KHUMAARI2-The Nocturnal Beast(MG)#3, NEXT THREAD ADDED

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Love2read

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

It was a wonderful update...

Each and every thing in the update was awesome...

Maans appearance was well said...

His way to make geet eat was cute...

His love for nature was something Really amazing...

Totally I didn't feel like reading the story but like watching it live...it was explained that perfect...

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Kawan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Lovely update..
Both step ahead in their relation..
Geet is ready to give maan a change..

loved their romance. .

Poor maan..
He always controlled himaself...

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shalini_s

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

I'm glad she wants to give them a chance.. good one.. but what's happening'?? waiting to read..

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Arthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Nice update yaar...
atleast geet gave maan a chance yaar
So now a new prob has started here?
lovely part

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mansiahmed

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Loved it ,maan truly finds her as soulmate even though he didnt express but today he expressed what geet meant to her.n twist by nature kilers ,what happened to vidhyuth😊

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minelove24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

oh maan share his unexpressed feelings towards geet nd she felt same nw geet is ready 4 his wish..whats the danger ahead? Iam worried,full maaneetacious update..lovd it

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Desire6

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Dat pic perfect for a werwolf type..i lkd it...
loved dat dey both giving each other a chance
and moved a step ahead in their relationship which was much needed as Geet was nervous though she knows she is changing and coz of their bond
loved geets pout on being fat nd maans ans to it
nd at d end...wats now with vidhyaata...
ahahahhah 😡u always leave us on cliffhanger...
hanging us god knows how long...
please do update d next part soonn...
please...
love u for updating dis part early ...muaaahhh!!!!🤗...
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Edited by Desire6 - 11 years ago

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RageOfAnAngel

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Wow this was a really BIG update ❤️ Thank uuu ❤️

Geet pacifying Maan , but then Geet has so many conflicting emotions & Maan , well he is a Complicated Whole . He works on pure instinctual basis & Geet kind of makes up for the emotions he is lacking . When he said she is selfish Geet understood the vulnerability behind his accusations & comforted him , the understanding was really well-described. Geet is the emotional anchorage to Maan , regardless of her being weak physically , her being with him gives him emotional courage & a satisfaction . Looking forth to next part 😃

Edited by RageOfAnAngel - 11 years ago

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Deepa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

part 16
awesome...
excellent dear...
lovely...
haye the pic is damn good...
no wonder Geet is reacting like that...
my God Maan is too much...
Geet is comparing her human life with this new life...
and Maan loves her the way she is...
well he has his own pain and frustration...
and Geet shes not able to understand his wolf life...
cont soon dear...

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Isolophiliac

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Posted: 11 years ago

#50

I think am commenting for the first time on khumaari...
Bt its such a fine written story that am in serious love with it..
Though read bezuba few days earlier..n loved that too but this one is just incredible...
The way you have made up the story..loved it...
After reading the story, it makes me feel the such things happen in real 😆 just because of the details u give and relate them to real life...hats off to your imagination skills..
Loved the last part..for the first time maan opened up in front of her and it was all for good..
Great..that geet thought about giving him a chance..
Beautiful update...
Just can't wait for more...
Please update as early as possible...
Eagerly waiting for next one...

Edited by -misty--love- - 11 years ago