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ramarora

@ramarora

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Posted: 11 years ago

#261

thanku so much for this beautiful romantic update
geet ki yaaden taaza ho gayi
waiting to read more

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#262

Originally posted by: mannu_minnie
that was besharmi ki heights. 😆

nikal du?

the challenge for me is always in painting the picture without too much detail😆

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priya

@priya111111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#263

edited my comment avi

banner tho badi achi banrahi hai

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shruti

@gshruti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#264

"Are you on pills Giit?"

"Haan""Dr. Sid ne diye na🤣

awesome update dear

maan giving her lessons☺️

i wish ye chapters kabhi khatam hi na ho😃

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Muskan

@muskanp

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+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#265

killer pay back

👏👏

I loved how beautifully u got the pay back keeping geet in character

simply loved it

hats off to ur crativity

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sohni_kudi_111

@sohni_kudi_111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#266

sry 4 d late comment!

D previous update was amazing with the way maaneet spent time with one another! d way maan controlling was soo thoughtful!

u know, maaneet's love story is so beautiful n I always wondered did such love story exist for real! N guess wat it does!

Recently, a very renowned politician n lawyer, Karpal Singh passed away n his love story with his wife is indeed so beautiful as well!

he saw his wife first when he was 16 n she was 8 n he fell for her but waited for her till she completed schooling first n then he approached her but d 1st thing he told her was I want to meet your father and ask yr hand in marriage!

now back to yr this recent update...

this update was beautiful n fulll of passion! d way u described their dance... uff marjawa...

d way geet wanted maan to open up to her n maan controlling his needs n wanting...just no words for it!

Ab tujhe hi kuch karna padega Giit, I tell myself. Warna Baba Maan Singh Khurana will be miserable and so will you.
I am a Maan addict now, a Maan deewani. Without his loving, his naughtiness, his besharmi, I feel bereft. Life seems incomplete, like there is no spice in life, no colors in it.

loved this dialogue a lot... geet has definitely progressed well! actually d whole part had me grinning all d way!

lols... mentioning SRK at such a moment was epic! n i have to agree to maan's comment about SRK's abs. n then came salman...

geet's seduction made hell loose for maan... wonder when she's in full form n released, maan ka kya haal hoga... but must say geet was successful to bring maan back into d mood!

wow...maan ectually wanted to celebrate SR before wedding n geet's answer must have been like a bucket of cold icy water on his desires!

Right now she is in kindergarden and I am on graduate level.

this made me burst out loud! god... graduate? more like PHD!
D book was part hilarious!

the whole was hilarious! thoroughly enjoyed it! but wat happened during d trailer...??? :P

dev and maan's plan was awesome! maan became an actor! he definitely deserves an award for his hardwork frm trailer, explaining facts of life to geet n being sneaky!

daadi is sooo coolll

now waiting for your next maaneet thud!!!

all in all, this update was a total package of entertainment

Edited by sohni_kudi_111 - 11 years ago

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#267

wow wat a update..oh god.. u made me speechless.. thanku for giving a very lovely heart touching update.. just one word BEAUTIFUL.. yes its beautiful poem..i felt a feather caressing my heart..

wow lovely emotional touching cute update.te way geet ki resolution to beak my maan ki wall and bring my old naughty maan was lovely cute.. geet making my maan to feel jealous with srk and salu and his gussa was lovely cute..so she is seducing him without knowing wat effect she is having on him.. song selection and they pictiurization was lovely touching..te way geet ki innocent seduce making my maan to crush her and but wen he asked abt pills oh god me too fall on te ground seeing geet ki innocent speech, bechare my maan too thought for a sec tat his geet became matured but all his thought went in vain wen she said abt her infection pills, was lovely cute..maan babu u have to teach her everything, but u so bad u read everything without ur geet😉 😉..te way my maan laughing making his geet to pout and wen she decide to ask pinky his possessive was lovely cute.. te way geet lost in her speech and my maan in her taking her sari to drown her in his passion was lovely cute ..te way khuranas bros ki plan, but naughty dadi gusseing abt his devils grandson was lovely cute.. te way geet was happy feeling my maan and they naughtyness was lovely..i love te update so much..

Edited by Desigirls12 - 11 years ago