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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mayurmaaneet

omg how could i miss this.. read all 5.. now im finally getting ur ff.. lol.. cont soon.. now lets see where thos dhoom dhadaka leads to and how maan and geet fall in love.. well maan babu was already fully talli over geet.. lol.. cont soon hun with the next chapter..

Chalo late his sahi, atleast you read it!
Happy with that!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: LILY111144

awww BB kyaa style hei,,,,

agle jhagre per fir milenge,,,,😆😆
chatptee stry lov it,,,,😳

Thanks Di!😳
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Posted: 11 years ago


PART 7. LET THE FIGHTS BEGIN!

Maan Singh Khurana was happy today. And why wouldn't he be? Geet Handa was coming into his house to live with them and as she had two years of college left which meant she will be staying with them for two years. Yes, Maan Singh Khurana was very happy today. But of course, he did not show his happiness to everybody. In front of others, his face wore a grumpy expression expressing that he was not happy with this new addition to his house. Already he had an argument with his Daadima on this topic, just so that his Daadima would not start dreaming about his and Geet's marriage. Of course, all the while fighting, he was praying to Babaji inwardly that his plan should not fall apart because of his own need to maintain his image. Daadima should not listen to his words and send Geet back home. Luckily for him, his Daadima was a very stubborn woman and refuse to bow down to the whims of Maan Singh Khurana. So yes, Maan Singh Khurana was very very happy today. OK! Now that we have established that Maan was very very happy, lets move on to the story!

As Maan walked towards his room, he heard his Daadima call his name. He turned around to see his Daadima smile at him.

"Maan bete! Humaara ek kaam kar dijiye?"

"Ji boliye Daadima!"

"Beta! Geet aaj bus se aa rahi hai!"

"Toh?"

"Toh hum soch rahe the ki aap jaakar unhein le aayein!"

"Kya?"

"Haan! Woh kya haina beta, Dev bete jaane waale the lekin last moment ek client ne meeting ke liye unhein bula liya toh woh nahi jaa paayenge! Toh kya aap jaa sakte hain?"

Maan felt like he was the luckiest man on the earth. Pick Miss. Jhagdaalu from the bus station? Anytime! But outwards he looked at Daadima angrily, "Main? Uss sir dard ko pick up karne jaaun? Ghar ke drivers kya sab mar gaye hain?"

"MAAN! Woh bechari pehli baar akeli Dilli aa rahi hai, aur aap use lene driver ko bhejenge? Hum kuch nahi sunna chaahte! Aap jaa rahe hain! Hum aapko nahi bhejna chaahte lekin humaare ghutno mein dard hai warna hum hi chale jaate!"

"Lekin Daadima..."

"This is my order, Mr. Khurana! You are going to pick up Geet and that's it!"

Daadima turned around and stormed away. The moment Daadima vanished from his eye sight, Maan gave a broad grin. Waah Geet ke Babaji! Khud hi mera raasta saaf kar diya? Thank you! Geet Handa! I am coming!

"Bas yahi din dekhne the Babaji! Uss Khadus Khurana ke ghar jaake raho aur roz uski daant suno!", Geet grumbled as she waited at the bus station for someone to pick her up.

"Ek toh shaadi mein baar baar takraaye, upar se mere Saptapadi bhi miss karwa diya aur phir...", she trailed off as she remembered being consoled by Maan and hugging him. She smiled softly, "Waise itne bure bhi nahi hai woh..." She again trailed off as she remembered the phone call he made few days back. She narrowed her eyes in anger, "Nahi! Ek number ke Khadus Khurana hai woh! Kaise behki behki baatein kar rahe the! Hey Babaji! Uss Khadus ko mujhse door rakhna!"

"Mujhe yaad kar rahi thi?", Geet heard someone speak right beside her ear and she shrieked and looked at the perpetrator. There stood Maan Singh Khurana smirking at her. She narrowed her eyes at him and he winked at her and walked away while waving his hand at her to follow him. She looked at him incredulously and then at her bags lying near her feet. Who will help her in carrying them? While climbing the bus from her village her family had helped her and while climbing down, her fellow passengers helped her but who will help her now? She looked at Maan in shock.

After few steps, when Maan realized that Geet was not following him, he turned around, "GEET! Aise statue banke kyon khadi ho?"

Geet looked at her bags in dismay and then at him, "Mere bags kaun uthaayega?"

Maan glared at her, "Coolie samjha hai kya? Khud uthaao aur chalo!"

Geet looked at him in horror and then faced the sky, closed her eyes and prayed to her Babaji that she did not collapse while carrying the bags. After praying for few seconds, she looked down at her bags only to see nothing near her feet. Her eyes widened and she looked up only to see Maan carrying the bags away. She put her hands on her hips and frowned; Yeh kaise insaan hain? Kabhi ekdum khadus toh kabhi ek dum sweet! Babaji! Mujhe bacha lena! Yeh do saal bade hi khatarnak hone waale hain!

"GEET! CHALO!", Maan roared and Geet gulped and followed him.

"Daadima! Is ladki ko bol do ki apna mooh band rakhe aur apni bak bak apne paas rakhe!", Maan Singh Khurana shouted as he entered the house with Geet in tow.

"Hey Babaji! Maine aisa kya bol diya jo aap itne ghussa hogaye! Sahi naam rakha hai maine aapke liye! Khadus Khurana!"

"KYA KAHAA?", Maan turned around and glared at her and Geet slapped her hands on her mouth and shook her head. Hey Babaji! Lagta hai maine zor se bol diya!

Maan was smiling inwardly at her antics but outwardly he maintained his anger. The first few minutes of their car ride, Geet was quiet. But after a while, her excitement towards her College got her rambling about how she was excited about her College and how she was happy that Daadima gave her this opportunity. While inwardly Maan was enjoying her bak bak and was cataloging each of her words into his memory, outwardly he kept a stern image. He did not want to damage his image, right?

As Maan continued to glare at Geet while Geet looked at him worriedly, Daadima heaved a sigh. If this was how the next two years were going to pass in this house, then I am taking Sanyaas!

Next update: Maan cooks up another plan!

An important announcement, this story in the Dh Dh series narrates the journey of Maaneet from Dh Dh events to their marriage, and as Geet was 18 when Dh Dh happened and she was 23 when she got married to Maan, this means this story will cover the span of five years!

Hence there will be many time leaps in this story!

Thought you should know!

Buddy me if you want PMs!

Thanks, take care and have fun,

Kalpana

P.S. As usual, I read your reviews daily, but they will be liked or liked and replied slowly!

Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
yeh maan bhi naa so cute
he is getting so excited about her coming to be with them for 2 years
beta agar dadi ko pata chala naa toh aap gaye
but it seems he has remedy for that too
made too loook as if he isnt happy with her coming here
when nothing could be further from the truth right
but yes hope it dont backfire on him
his plans do sometimes right
but thank god dadi didnt let it backfire on him
and so maan is very very happy bunny sorry had to say that
but am sure geet isnt that happy to be living with him
parr phir NT hai naa right
dadi smiling huh
does this mean shamat for maan
nope not shamat for maan
but even better for him
hey he will be the first one to see her right
ahhh thanx to dev meetins maneet meet first
kya baat hai
but of course maan will wanna show some attitude before he goes to pick geet right
and i was right
mann mein laddoo phoot rahe hain parr MSK apna attitude kaise nahin dikhayenge
dadi you have to love her
she can make him do just about anything
but then he does wanna do it
parr bhaav toh khayenge naa MSK ki rep ka jo sawaal hai
dekha ktine khush ho rahe hain parr dikhayenge nahin
aww i feel bad for geet
see i knew it she isnt happy about living in his house well why would she
this is so funny
sorry dear khadus has all planning to be nearer to you
no way is he gonna let you go
plus he has planned for all this
how will he let his planning go to waste
she accepted at least that he isnt completely khadus thats something right
nahin aap ko nahin padosi ko
flirting again are we
haww help bhi naa karri
bechari jaan itna sab kaise uthayegi
yeh maan bhi naa
geet ki toh kismat hi phooti hai ji
ufff now she gotta carry her luggage
oh thank god he took her stuff
warna inki toh
but she is right
these two years are gonna be something for sure
bina chillaye inhe chain nahin
dara kyun raha hai be
kya maan itna kyun bhadak rahe hain aap geet parr
aisa bhi ka kya diya iss bachi ne
did she call him khadus on his face
hell yes she did good one dear
dude what else will she call you
bahut badiya yeh maan aa sach mein tedi cheez hai
parr apni geet bhi kam nahin
bhaad mein jaaye aap ki image
over na karr dena maan puttar
dadi you cant take any kind of sanyas
then you will miss lots of things
uff dadi yeh toh inka plan hai
kya baat hai maan sahi jaa rahe hain aap
keep it up
this had me laughing of course
lord save KM waasi from maneet
more planning ehh maan
well he will have to right
cheers for pm
Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
excellent update! Uff this Maan! He is waiting eagerly 4 Geet! He wants to go n fetch het bt out up such a drama! Maan pretends to b indifferent! Geet arrives nw wonders abt Maan n the weird call! She is thinking abt his behaviour! Maan is der! Maan js walks ahead! Geet is still behind as he has her bags! Maan did nt offer to help! She asks abt her bags! Maan asks her if she thinks he is a coolie! Geet stunned! She prays to her babaji! She mummers abt Maan! Maan starts the fight again! Maan screams! She follows! Maan enters n shouts at dadi bat Geet! Maan thinks abt the car ride! Geet was so excite abt college! Maan ws so happy hearing her bak bak! Bt nw has to maintain his image! So drama begins! Lol! dadi assesses the situation in front of her! update soon! superbly written! thanks 4 da pm 😊
Edited by khwaishfan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice part..Maan's plan working..Geet in Delhi for two years.. Now what Maan do that geet fall for him..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awsome update
maan must be doing dance bt show nai karna
I m liking this concept
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Posted: 11 years ago
Maan is such a gud actor. 😆
nice update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
maan happy geet coming stay his house dadi told to maan bick up geet maaneet scence cute and funny lovely update
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
maan acts so well infront of outside world
aur ander hi ander khush😆
loved the update allot!!!!

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