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Remya

@Remya_Pillai

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

welcome back.. 😊
Lovely os..

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Sundari

@Param-Sundari

Stunner

+ 13

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

beautiful os..
the way realisation came up too maan...
n how he ws scarred to loose her as soon as he realised shes his life...
also how geet ws elated to c changes in him n didnt take mch time to grab the opportunity to fulfill her dreams of perfect family with her maan 😊

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kirti

@DevilClan

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Awesum and lovely os. Her parents are right to blame him. Ek pita kanyadaan k waqt bade vishwas k saath apne jigar k tukde ki jimmedari ko kisi or ko saunpta h or ummid rakhta h k wo uski puri raksha karega but Maan failed as a husband. Thank god he realised before its too late. Poor Geet.. How much she suffered.

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fict

@fict

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

such a sweet story. 👏Thanks for sharing.

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

awesome OS dear...
lovely...
Maan got a second chance...
and Geet forgave him...

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mansiahmed

@mansiahmed

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Welcome back...missed your writing this is a awesome comeback...still love badboy good girl of yours😊

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Isolophiliac

@Isolophiliac00

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

That was amazing...
True..we all miss those small moments in work..but never should it be a habit...
Personal happiness holds the same importance as professional if not more...and you put it all so wonderfully...
How she suffered due to his nature..
Its good that now hr knows what he was going to loose...
As they say 'it is never too late to mend' and thankfully maan amended his mistakes at the right time..leading to a beautiful beginning..
Awesomely written is...

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mauaa

@mauaa

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

hey nandy.. we missed u soo soo much.. specially me.. hw r u? hope u r fine.. plz come back with a bang.. we miss yr maaneet stories in nady bru's style.. hehe..

this os is also great!! good job!👏

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

wow lovely emotional heart touching os.. very beautiful like a poem.. te way my maan ki love for his business forgetting his family and his wife who waiting for him for every sec without any expectation from him was lovely emotional.. te way my maan realizing his loev for his geet and wat she meat in his life wen he struggling for life was lovely emotional.. te way my maan said pls dont leave me and teach me to love was lovely emotional touching..te way my maaneet ki new life with full of love was lovely..i love te os so much

Edited by Desigirls12 - 11 years ago