THE LOCKET (21) MG FF, link to new thread pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 70

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Posted: 11 years ago
You are almost caught up dear😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hmmm seems as if maneet were contemplating temple marriage
Guys its not that your wedding is too far away
But yes this distance does seem long

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chavvi16

Hmmm seems as if maneet were contemplating temple marriage

Guys its not that your wedding is too far away
But yes this distance does seem long

😆 Avi likes to get Maan in trouble..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Great job eagerly waiting for more
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Posted: 11 years ago
😲
ahem ahem .. can i take some time to comment on this update Agnes????

mujhe.. ishhh.. ill comment later 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part-91
brilliant update
geet was already to loose last thread of sanity but unaware of relation between a husband & wife
but maan patiently explain everything to her. i think it is necessary for couples who r getting married, they should talk to each-other about every aspect, change which their life is going to take after marriage
daadi ka CID brain phirse kaam pe lag gya

Part-92
update full of chandan & poonam. I loved it
finally finally they r moving ahead in their realtion
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz

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ahem ahem .. can i take some time to comment on this update Agnes????

mujhe.. ishhh.. ill comment later 😆

😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Avi
Its amazing how u give such importance to all ur characters equally in the story. It was brilliant and I loved it. I dint know reading story apart from maaneet and devtara. Eagerly waiting for ur next updates.
Tc
Abinaya
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Posted: 11 years ago

TEASER

Happy Birthday Dona🥳

"Main sab solve kardunga Giit. Outhouse mein aa jao, two minutes ke liye", he tried to hold her tighter but she wriggled out.

"Na Baba na! Aap ke two minutes mein acche se jaanti hu! Ab toh mujhe ghar bhi chodna padega", she said innocently "Beeji was telling Daadima ki shaadi se pehle Geet ko apne ghar jaana chahiye, warna log kya kahege".

That put a dark cloud onto the happy occasion for him. She would not go anywhere far from him. He would make sure of it.

"Sirf do minute Giit. Tumhare liye kuch laya hu, jo tumhe dena chahta hu. Please outhouse aa jao. Everyone is busy in the party. Koi nahi dekhega. Main Dev ko bolta hu. He will cover for us. Pehle tum jao. Tumhare liye gift bed pe hai", his sincere words and the appeal in his eyes melted her. After all it was her Maan jaan. How could she deny him?

***

He climbed the steps two at a time to the outhouse bedroom. He had been waylaid by some guests and was a few minutes late. He hoped she was not angry.

He did not expect that she would wear his present but there she stood. Her eyes conveyed how much she loved the saree. His gaze did a sweep from top to bottom. If there was perfection on earth, it was his Giit. His dream come true.

She watched the way he was looking at her. Dressing up in something he had gotten for her made her proud. Haiyee! If he kept looking at her like this, she would not ever leave the outhouse. Her cheeks flushed with her thoughts as she stole glances at him.

Ankhiyon Ke Jharokhon Se Maine Dekha Jo Saanware

from the window of my eyes, when I saw you, O dear one


Tum Dur Nazar Aaye Badi Dur Nazar Aaye

You seemed very far, so very far


Bandh Karke Jharokhon Ko Zara Baithee Jo Sochne

when I closed windows of my eyes and sat thinking


Mann Mein Tumhi Muskaye Man Mein Tumhi Muskaye

I saw you smiling in my heart, I saw you smiling


Ankhiyon Ke Jharokhon Se

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Song requested by Sheen
Video credit to Priya
Thanks everyone for the birthday wishes!🤗
Edited by dqno1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
hum bhi yaha se nahi jayenge...
is pal maine kahi kho jayenge...😛

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