Mission Impossible:The Don n The Diva part 55 updated

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APARNA TAMBE

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

nice

both should come to know each others motive clearly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

I don't think Maan is Mafia Leader or any Don...he is doing this because of blackmailing by some person...he is pawn in this game by some person...that person who is real Don or Mafia Leader is blackmailing him in the name of his family safety...that is why he confessed to Geet so easily...Mafia Don itna kamzoor nahin hota ki ek baar ki dhamki mein hi itna darr jaaye...is he more concerned for Geet than Daadima, Dev?...if his near and dear ones lives are in so much danger then why he is sticking with daadima and Dev when he is not even their blood relation...he could have left them like Geet...

very interesting update...

thanx for pm...

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zaara2212

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

oh gosh so maan is the don, but why is geet thinking of making him confess
i am sure this breej and vikram have something in common
oh gosh my heart went out for maan

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punam2712

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

FOR HER SAFETY MAAN CONFESSED THE TRUTH TO GEET

BUT WILL THAT MAKE HER GO AWAY

HOPE SHE CONFIDES IN HIM TOO AND THEN BOTH CAN TACKLE THEIR ENEMIES TOGETHER

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maya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Mission Impossible : The Don N The Diva

Part 30

Geet came to the mansion fully wet her mind was fully occupied with Maan, she was feeling confused, she don't know whether to feel happy nor sad, she don't know whether to count it as success or not, she went to her room and got refreshed and came out and stood there looking outside the window, "Baba ji, why, why it has to be someone like Maan sir," Geet asked looking at the sky, "why he had to be an don, why he,"

" The Man who loves his family so much, who cares for his staffs and who does so many good things to the people, a man who had build so many hospitals, schools, old age homes, child care, to help people, and most of all, who is so gentle to an girl, like me, he is my boss, even if he had crossed his limits with me, it wouldn't have caused any problem for him, yet he stood by his limits, even when I was fully out of control," Geet thought feeling something for Maan,

"He is such a gem, then why he had to be a bad guy, why, he loves me, truly and I can see and feel that love and concern he have for me, yet, he is an bad guy, under world don, doing something illegally, and he himself confessed it, what's happening," Geet thought frustrated, " I don't care anything now, even about myself, I will make him confess his illegal doings to the law and will even take his side and say his good deeds and make him get a less punishment and will make him live an normal life," Geet decided as she sat in her room,

Geet had no mind to go to the Mansion or to search for the proofs; she felt that it won't be necessary, as she decided to make Maan himself confess up somehow, Geet waited up in her room, waiting for Maan, as she knew for sure, that Maan would come up to check her up, whether she is gone or not, so she wait for him, that day went up but Maan didn't show up, Geet was called for Dinner in the Khurana Mansion and Geet went there, feeling nervous to see Maan but Maan was not there, Dadi maa said he didn't show up yet from the morning,

Geet was scared for him yet she kept her hopes high, the next day too started up in the Khurana Mansion yet Geet didn't see Maan, she refreshed up and went to the mansion herself and found that Maan didn't come home yesterday night and everyone was worried, "Geet he just called and said he will not come home and nothing more, did he say anything to you dear," Dadi maa asked worried, "No Dadi maa," Geet said feeling upset herself, "ok dear, come on have your breakfast," Dadi maa called her, "No Dadi maa, I am not feeling hungry, will have after wards in the office canteen, sorry Dadi maa," Geet said and went away from there,

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Geet got ready and rushed to the office, hoping to see Maan there atleast, but he was not there too, she asked Adi and Adi too said he don't know, Geet was feeling like yelling out loud due to the frustration, Maan silence was killing her, it turned afternoon and Geet was turning mad without seeing him, "Baba ji, where did he go, where, and why is he doing this," Geet thought looking at the clock,

"That it, I can't think any more, I lost my patience," Geet said and Called Breej, "Hello Geet," Breej's voice sounded excited, "what happened Geet, I even thought to call you, what happened yesterday after I left from the park, did MSK saw me, did he ask anything," Breej asked eagerly, "No sir, Maan sir, didn't see you, or he didn't ask anything else," Geet said slowly, "Well Geet I got scared seeing MSK entering the park with his body guards, well did you find anything," Breej asked, "No sir, nothing, as I told you in the park, I didn't get any information from his room," Geet said,

"Ok Geet, but what was MSK doing in the park, while there was an auction there," Breej asked doubted, "I don't know sir, but now I called you for an favor" Geet said slowly, "what is it Geet," Breej asked, "Oh, your guys are following Maan sir right, can you say where he is now, and is he ok," Geet asked shocking Breej, "Oh, Maan sir didn't come home yesterday and he is not in the office too, and after knowing about that Vikram's rivalry, I am bit scared," Geet said her mind,

Breej can feel Geet's tension and he was sure that Geet had fall for MSK totally, "Geet don't worry, will say about MSK soon, give me five minutes," Breej said and cut the call and Geet stood there holding the cell phone, the five minutes seems liked five months as she was counting the seconds, and as her mobile rang up, she was back alive, "Sir," she said jumping up, "Geet, MSK is fine and he is been in his private guest house, I will message you the address and don't worry I will keep an watch on Vikram's local guys moves too but you try to get the proof's Geet, please, we don't want to drag it any longer" Breej said and cut the call.

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"No, No, No, how is it possible," Vikram was roaring in his room, "Maan was out of the auction, and you said he came to the park, then how, how," Vikram yelled to his guys standing around him, "You saw Maan in the park right, you saw him right, then how come he had won the auction, without signing it, without begin there" Vikram yelled, "boss, it was raining heavily and yes we saw MSK in the park and only after that we called you and left," his guy said, "then how come MSK took part in the final phrase and won the auction" Vikram yelled,

Maan was on his bed, lying down in his alcoholic effect and thinking about his life and Geet, when his mobile rang up, Maan signed as he knew it would be Dadi maa or Dev, but as he looked at the display it showed private number, Maan thought for an minute and took the call, "Maan, feeling so happy ah," Vikram's voice made Maan vigilant, "Hello Vikram," Maan said with an grin and anger, "yes I am feeling happy as I got the diamonds," Maan said with a fake happiness, "Maan," Vikram yelled up,

"How foolish you are Vikram, you thought I would care for an simple employee and come and rescue her, leaving my diamond deal, you are stupid," Maan said with a grin, "but my boys saw you there," Vikram snapped back, "As boss as your guys, both foolish, I am not the only one who walks in to the park with a business attire and body guards, and anyways, thanks for telling me that I am getting close to an girl, now I had thrown her out of my life,"

"Now she had nothing to do with me and my life, and so I think you had to find someone else to trap me up, but Vikram I am telling you, instead targeting everyone around me, why don't you target me, kill me and finish your game, but no problem, I knew you don't have that kind of guts, so take care, and thanks for the thriller game," Maan said in his drugged state and cut the call, "Maan," Vikram shouted to up scaring the people around him, "I had enough, I can't lose any more," Vikram roared up,

"You are right Maan, why should I target someone else, Maan I have guts that no one else has, and I will show you that today," Vikram said, "Call our guys in Delhi, we are taking down that big fish today itself," Vikram said as he rushed away from his room,

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Geet waited till evening and called Dev, and asked whether Maan came home, but Dev said a no, "Enough, that's it, why is Maan sir, behaving like this, I need to find it, if he was that hurt because of keeping me away, he is that scared of his families safety, why can't he throw those bad things behind and lead an normal life, I had to ask what is bothering Maan sir, I need too," Geet thought as she took her bag and rushed away from the office,

Geet decided to meet Maan in his guest house, and so called and taxi, gave him the guest house address Breej sent her, Geet heart started to beat high as get got down in front of the guest house, she stopped for a minutes and thought why she is doing this, can't she wait till Maan calms himself and comes home, Geet was confused by her own feeling, "why is the thought of Maan sir being in pain is making me restless, why, may be because that he loves me truly and I am having an feel of guilt for lying to him," Geet reasoned her own feeling and stepped in,

Maan was walking to and fro in his room with a half filled drinks glass, he had being drinking from yesterday and was only semi conscious, he was scared to go home and find Geet gone away from his life, he could not bear that thought, but he was happy that she would be safe somewhere else and even more happy that her brother is alive to take care of her, and no more danger in her life by Vikram, "Ranveer will take of Geet so well, she had lived without me till now and she can live happily without me here after too," Maan thought as he sipped his hot drink up,

"Maan sir," Geet voice echoed up and Maan closed his eyes, "Her voice still lingers in my mind," Maan thought grinning up, "I will live with these memories of her forever," He thought with a smile, "Maan sir," Geet voice again hit his ears, "Maan sir, are you here," Geet voice was so clear and so near to be an dream or imagination, "Geet" Maan suddenly turned serious and rushed from his room from upstairs and looked down,

Geet was looking around and calling for him in the hall, Maan felt an sudden happiness in his heart as he saw Geet, "she is back," he thought but the next minute he realized, the danger is also back into her life, "why is she still around, why, I knew her heart can feel the truth about me and my love, is that what is stopping me, is she having some kind of feelings for me that's holding her here," Maan thought, "no, I had to get her away from me, by anymeans" Maan decided and went down,

"Geet," Maan yelled up as he saw Geet, and Geet looked at his anger face and it scared her abit, "Maan sir," she tried to smile abit, "What the hell are you doing here, why are you still in Delhi, didn't I ask you to go away from here, yesterday even," Maan yelled up looking away from her, scaring her up abit, Geet heart was stated to beat high as she was terrified by Maan's anger, Maan knew he had to break her heart to make her go away, and he decided to do so,

"Sir," Geet started up, "Enough Maan said," as he shouted up, "what do you want Geet, why are you not going away from me, even though I asked you to go, what do you want from me," Maan shouted up, freaking Geet more and Geet looked at him puzzled, "I know, I know, you want my money right, how much you need, tell me, I will give you everything, how much you need" Maan shouted and Geet nodded a no as she stepped back,

"Sir, please, I no need your money," Geet finally managed to say, "Then, then, what do you want," Maan asked getting close to her, Maan anger was too much to handle now, "sir, I will leave now," Geet said as she turned back, Maan knew Geet would come back and will not go away, if he leaves her like this, so Maan grabbed her hand and pulled her close, "where are you going Geet, tell me, what do you want," Maan asked as he got close to her and pressed her hand more in his hold,

Geet could feel the pain raising in her hand, as Maan crushed it up, "Sir, let me go," Geet pleaded her eyes filling up, "why Geet, why, my closeness bothering you now," Maan asked shocking Geet up, "when you didn't have any problem when I danced with you, when I hugged up, when I kissed you up, now what," Maan said as he pulled her close and tightened his grip even more, "sir, please," Geet pleaded in his burning closeness and Maan held her head and pushed it close to him,

Geet keep her hand on his chest and tried to push herself away from him, "I think I know what you want Geet, it's me, right, you want me, you want my closeness, right" Maan said as he held her head close to his face, "ok, let me make your desire fulfilled," Maan said and pulled her close and suddenly took her lips, in for an aggressive kiss, Geet was crying silently with her tears running down, she felt week in his strong hold, his hand was holding her head straight, Geet was powerless,

A small part of her shameless heart enjoyed this aggressive kiss of Maan and Maan anger and frustration and his weakness everything made his act even wilder, as his time went up, his anger reduced and his aggressive reduced and he was hurting himself enough by hurting her and he slowly pulled his lips from her, and he looked at her spoiled tear filled face and pushed her away, Maan was burning from head to heel in so much of emotions together, Anger, Frustration, pain, guilt everything was making him burn,

Geet was feeling hurt to the core, she was feeling disgusted, she couldn't believe what happened, she can't believe Maan acted like this and it was all she can bear, Geet looked at Maan who was looking away and then she walked slowly, she wasn't able to walk she was shivering and trembling, she stepped up slowly and went away and Maan looked at her vanishing away, and he knew for sure that she will go away from him now,

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Geet went to the mansion and to her room and she couldn't stop her tears, "enough I can't stay here anymore after this, I will discontinue this mission right now, no, I can't stay here with this kind of though in Maan sir's mind about me, no," Geet thought, she was so hurt not by Maan's behavior but by his thought about her, "how could he think like that about me, Baba ji, I lost it Baba ji, I lost it, I am quitting up," Geet said crying up and she took her dress and went to the bath room,

Geet came out after a few long minutes and packed her things and went away from the mansion without a word to anyone, Maan was burning in pain, his tears rolled down and he could bear it, Maan went to his room and removed his clothes and jumped into the shower, "Maan what you did would definitely have hurt her heart and feelings but now she will be safe Maan, it's for her safety, it's like an operation Maan, it' will be painful and the pain will be there with her for a few days but slowly she will be fine, she will forget me and lead an normal life" Maan said to himself, "now Geet will never come back to me, she will be safe,"

Maan came out of the shower and changed himself, he was feeling so restless and pained, and so he decided to go to his favorite place, the Dharga, his worship place, where all his pain was healed, Maan come out of his house and his body guards and driver stood ready, "Everyone be here, I will go alone, you guys go home and Rishi I will take the drive," Maan said getting the key from his driver and went away leaving his body guards and driver there,

Precap:

"Geet why are you doing this to me, just go away from me," Maan said in an pleading tone, "but sir," Geet started and Maan shook his head and walked away, rushing inside the crowd away from her and Geet followed him, "Maan sir," she called as she rushed up, Geet saw Maan walking fast and soon moved outside the crowd, "Baba ji," Geet prayed looking up and suddenly saw an man standing in the nearby building's roof with a riffle targeting Maan,

"Maan sir," Geet cried up but she was caught inside the crowd, "No, No," Geet screamed feeling terrified, "Maan sir," Geet screamed up finally, and everything there frozen up without any sound.. (on Thursday)

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 11 years ago

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hi thanks 4 da pm n intense emotional update! Maan is drinking! Vikram incensed! MAan lies to Vikram! Geet decides to search 4 evidence! She thinks abt Maan! Maan wants her to b safe! He thinks she has left! Geet lies to Breej! Maan rude to her! Geet hurt with his words n actions! interesting precap! Well written, update soon