Ji !!
I am quoting one such brilliant pass-com moment from the ch: "... Not to be left out Adi danced on the side, not a button out of place" 👏 🤣 I read and re-read that line coz I could remember that very moment in the show too when I watched it then ... I don't think I laughed that much on our beloved Adi ever ! ** huh hahahuhaha huh -in Adi style**
... Aisa Drunk happy Devdas ko Ghar lejaane ka maukaa sabko miley !! Theeennn what followed after ..were those warm and cheek-reddening moments... I remember in one of your previous replies to someone's comment u wrote about how readers might be thinking the story is dragging and they are just waiting for the SR ! Well let me tell u i am no such reader ... Those hours and mins and secs that Maan counted ..I want them to go just as slow.. aakir sabr main hi Toh mazaa hai !! Don't think on those lines Ji ... I have loved these 95 chapters wholeheartedly and I know thst as you may draw the curtains on its century I will probably think to myself : I wish there was more 👏 😳

And to draw the line to my words .. I am waiting for the next and more 😛

* Off-topic note- wanted to say that I read your comments on Shika's web of love chapter ..And I was nodding my way through and feeling the same that u felt ...very well written appreciation note Ji...dont think of yourself as less of a commenter! When u really are not 😃 *
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