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Posted: 11 years ago

ye kaisa ans hai😆😆
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Originally posted by: goldenmoon


ye kaisa ans hai😆😆


😆 statement change to ker diya dear..so welcome ..😃
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😆 statement change to ker diya dear..so welcome ..😃


haa dekh liya waise main pending parts par rahi hu part 32 tak hua hai😃
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For banner credit goes to my dear Priya...🤗


Prologue...


She was for him , but he denied her in an illusion . He forced her and she embraced death for his happiness . she was Selfless ,pure and mature. He was selfish , stained and immature. What would happen when his illusion disappeared and he would face the bitter truth .

The sorrow of losing what we love is nothing to the torment of having it present but denied us .



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.





Part - 53


Dadima knew that Maan had a soft corner for Geet but she too was hurt with his behaviour ,, 1st he filled her maang in his anger without thinking d result nd now showing his anger on her , though it was good that Geet became d part of d family but for Geet it was hard to accept ,, Maan's behaviour angered her more .

Dadima: Maan u can't force her like this ,,, she was already very hurt nd disturbed .

Maan: i didn't have any option Dadima ,, she was becoming very stubborn ,, i won't let her go away .

Dadima: everything was very shocking for her nd she felt alone ,, she is taking everything in negative way .

Maan: i knew Dadima but we r with her na then why d hell she was ranting to go away from here .

Dadima: do u have any idea what u had done with her ?

Maan: i know Dadima that i did wrong .

Dadima: Maan , sabko apni prob badi lagti hei ,, dusre ki choti ,, hum etna jantey hei ki tumhare har faisle ne Geet ki zindgi per asar dala hei .

Maan: i'm sorry Dadima .

Dadima: tumhare sorry kahne se Geet ka dard kam nahi hoga aur na hi sab kuch pahale jaisa ho jayega * Maan agar kal Sameera aaker tumhe sorry kahe to tum kya karoge ?

Maan looked at Dadima shocked nd hurt ,, she hit his weakest point which made him furious .

Dadima: bolo Maan , uske sorry kahane se tumhari takleef kam ho jayegi kya ?

Maan: No Dadima.

Dadima: fir Geet ki kaise kam hogi ,, tumne to uske dard ko aur bada diya ,, assan nahi hoga usse sambhalna .

Maan: i know Dadima , i know it , but i can do anything for her , anything.

Dadima : pata nahi hum kaise usse samjha payenge ?

Both remained there drown in d thoughts helpless nd defeated ,, only time could solve d prob not they * Day passed wrapped in pain nd grief for all in KV.

Manish brought all d files nd reports for Maan in KV , he asked few helpers about d pics but all wr unaware about that nd didn't see anybody ,, a single soul was grinning in her cabin in happiness on her victory .

Sasha: finally my enemy is out for ever ,, this time Sasha won't lose d game ,, i'll make him mine this time by hook or crook * no one can found who was behind all this ,, poor GS , i'm sorry for u baby hehe * she took out a duplicate key wrapped in a tissue nd threw that in trash bin ,, this was very small thing for me baby ,, if MK could bring u from back lift without noticing anyone in KC then who could stop Sasha after all it's Sasha's territory nd i'm d queen of KC. She was enjoying her success but ppl can't play with fate.


Fate doesn't ask u what u want , Fate knows what is best even if u don't.

Geet was in her room annoyed, frustrated nd depressed ,, lying on bed ,, her mind became jammed coz of continuous thinking but there was no solution of her prob ,, her life was on a turning point again ,, she didn't know what to do, in fact she can't do anything she was forced to do ,, 1st she was disturbed with office fiasco nd humiliation now this was another blow which threw her in an uncertain path ,, now she can't go away from here ,, she saw d determination in his eyes ,, he could do what he said nd she didn't want that this thing come out in public * If he declared her as his wife then it'll strengthen d allegations which ppl put on her means she blackmailed him and to save his reputation he married her .

Geet mumbled... i have to stop all this here nd i won't go to face those ppl in future ,, i'll leave this job .

Maan was working in his bedroom nd his one eye was on screen ,, she was in deep thought nd her expressions wr showing that she was annoyed nd her mind was struggling to find out any solution to go away from here ,, she deffo brought some tough situation for him in her stubbornness * his phone buzzed nd Dadima called him for dinner ,, he looked at Geet nd sighed ,, one more battle to face.

Dadima came to Geet 's room to call her for dinner but she said sorry nd refused to come , half heartedly Dadima came back in dining hall ,, Maan saw her hanging face ,, he understood that Geet refused to come for diner ,, he ordered Nakul to bring diner in OH .

Dadima: Maan , don't pressurized her ,, give her some time .

Maan: Dadima in her stubbornness she is hurting herself ,, she didn't take lunch properly nd now avoiding diner .

Dadima: she is disturbed beta .

Maan: i know Dadima , don't worry she wd take her meal ,, MK has his way to handle her,, come .

Both went to Geet room ,,Nakul brought their diner there ,, Geet saw nd shoot an angry glare to Maan knowing that it is his plan to eat here ,, what he think himself ? he is invading in my life nd forcing me to everything .

Maan made a plate nd brought for her .

Maan: Geet , have some food , u didn't take lunch .

Geet didn't budge nd remained like before like he was talking to someone else .

Maan: get up Geet , have some food ,, if u won't take nobody will eat , so decide what do u want nd one more thing without food Dadima couldn't take her meds ,, now her health depends on u ,, as a member of d family it's ur duty to take care of her , i hope u won't punish her for my mistake .

Geet was listening all this quietly nd looked at Dadima who mouthed please to her ,, her heart melted seeing that an elderly lady who loves nd cares her pleading like this .

Dadima : Geet beta how could a mother eat if her children wr disturbed nd empty stomach .

Geet sat up on bed ,, took d plate from Maan's hand nd started gating without looking at them quietly ,, she finished her meal ,, placed d plate back on d side table ,, went to washroom to clean her hands,, came back nd lie down back on bed without giving any heed towards them * she thought that now onward her life was going to dance on this man's wish ,, if she denied he forced her to do * d entire thing was totally diff now ,, accusations wr on her but here he was threatening nd blackmailing her ,, she was lying downheartedly .


Precap --- Geet's indifference ...Maan's shrewdness..


Part - 54

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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
yeyyy... me 1st.. balle ballee oye shava shava,,,😃
maan...😡 stubborn geet hai yaa khud, apne zidd or anger me kuch dikhta hi nahi usse.. thank god dadi is in action today.. accha hua class le dali maan ki.. she si so damn right... maan k sorry bolne se kyaa sab theek thodi hojane wala hai.. abb to maan ko ye bhi nahi bol sakte k angrezz chale gye, word chod gaye.. coz abhi to wo khud firang bane hai.. i mean foreign country me jo hai😆
arre daadi ne to aaj kohli k jese sixer maar di.. sameera ko jo yaad dila diya..😆😆 wo mast tha babbie..
haha.. sasha bhale abhi khoosh ho rahi hai.. pr tab kya hoga jab usse pata chalega uski game use hi bhari padi hai.. mazza aayega na😆😆
babbie mazzaa aa gyaa...😃
Edited by mauaa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
mauaa is v upset with dona.. shes katti with her..

Maan: arre myshty, dekhonaa mauaa apni dona se itna gussa kyu hai bhala?

Geet: to sahi to kar rahi hai mauaa.. dona porra ka poora mahina gaayab rehti hai, apne well-wisher mauaa se baat bhi nahi karti... or baaki sab se face book pr baate krti hai, priya or rashmi se saari baate share krti thi.. pr mauaa ko kuch nahi batati thi.. aree.. 1 pm hi kardeti.. prr nahi.. usne kuch nahi kiyaa.. esa bhi kyaa exam -study.. ki aap sab ko bhool hi jao.. mauaa to kyaa me khood bahot upset hoo usse.. aap bhi usse baat mat karna.. bechari mauaa hamesha usko yaad karti thi.. usske liye pray bhi kiya tha 30th ko.. pr dona ko kisi ki padi hi kaha hai.. meri bhi dona se katti..😡

maan: haa baat to bilkul theek hai , v good mauaa.. me or geet tumhare saath hai.. dona priya or rashmi se fb pr bate kr sakti thi to baki sab se kyu nahi.. kamse kam kab aayegi uska mesege hi de deti.. u need to work really hard this time dona.. or khabardaar koi dona ka lawyer bana to.. ye MSK ka order hai..😡
Edited by mauaa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24



😆😆 OK ,, tumhara kaffi pending hei .. lage raho.. 😊


ussi kaam me uljhi hu😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mauaa

hellooo frens.. me journal complete kr rahi hoo.. so may b late hoga aaj.. catch u later guys,,😉


mauaa r u angry * making baby face*

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