KHUMAARI2-The Nocturnal Beast(MG)#3, NEXT THREAD ADDED

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Twenty1st

@Twenty1st

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Posted: 10 years ago

#541

You must read a lot of fantasy tails, awesome update. I don't think it's a filler, it opened up a lot of hidden truths, I liked the background stroy in terms of the book and inscription. Feel for Maan and Geet.

Please rescue Chavi soon

Amazing update and keep it going

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Alicia2012

@Alicia2012

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Posted: 10 years ago

#542

Wow great story please update soon

I can not wait for the next part of your story and I feel so sorry for geet and maan right now.i change my id is Alicia2012 pm me please.

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SRK

@KINGKHANFAN

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Posted: 10 years ago

#543

Superb update

Eagerly waiting for next part

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Auchi

@Auchi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#544

Like Geet i also thought there will be something in that book which could help chhavie but than its not like that & now Geet came to know she will die. just want to see how they cope up with it dear.

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tooba ilyas

@doll.12

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#545

It is the best thing to know that you have started season 2 of my favourite story... #khumari...
read all the updates in one go yesterday... net problem occured thats why commenting now...
from the start , storyline was very much attracted... strong ... nd still it has the same pace... i had to say its awsome... mind blasting story..
can you pm me for this story.. adding me on your acccount... i dnt knw how to send buddy req.😛
coming towards the story... woooHooo.. u stole my heart..
geet and maan chemistry,... was worth watching.. maan is a werewolf.. but his clan is really much sweet nd loyal to all... OMG.. geet blush so much with all... nd always kept her self in embarrasing situations... bechariii...
maan is obssesed nd posessive about her.. geet have a recessive gene of werewolf..hmmm.. which is now trying to be dominant after their blood exchange...
geet is having some visions .. i think of maan past... but he is adamnt to nt allow anyone to know his grief... let c .. you had said that there is a twist coming i hope its a good one.. but please dnt show any seperation of maaneet... plx geet , choose ur love than flight back to ur life...
feeling soo bad about chavvi.. she is suffering so badlyy.. nd there is no one to cure her.. she wants to go to her mate... they r using her.. beating her for their thirst of s*x... hope maan nd the clan soon fid her nd her mate aould acccept her...whole heartedly..
update soon dear... u gve update in months but the amount is worth reading.. it fills our thirst for reading..
may ALLAH bless u... great work sweety..

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nehakapoor7

@nehakapoor7

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Posted: 10 years ago

#546

Awesome update

Maan is worried about geet...he promised her that he'll protect

Geet...but as per parth she is going to die...& this geet heard...

She is so shocked

Ancient story..is that related with maan & geet?

Waiting for next update

Please don't stop writing... Always waiting for updates

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Teju

@--Zehnaseeb--

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#547

Amazing part.. anciet wala part was was so interesting.. n somewhere Geet is curious abt Lycan's history... N Gyan made her more curious.. finally she didn't get any help so she went to meet Vidhaut.. how much soft hearted person she is.. she so much wants to help Vidhaut to meet his mate Chavi.. hope her wish soon to get fulfilled.. n Parth n Maan's talk she heard it.. n she was shocked listening their talk..

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Uruja123

@Uruja123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#548

ohhhooo interesting part... ancient scene, it comes out very well bt I thought uss book se kuch help milegi bt unfortunately aisa kuch hua hi ni , Ufff... n Geet heart parth n Maans talk .. OmgzzZ its really shocking for her (Geet) n for us (readers) as well ... now hopefully maan will come up wid sum solution to dis problem ... now eagerly w8ing for next .. continue sooOn ..!!!!!