MG SS-Paying Guest (Chp 5 on pg 24)

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hello beautiful peoplešŸ¤—
Asmita here 😊
starting a brand new short story
here's the

Prologue
Geet entered the hall room with two heavy suitcase.She was unable to walk properly due to its weight so she kept it on the floor and sat on the sofa then looked she looked around the room with awe."It is soo big!looks like they are rich but then why do they need a paying guest?" Dadi replied from behind,"Yes its needed because I want someone to tlk to me." Geet was startled.As she turned to face dadi she tripped and fell on the ground breaking the vase kept o the tea table.
Dadi hurried towards her and helped to get up.Then asked one of the servants to get water for her. Geet panicked but Dadi calmed her down and made her sit. After almost gulping the water Geet said,"I am so sorry.Actually I am like this nothing goes right with me." Dadi smiled and replied,"Don't worry.I am not at all angry.It was an accident." Geet sighed with relief.
Then Geet asked,"But you did not mention the amount of money I need to pay." Dadi said,"You don't need to pay anything.Actually this house is so big and I don't have any one to talk to." She sighed then continued with excitement,"But now that you have come I think we will have fun together." Geet gave a huge smile and nodded not knowing that what was in store for her.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh another new one!
Nice liked this geet more cute n clumsy!šŸ˜†
Dadi ka intro b acha tha..
Waiting for maan!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice prologue dear waiting for part 1 nd maaneet meeting
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Congrates
its awesme
waiting 4 next
con soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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another ss wowww...
nice prologue...
geet paying guest but no paying šŸ˜†
dadi only wants someone to talk with...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome!!!! Please continue soon...😊
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nyc concept...
waiting egarly for story to unfold...
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a clumsy but cute Geet? Nice start.
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Nice prologue
Continue soon
Waiting for next update
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Nice prologue
Geet chalti phirthi disasteršŸ˜†
Eagerly waiting for the update

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