KHUMAARI2-The Nocturnal Beast(MG)#3, NEXT THREAD ADDED - Page 14

so many twists n turns
Interesting

so much happened- wow
gonna reread to make sure i get all the info

Superb superb superb update di!!i always found uniqueness in ur all updayes of this story Trust me u r one of the best writer the story u r writting it isnt easy!!!As a Reader i have lots of expectations from the writer that they will keep that interest till the end of the story but if i take ir as writer POV (though em not still) u have responsibility to do justice wd story as well as to make ur readers happy in this kind of story is really tough job Hats off to u!!u Actually doing GREAT N its getting interesting wd each update iam actually curious whats store for us!!

Now Coming on update wonderful update Again!!So now Actual villian entered in this story!!Vidhuat get attacked n they took his mate...Feeling bad for vidhuat...So That bad guy have something for Maan Right??But why he needed Vidhuat's blood??Maneet as always Best Maan's words was full intense..He Madly Love Geet it shows in his every gesture n words...Geet is so Nice the way she comforted Vidhuat wd her words was really Good...No wonder if Maan feels Respect for her...i was thinking n get n really scared of Maan reactions if something same happened wd Geet n him...he will b like Mad Were the kind of temper he has!!ufff ad after the entry of bad guy em actually scared n at same time excited for the story to proceed :D :D

awsemmm update twist and turns lengthy update

the story is taking a different and interesting shape...

i am half asleep dolly phir bhi tdecided to read first n den go back to sleep..lol
i loved the updt..loved it
so froh is the villain and he has got witch with him
this is interesting.. witchy and bitchy😆
bad rhyming but i loved it
so tht droh guy wants to be the alpha and sumwhr i feel maan is his target.. may be the vengeance of not getting the throne for himself
loving this new face of the story completely
and then we hve maan and geet..and vidhyut
her touch was healing.. is it that geet is a witch or a half were?
lol it myt sound funny but cant stop thinking of any and every reason
its so painful to lose ur mate.. no wonder he was going insane
cant wait for the next
fabulous updt
continue SOON

poor vid and his mate so sad and the who is the evil ones and what the hell they took vid blood and what the hell is wrong with that beta daring to speck to the alpha like that and mate are created for each other a force mating is destructive awesome update thanks for the pm.

Who is droh and what he wants

i really like this story...so different'...i really wonder how you imagine so much!!!
great writer you are osheen!!!!!😃

Awesome... Is geet getting some kind of power or she was always with these power???? Nd if were can't decide there mates then how they gives hopes to lavina that maan will be her mate???? U should start upadating thing more yaar... May be two upadate in a month atleast... Plzzz