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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: LILY111144

thud thud thud,,,,,,😉😉😉

bst prt s burnvita milk,,,,😳
ebchara nakul kya blakmailing hei msk ki hlp karo nehi to hsp jao,,,,😆😆
beeji kya kahegii haldi mneet ki dekhkar,,,😆
kashish sujal prt s osm,,,,,

Daadi hai na Beeji se bachane ke liye😆
Thanks Lils😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

It is not fair na..
Tum sab ne har pal saath diya
how can I give a readymade story to others just like that..
As I writer mujhe bhi accha lagna chahiye.
:P



main tho bas hass rahi hoon dekho main kitni achi bachi ki tarah poora padne aur comment dene ke baad hi pwd maanga na jo ready made bhi milsakthi thi phirbhi tum sab ki baatein maan kar poora padliya na


dekho achi bachi hoon main😆😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: cristallus

Kashish planning to go away from her mother and Sujal was shocking , but Pinky's introduction of her being her future sister in law did the trick.Hope both sort their issues and accept their love for each other soon.

Daadi being so sweet and planning according to her grandsons wish .Geet telling Maan to lose the game quickly was ROFL.Did not expect Maan to join hands with Nakul but it seems to make things work between them.
Haldi was romantic and Maaneets cute moments were awesome and Maan asking Geet to drink Bournvita ...ROFL

Thanks so much. Glad you liked it😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

Wo koi kaisse jaan sakta hai..
YE bholi naari hai aissa keh rahi hai..
😲how I ask how😲
bache bhi manna kar rahe hai..😆




😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111



main tho bas hass rahi hoon dekho main kitni achi bachi ki tarah poora padne aur comment dene ke baad hi pwd maanga na jo ready made bhi milsakthi thi phirbhi tum sab ki baatein maan kar poora padliya na


dekho achi bachi hoon main😆😆😆

Ab acchi ho ya nahi yeh toh pehelwanji keh sakte hai.. hun thodi😆😆
Bhugat toh wo rahe hai, hum thodi 😆😆
Bholi nari
acchi bachi
aur kya bhusa bhara hai brain mein Priya😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

Ab acchi ho ya nahi yeh toh pehelwanji keh sakte hai.. hun thodi😆😆
Bhugat toh wo rahe hai, hum thodi 😆😆
Bholi nari
acchi bachi
aur kya bhusa bhara hai brain mein Priya😆😆


dheere dheere bahar aayegi jo bhi hai brain mein😆😆😆tu aise hi updates badathi jao sab bahar aathe hi jaayegi😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: punam2712

sujal and kashish are the surprise package of the story

and what a time to bring them them
sujal is not harsh just fighting his own demons
and he doesnt want kashish to be part of his miserable life
but then it is not in their hands

maan and geet - am glad geet is not a door mat to give in to maan
and dadi is happy about the girls being with her for ever
and besharam maan will remain besharam only

I wanted the story to be interesting to the end.. so had saved them😃 Pehle socha Sid-Maith kar du par Sujal is a fav among so many 😃
Besharmi is so appealing isn't it. There is an innocence yet naughtiness to it.
Thanks Punam😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Kya bol rahi hai Avi... main samji nahi
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Posted: 11 years ago

TEASER

A brand new banner for the wedding. Thanks Lakshmi🤗

A/N: Thanks to micky11 for help in translating the Punjabi part of this song.

This is the song sung at doli {Bidaii} where

the [dhiye] daughter is trying to say to [babul] father

the doli cannot pass through your mahal [palace]

Tere mehlan de vich vich ve, babul dola nayo langda
Tere mehlan de vich vich ve, babul dola nayo langda

while as father he is saying that he will remove [itt]

the bricks so that you can go to your home.

Ik itt patt devan, dhiye ghar ja apne
Ik itt patt devan, dhiye ghar ja apne

The daughter says, "ours is a flock of sparrows dear father, we will fly away
on a long, long flight; we do not know where we will land".

Sada chidiyan da chamba ve, babul asan ud jana
Sadi lambi udari ve, babul kede des jana

"Darji, mujhe yeh part of the song accha nahi lagta .. ", Geet complained.

"Tu pehle mere paas baith, neeche kyun baithi hai?", Darji tried to raise her from the ground where she was sitting with her hand clasping his leg and her head resting on his knee.

"Nahi. Aisse hi baithna hai. Aap mere sar pe apna haath rakhte ho aur mere baal sehlate ho toh mujhe shanti milti hai, sukoon milta hai. Aissa lagta hai jaisse meri zindagi mein jab tak aap hai, kabhi kuch galat nahi ho sakta hai", shining hazel eyes looked into his tired old eyes. Both were on the verge of tears, each putting on a brave face for each other.

"Theek hai Guddi. Yeh batao ke tumhe yeh song kyun pasand nahi hai? Yeh toh shaadi pe bajate hai humare Punjab main", Darji asked resuming his strokes on her hair.

"Saara gaana nahi. Sirf jab ladki ke Pitaah kehte hai, ke main brick nikalunga so that ladki apne ghar chali jaiye. Kya Pitaah ka ghar ab ladki ka nahi raha? Aissa kyun Darji?", Geet's eyes were luminous as she asked the question every girl asks in life at some point or other.

Jis ghar mein janam liya uss ghar ne mujhe paraya kyun kiya?

A/N: Next part wedding, Sujal Kashish story, lots more. Very long chapter. Should I divide it into more than one part or do you want to read it in one? For the whole chapter it will take me longer, shorter parts every 4 days or so. Let me know. Hope you enjoy it.

I am noticing that a lot of you don't like 18+ chapters😉 so am wondering what kind of SR to write😆
One chapter on Maaneet SR after the wedding?
Mogambo (Readers) khush hua ya nahi?

Do enjoy this VM created by Priya. Thanks again Priya.

Dailymotion link http://www.dailymotion.com/video/x1tx9ms_dulhan-geet-vm_music

VM[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RZqV8zESrYw[/YOUTUBE]
Song from the movie Kabhi Kabhi
Video credit to Priya
Thanks for the banner Lakshmi
Edited by dqno1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: JeevanaP

Kya bol rahi hai Avi... main samji nahi

She is claiming to be an innocent
so I am saying that even her children are denying that statement
ab samjhi?

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