COLORS OF LOVE#2-UPDATED PT 28 PG 07 ON 30-07-14 - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Anyone waiting?????gonna update tomorrow or day after tomorrow
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Originally posted by: geetsrir.maan

Anyone waiting?????gonna update tomorrow or day after tomorrow

wt a question? of cos waiting!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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finished thread one ...excited for maaneet wedding !
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Amazing update!!!👏👏👏 Beautifully written⭐️⭐️⭐️ Awesome concept👍🏼loved it so much❤️ Waiting eagerly for the next update
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RECAP

It was the time of their departure to London where Maan had set up a grand wedding but before that he wanted to stop Dev so he kidnapped him & kept him in a secret place where Dev was kept separated from the whole world not getting any news of the world.

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PART 28

Dev opened his eyes to get he was in some strange place.He looked around him.He was in some kind of ground place...some kind of cellar.His vision was blur so he wiped off his eyes from his hands.His vision came to focus and saw around him.Darkness crept everywhere and from one corner only the light is coming.He tried to move and saw himself to be tied to a chair.He tried to free himself but he was bound tightly.He looked around and saw a man standing.He tried to trace him in darkness but he cant come into focus.

He asked,"Who's there?"

He closed his eyes and opened it to trace the man but he cant come into focus as he was standing in the half darkness.He try to see his face but the man was standing in darkness covering his face completely to him.

That person asked,"How r u Dev?"

Dev tried to catch his voice but it wasnt familiar.It was a new one.

Dev asked,"Who r u,and why have u tied me here?

That person said,"Just for fun Mr.Dev!U will be freed till tomorrow!"

Dev snarled,"What?Let me go or u will pay very dearly!"

That person snarled too,"Listen bas***d,u r stayed here till tomorrow means till tomorrow!"

Dev asked,"Why have u tied here?What have i done to u?"

That person said,"Dint i tell u,this is for fun!I wanted to tie u and prove my father that i can capture a business tycoon like u!"

Dev snarled,"What?Are u crazy?To prove ur father i was the person u captured.Look am gonna pay u whatever u want but leave me today!I cant stay here!I want to finish my work which i had started.

That person said,"U can finish ur work tomorrow also but for now just shut up and sit down!"

Dev was angry and struggled but immediately something pierced to his neck..a needle type and he fainted immediately.

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Here Geet sat in front of mirror not wearing any wedding dress or jewellery.She still was in turmoil and many questions were madly coming to her mind.Most of questions were abt Dev.Is he gonna stop her marriage this time?Is he gonna harm Maan?She dint wanted this to be like this but she cant see Maan in trouble.

On that time there was a knock and she opened the door to get her Maan standing there smirking at her and said,"Waiting for me Jaan?"

Geet turned and said worriedly,"Maan be serious!Am serious that Dev gonna come here too.I havent forgotten the bomb blast!"

Maan sighed and followed her closing the door and held her hand and said,"Meet,listen to me!"

Geet turned and hugged him tightly cant able to resist her anxiety.She only wanted his well being.Maan dint say anything only rubbed her back soothingly.Geet snuggled closer inhaling his sweet sweet scent.She sighed feeling his manly scent.

Maan said after sometime,"Meet,trust me,nothing going to happen!Dev not going to come to our marriage as we r far away from him.We're in London and he's in Delhi!Look i had kept an private detective to keep an eye on him and he's in Delhi only searching for us.So he's not gonna come and when he get to know where we r on that our marriage will be over here.Mishty,get ready for marriage!Or else am going to take u to honeymoon without any marriage!"

Geet blushed hearing his demanding words and he chuckled and spoke,"Now that's my mishty..my meet!Now get ready fast!"

Geet nodded and said to go outside but he stood there denying her plea.Atlast he declared that he gonna put the dress and jewellery on her.

Geet blushed but she give into his demand as he was looking more cute with his demanding intense eyes.Maan slowly slid her dori captivating her soft body inside his strong arms and moved his fingers on her sexy back.She moaned and her eyes blazed with dark desire.Maan unzipped her top slowly brushing his thumb on her spine.She quivered feeling it and her cheeks reddened.He smirked looking at her red cheeks and softly pecked it.He wanted to taste it but stopped himself.He wanted to reserve it for his first night.He moved his finger softly on her spine once again and she moaned arching her back.

Maan slowly slid her top from her both shoulders and said,"Lift ur hands sweety!"

Geet lifted her hand and he took off her top from her neck.Now he saw her round small soft curves.He groaned looking at it and a blush crept on her cheeks seeing his intense eyes.

She was abt to turn when he stopped her and said,"Let me!"

She blushed but dint object.She knew that he wont take any wrong step.He slid his hands on her spine and unhooked her b**.He softly brushed his fingers on the side of her breasts and made her moan softly.He slowly slid her pant loosening the thread.She slowly moved her legs which he noticed was milky white.He wanted to grab his legs and bite it sucking its skin but resisted it.Geet stood in front of him naked.

Maan made her to wear the skirt first.He groaned seeing her curves dangle seeing her body move.He wanted to grab those warm soft small curves and suck it till its is sore.He then made her wear b** and then blouse.He breathed seeing the cloth cover her soft curves.Now it was the task of hooking it.He turned her softly and made her face her back to his front and slowly slid his fingers on her nape and then on her spine.She wiggled her back moaning softly.Maan pecked her nape and hooked her b**.Then he kissed her back and hooked her blous.He sensually moved his fingers on her sexy back and she moaned wiggling it feeling ticklish.She giggled softly cant able to resist when he chuckled.He tied the dori of her blouse.


Then he made her stand in front of mirror and started combing her hair.She was so overwhelmed seeing him comb her hair.She blushed seeing his teasing eyes.Then he wove the plaits and twisted it into bun and pinned it.She was like stunned.He actually knows the hairstyle!

Seeing her questioning eyes he spoke softly,"I dont want u to wear any heavy thing and more pins makes u headache so i saw this simple hairstyle for u in the hairstyle magazine so i learnt it!"

He added an ornament to her tight bun and left it like that and slowly freed the curls from her hairs.


Geet was stunned hearing his words and her eyes welled up but he nodded no to her and pecked her forehead.He made her wear the necklace,long chain and ear rings giving occasional pecks.She moaned softly.


He kissed her knuckles and made her wear bangles and chuda.She had the natural blush seeing him so naughty and dutifully putting the jewellery on her.


Then he sat on his knees and came near her front waist.he took an belly chain and kissed her front waist for which she moaned and put it around her soft waist.She was weak in her knees now.But Maan made her sit on the stool and took her feet where he put golden anklets.





He softly kissed her ankles and stood and let her do the make up.She put foundation cream and she dint add rosy glow to her cheeks and she was blushing profusely.Shaped her almond eyes with kajal,eye liner and mascara.Put some light pink lip stick and stuck a small round bindi which made her complete.

She turned to Maan and asked excitedly,"How am looking?"

Maan said with dark glare,"Sexy!"

Geet blushed furiously when he gave that remark and exited her room.She blushed profusely and sat there waiting for Panditji's word.Here Maan wore a beautiful sherwani which matched Geet's lehenga.He was happy to get Geet in her life.


Maan came to mandap first and sat to do havan.When the ash air went into his mouth he started to cough unknowingly and Rano and Geet's family got panic.

Rano asked worriedly,"What happened son?U r coughing like anything!"

Maan immediately said,"Mom,calm down!Nothing happened to me and please stop being scared of that man.Am not accustomed to the havan air that's why am coughing but i will get adjusted.Stop blaming urself and Geet for everything wrong happens here.Calm down,i will get accustomed to that!"

Rano who was panicked sighed.She was overwhelmed to get Maan as her son-in-law.She kissed his forhead and sat on the mandap when panditji called Geet.She came to the mandap and Maan looked up and saw around her cautiously while he was mesmerised in her.He noticed she was cautious and nodded dismissively and sighed thinking till he get married to Geet and lead his lifetime fully and peacefully till then Geet and her family wont believe.He dint say anything while Geet glanced him and blushed furiously seeing her teasing smirk.She was indeed beautiful.

She sat beside him and panditji said to stand for jaimala.Maaneet stood and there was a competition that who will put the garland first.Maan first put it but she cant able to put her garland to him as he was taller than her.Geet pouted cutely and stood in tip toe still she cant reach.She jumped but still she cant reach then she got tired and showed her big brown eyes.Maan who was enjoying her plight melted seeing her cute stare.He bent down and she put the garland.Everyone wolf-whistled seeing Maan bowing in front of her and teased that he will become joru ka ghulam.Dadi smiled seeing his love towards her.Then Maan put mangalsutra and then sindhoor to her forehead partition.


Then he made her wear toe rings


Then they stood for pheras.Maaneet promised their 7 promises and sat back for further ceremony.Guests came and wished the couple and they took blessings from Khurana and Handa family.

Precap-Suhaagraat? ya Geet's 3rd semester medical exams preparation?😉😆😆😆


PART 27

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Edited by geetsrir.maan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow me first!😊 thanks 4 updating! Terrific update! Dev angry nt he will stay der until Maaneet r married! Geet worried tht Dev will arrive n destroy everything! Maan assures her! Maan undresses n dresses his bride! Maan controls himself! Geet looking gorgeous! MAan looking handsome! Maaneet married! update soon! superbly written! terrific precap
Edited by khwaishfan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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after a long gap awesome update diii
maaneet got married
n maan ne bade pyar se apni dulhaniya ko sajaya
dev pe hasi aaeing mujhe but sabse jada on the person who was saying
that dailouge
for fun i have kiddnapped u
waiting for next as precap is damn interesting
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Posted: 11 years ago
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finally maneet r married
dev kidnapped
did maan did it
nice part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome part maaneet are married yipee waiting for the precap
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful update!!!Finally Maaneet are married😃 Dev kidnapped by Maan😛 Precap😉 waiting for the next update

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