MG~ SS~The Torment-Thread-10- UPDATED Pt 77 / Pg 110/ 3rd May ........ - Page 25

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: goldenmoon

nice update...
maan won the award...
RM ke sath achha hua...
all wanted to party...
but geet sath jane se mana kar diya...
oh no ab maan gussa hokar FH chala gaya...
geet bhi sath me gayi maan ko manane



😆😆 Hi dona,,, how r u dear...?🤗
Dona i saw a diff id pic with ur name in Hall of fame grp..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Geet itni chhoti si baat ko kyun bada bana rahi hai
when she had come across so much hurdles then why she is giving importance tio those unwanted people
I Hope everything will be fine soon in the FH after all rain hain Maan ki Tai-chi hai aur Msaaneet ahele hain bheegi bheegi raat me
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsom updt
loved it
maan is angry ongeet

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Posted: 11 years ago
maan left to fh as geet refused to come to party with him
maan is right at his place .for how long she is going to hide and dadima and maan r also with her to support her
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Posted: 11 years ago
sab ka mehnat safal and maan got the award👏

uff maan aur uska gussa... but is baar acha hain , ki gussa kiya...

dono akele akele F par... sunsaan raat... tez baarish...

kya set up hain... kya hone waala hain😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Fabulous update with fantabulous pics.
waiting for the next update like crazy.
please update fast. 😊 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
hiii babbie.. hw r u???😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mauaa

hiii babbie.. hw r u???😃



😃😃 OMG!!!!!!!!! Mauaa kiddo i just leave a msg on lakshu's post asking about u dear..
i missed u a lot ...
welcome back kiddo,🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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For banner credit goes to my dear Priya...🤗

Prologue...


She was for him , but he denied her in an illusion . He forced her and she embraced death for his happiness . she was Selfless ,pure and mature. He was selfish , stained and immature. What would happen when his illusion disappeared and he would face the bitter truth .

The sorrow of losing what we love is nothing to the torment of having it present but denied us .



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.






Part - 73


Maan was shocked to see Geet's driver there at this time ,, it was eve nd d weather was not well ,,d driver informed him that Geet Ma'am was here nd waiting for him outside .

This was another shock for him ,, Geet is here alone ,, but why ? He checked d phone nd there wr numerous call from Dadima , Manish nd Geet ,, after coming here he put his phone on silent nd didn't give any heed to check d calls in his anger nd dismay ,, lekin Geet yahan kaise ? hope sab theek ho ?

He sent d driver back nd came out ,, confused nd tense ,, all his anger vanished nd now only Geet was in his mind , he searched her in lobby nd driveway but she was not there then he scanned d lawn nd find her there drenching in d rain ,, his heart ached nd cursed himself that again he troubled her in his anger .

Geet too was waiting for him there in rain ,, remembering d days of that dreadful day ,, how time had changed in few months ,, that day he forced her to deny for marriage nd refused her ,, left her to face d worst , but destiny brought them together nd today he was forcing her to come with her ,, ready to accept her in front of all ,, did so many efforts to make her happy ,, she cd hide d reality from d world but not from d god who is forcing them to walk on a same path ,, who tied them in a relation ,, she cd deny that relation but couldn't change d reality ,, d reality which her heart wanted to accept but mind refused bcoz of some allegations ,, her eyes burned on thinking why their life became a game ,, a puzzled but nothing was coming in her mind to solve these complications ,, she can't move back bcoz he nd Dadima wr accepting her wholeheartedly nd she couldn't see them broken .. fir kya karu ?

Maan came close to her from behind with thudding heart nd called her name ... Geet.

She turned nd looked at him ,, both wr struggling with their feelings nd emotions ,, one was broken nd other was guilty ,, one wanted to grab his lost happiness nd other was running away in her dismay , but both knew that now their path is same ,, only a single step cd change their life .

He took that step sensing her turmoil ,, he opened his arms for her nd she threw herself in his arms in a swift move ... Geet ,,, he secured her in d citadel of his strong arms ,, her ultimate destination * both wr drenching in d rain feeing each other's existence for them ,, their hearts wr exchanging their desires beating on same pace ,, he placed his warm wet lips on her forehead which melted her entirely.

Love is nothing without action .

Trust is nothing without proof.

Regret is nothing without change.

They remained like this for long quenching their thirst ,, he parted a lil nd looked at her ,, she was calm but still confused may be struggling with her changing feelings nd commotion in her heart for him * Maan wrapped his arm around her shoulders nd brought her inside ,, he made her sit in a chair nd kneeled in front of her holding her cold hands in his ,, rubbed them a lil then cupped her face to make her look at him ,,, Geet * her lips trembled to say something but he stopped her placing his finger on her lips ,,, sshhh ,, kuch matt kaho ,, I know it's very hard for u feel nd to accept ,, Geet ,, relax ,, first go nd change ur wet clothes ,, i'm going to bring coffee for u ,, there is cupboard nd select something to wear for time being ,, he brought her near d cupboard ,, opened that for her nd left from there .

He came in kitchen nd ordered many things to servant for diner ,, he himself prepared coffee for both nd came back in d room ,, Geet was still in washroom ,, he placed d try on table nd burned some woods in d fireplace for some warmth ,, he took out his track pant nd vest from cupboard nd went to change in side room ,, when he came back Geet was standing near d window in his white shirt nd she wrapped her white dupatta like a wrap-on skirt ,, her wet curls wr open ,, his heart skipped many beats seeing this serene beauty ,, he took a deep breath to calm his desires ,, came close to her nd stood just behind her ,, she sensed his presence nd turned her face to see him ,, their eyes met ,, there was confidence nd assurance in his eyes , but he find fear nd confusion in hers .

He held her from upper arms nd made her sit on d settee ,, forwarded her a hot brewing coffee mug ,, have it Geet .

Geet: talk to Dadima 1st .

Maan: hmmm.

He called Dadima nd said sorry to her ,, he said that he wd be there in d morning nd Geet is here nd fine * Dadima got some relief after talking to him nd inwardly thanked to Geet .

Both finished their coffee silently ,, Maan came nd sat near her nd held her hands .

Maan: I'm sorry ,, I troubled u nd Dadima ,, but why u came here alone ?

Geet looked at him angrily: u didn't leave any other option ,, ku kerty ho tum essa ?

Maan: tum bhi to kitna jidd kerti ho .

Geet tried to get up but Maan stopped her ,, nahi Geet aaj nahi ,, don't try to run away ,, we need to talk ,, he made her sit very close to her ,, she shuddered ,, his closeness was warming her body nd she was feeling an unknown sensation in her though it was giving her a pleasant feel but her thudding heart was fearing to accept these ,, Maan was also facing d hard time but he didn't want to lose this opportunity to talk her .

Maan: Geet , we both know d reality ,, our in nd out ,, we can't change anything ,, Geet i'm not forcing u accept me ,, I know it can't be ,, i'm ur sinner ,, I imposed everything on u but trust me Geet now I want ur happiness ,, I want to give u ur life ,,Geet kisi ki nazar bhi mai tum per nahi girne dunga ,, koi tumhe kuch nahi kaha sakta ,, I promise u ,, bas ek bar mera hath tham ker ess darr se bahar aa jao Geet ,, kya tumhe meri baton mei jara bhi sacchai nazar nahi aati ? kya etne dine ke sath mei tumhe mujh per jara bhi bharosa nahi ? Geet apne liye ,, hum sab ke liye mujhe ek chance to de sakti ho na ,, bolo na Geet.

She looked in his deep confident eyes ,,there wr so many emotions trust ,love ,care nd determination ,, she nodded in a yes ,, he beamed nd gave a pack on her forehead saying .. Thanks .

Geet : ek condition per .

Maan: kya ?

Geet: don't do this again ,, how cd u leave us like this ?

Maan: sorry , I promise .

Geet: last time .

Maan: OK , my princess nd thanks.

Precap - night cont... .



Part - 74


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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago

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