~GUROOR~maaneet SS pt11 last pt pg69/76 apr24 - Page 46

Thanks dii for posting lines in your update
This is what I am saying in my every comment
If Maan was so lost in his damn business
Why didn't Geet take any step to save their relation?

Ek bhatka hu tu dusra hii tu usse raah dikhata hai
Shyad issi chote si jazbe ko log pyaar ka naam dete hai
Jaante hai unki ruh ek dusre ke ahsaas ko
Phir samdur mai dobne ka fasiala karte hai !!!!

Jab tere kadam dagmagne lage
Maine bhi umeed chode dii
Tujhse smbhal tu naa saki..
Kudh bhi mohtaz hu gayi !!!!

Ager dooba tha vo mujhse sab kuvh dene mai
Kuch isse kader..
Mai kyu uske interzaar ka rasta dekhti rahi
Ruh hai vo meri or mai matam manti rahe gayi !!!!!

Mai guroor uska thi
Vo guroor mera tha..
Waqt nai dono ke hii ke guroor
Ko Gumnaam bana diya !!!!

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I m really sorry if my comment hurt you.. just my feelings.

Please don't leave his mother. I want some punishment for het also

Originally posted by: mannu_minnie

I m sorry. but really i didn't like the ending. i just don't know but something was missing for me. may be Pooja realizing her mistake. was it just about his guroor. wat about Geet? the moment his guroor was broken, story ended but still it didn't end.

He even blamed Geet for his mistakes.

mana ki main... I lost myself in work, tum tho mujhe rook sakti thi

I could have never denied u.

geet it was easy for me to lose to that model in that hotel that day. I was drunk & she literally threw herself at me. & trust me I was all time low missing u.

& I know for matter of fact that u will forgive me even then. We were not bound by all those things

he really lost it to that model????

I m really sorry if my comment hurt you.. just my feelings.

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shocking to see last ud

Awsme
Did not thought u vl end
And thought it vk take few more parts
Love it
Wann see epi
And abt pooja mk mother also
Plz give one

i don't know how came i missed this story of yours i always read all of you work very nice story

😲 don't tell me the story ended