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Posted: 11 years ago
gr8 part..
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dadi kuch to karo..maan ne bhaga diya bechari geet ko..waiting 4 next update
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Ishq Shava : Love Is Cure




Part 10

Maan was roaming inside his room as he can't get Geet's face out of his mind, he felt an unexplained tension and he was also thinking about Dadi maa, how she would react for it, Maan slowly went and peeped into Dadi maa's room hoping that she would be sleeping but she was so awake and was sitting up, "Dadi maa" Maan went inside shocked, "you are awake this early, you're ok right," Maan shouted freaking out, "may be that girl came and told Dadi maa about what happened yesterday and then went away" Maan thought,

"Dadi maa," Maan called again ready with his explanation, "what happened to you Maan," Dadi maa's question up put him into shock, "What happened to you, and what you did yesterday was not right Maan, whatever the reason maybe it's not right, I couldn't get any sleep all night thinking about that poor girl, what the hell is your problem with her" Dadi maa raised her voice and it made Maan silent, "Answer me Maan, what's your problem," Dadi maa yelled up, "why did you bring her in then" Maan asked looking away,

"Right, I made an huge mistake of bringing her here, she would have be rather happy in that hell she was living" Dadi maa said and Maan looked at her puzzled, "What" Maan asked, "yes," Dadi maa said and stood up and started saying about Geet's life, "poor girl, she lost her mom, dad, and grandfather, her whole family in an road accident when she was an kid, and was left under the care of her uncle and aunt, who never really cared for her, they took her up in their hands, just for her money, they were treating her like an animal,"

"All these year, all she faced was just pain and insults," Dadi maa said and Maan was looking at her shocked, "she had no one to care for her, and finally when I went to her marriage," Dadi maa said, and Maan was even more shocked, "Her Marriage" Maan interfered, "yes, the marriage I went to Hosharpur was hers," Dadi maa said and continued, "that was not a marriage, that was an selling process, her uncle was above to sell her to an scoundrel for money he got from him," Dadi maa said with a anger,

"Thank goodness, there was Rachi, an sweet girl in midst of those devils who told me everything and thus I was able to stop the marriage and save Geet," Dadi maa said with an smile, "after all that happened, she never complained about anything, though her uncle and aunty made her work like an slave, they never gave her proper food or clothes, they never treated her like a human, they had beaten her up horribly" Dadi maa said pained,

"What, Beat her," Maan asked shocked again, "yes, but she showed only her smile as an reply for all those troubles she faced," Dadi maa said and started to cry up, "Dadi maa" Maan said and held her and she pushed his hands away, "Maan, you know, when I bring her with me, I promised her, that I will give the love and affection, that she missed, that she will not face any more troubles in her life and I promised her that I will get her married to an nice guys, to an nice family where she would get the love and affection she missed all her life"

"For that purpose only, I had arranged the Puja yesterday as I can invite all my friends and introduce her to them, and ask their help in finding an guy, but you, why did you act like that Maan, why did you insult her that much, what did she do to you," Dadi maa asked and Maan's guilt filled his mind, "what have I done, what have I done," Maan thought holding his fist, "she had no one in her life, nowhere to go, and she trusted me fully that I would keep her happy, and take care of her but no I couldn't, how will I ever face her now Maan" Dadi maa asked crying up,

"What's her Name" Maan asked, "Geet" Dadi maa said, "Geet" Maan repeated and without a word he rushed away, "Maan" Dadi maa called from behind but he was long gone, "now what he is up to" Dadi maa said sitting on her bed,

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Maan rushed down stair and out to the gate, and the watchman stood up as he saw Maan, "Sir" he said looking at Maan who was looking tensed, "hey did you see that Girl, I mean Geet, going out" Maan asked and the watchman nodded an yes, "yes sir, Madam come with her bag and said she need to go to the railway station, and requested me to call an taxi" he said, "when" Maan asked, "more or less, 45 minutes ago" he said, Maan rushed from there and took his car and started towards the railways station,

"All I needed is only one thing, all my life I was aching for only one thing which god has taken away from my life long before, love and affection" Geet's tear filled voice came up into his mind, "Damn it, how did I believe that stupid Naintara's words and hurt her so much," Maan thought feeling disgusted about his own act, Dadi maa's words about Geet come into his mind making his feel horrible, "she had on one, nowhere to go" her words scared him, "hope she doesn't take any wrong decision" Maan hoped up,

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Geet was standing in the railway station crying up, she came out of the house but she doesn't know, where to go, she had no place to go, or no one to call, she was all alone, she looked around the crowded place which gave her an scariness, she had never been out like this, she went and stood in a corner, crying up, "Baba ji, why do you do like this always, I thought finally I found an house and people who loves me, and cares for me but, now," Geet cried, "why did he hate me so much," Geet thought about Maan's anger on her, looking up to the gods, "what's his fault, everyone hates me, no one ever loves me,"




Maan entered the railway station and rushed inside, and it was crowded, where did she go, Maan thought and started searching for her around, Maan's mind played him the way she got wound because of him, how she was ready to take up the pain for him, Maan's mind felt pained now for her, "what if she went and sat inside any train" Maan thought and started to check inside the train, "come on Geet, come on, please don't make me live in a guilt life long, and Dadi maa, what will I say to her, if I don't find you, come on Geet, come before me," Maan thought as he searched for her with all his heart,




Suddenly the station turned crowed with a dance troop and their luggages, they were all over the place rushing into the train, pushing everyone on their way away, Maan and Geet too got into their crowed, and they were pushing them up and Geet and Maan walked back trying to escape them, and get out, "come on, come on, get in soon, take care of the decoration items too" they all shouted together,

Maan moved back and felt his back hit on someone and stood still busily looking around for Geet, Geet too stopped still as she felt she hit someone behind and looked away to find an way out of this crowd, "please move a bit" a guy came up and Maan stepped away, so as Geet, the guy who was carrying a box fell on Maan and the sliver decors fell on Maan, Geet turned around to see what's wrong listening to the notice and looked down at the box and the guy laying down, Maan pulled the sliver string from him and look at the one struck in his watch,




"Damn it" Maan yelled and Geet eyes widen up, "Baba ji, it can't be" Geet thought as she recognized the voice immediately, and looked up suddenly to see Maan looking at the watch and trying to pull the string, "Maan ji" Geet said shocked, puzzled, surprised and inside the small corner of her heart, she felt an happiness as she saw him, Maan to turned around and his hard face turned suddenly happy, "Geet" he said with a relief,




"one second" Maan said and try to get the silver dcor away from his watch, with his single hand, but it was difficult as it was so messed up, Geet then slowly went near him and she try to get the strings away slowly and finally she freed him up, "Thanks" Maan said and Geet looked at him with a smile, "after all that I did, she is smiling at me" Maan thought feeling guilty again, "Geet, Come on" Maan ordered and Geet didn't even feel to ask any question and just followed him, and as he reached his car he opened the front door for her,

Geet looked at him puzzled, "Get in" Maan shouted and Geet sat inside without an second thought and Maan took the drive, Geet didn't open her mouth while Maan was accepting her to speak or ask something, but she was so silent and they reached the mansion too, and Geet looked at him confused, Maan parked his car and went and opened the car door for her and Geet got down, "Geet" Maan said in his roaring voice scaring her suddenly,

Maan saw her reaction and closed his eyes, trying to speak slowly, "Geet" he said softly, "look, Dadi maa doesn't know that you have gone out of this house, and I don't want her to know about it too, keep it a secret, can you do that for me," Maan asked and Geet nodded an ok with a small grin, "Good" Maan said turned away, "Ji" Geet called and Maan looked at her, "you will not be sad or troubled if I stay here" Geet asked remembering his words,

Maan looked at her sweet face and her shining eyes, "As long as you don't make me upset or anger, I will be ok," Maan said, "I will be good" Geet said with her innocent look like an small kid and Maan nodded up, and walked up and Geet followed him, as Maan and Geet was above to climb the stairs, Maan saw Dadi maa come down and Pulled Geet by her arms and hid behind the small space under the stairs, "Ji" Geet try to speak and Maan kept his big hand on her mouth, "Shh" he said and looked at the Dadi maa,

Geet was looking with her wide eyes shock, Maan's hand pressing her lips and his closeness was making her nervous, Geet looked at his face close to her and he looked mesmerizing, Maan moved slowly a bit forward taking his hands away from her mouth and saw Dadi maa stepped down and above to come into their view, "Damn," Maan though and push Geet behind who was standing beside him with his strong hands, Geet shivered by his touch and trembled up, looking at Maan, Dadi maa then went into kitchen and Maan breathe out in relief,

Maan turned around to see Geet, but her face was all red and she looked tensed, Maan looked puzzled at her reaction and then Geet looked down at his hand and Maan's eyes too followed her look to see he was keeping his hand on her stomach and pressing it up, Maan immediate took away his hand away and he don't know what to say, and he walked away from the hideout and Geet followed him, and Maan went upstairs and Geet followed him, they both stopped near Geet's room,

"Dadi maa is worried, so just go towards her now," Maan said and Geet nodded an ok, "this girl says yes to everything" Maan thought, and then looked at Geet who went inside her room and kept the bag on her bed and turned to leave, "What are you doing" Maan shouted and Geet looked at him shocked, "you said to go to Dadi maa" Geet said and Maan fisted his hands controlling his anger, "this one doesn't have a brain," Maan thought,

"Look if you keep your packed bag like this on the bed, and if someone come and see this and look at your empty cupboard, they would think you are ready to escape from here, so arrange your dresses in the cupboard and then go" Maan yelled up and Geet nodded an ok and went and took her dress out of her bag, "Geet" Dadi maa's voice came out making Maan look around to see Dadi maa come towards her room and Maan jumped into her room before Dadi maa could see him, Geet too looked at him shocked with her clothes in her hand, "what to do" Geet asked looking confused,

Maan took her bag and grabbed her dresses from her hand and throw it inside her cupboard and locked it up, "Maan" Dadi maa's shocked voice made Maan to turn around and look at her with a stern look, Dadi maa looked at Maan and then Geet, "what are you doing in Geet's room" Dadi maa asked, "haven't your heart settled down after all what you said to her yesterday, so wanted to yell at her now and so come to her room, even after I said about her" Dadi maa asked in her anger tone,

"No Dadi maa, I just, I came to convince her, you said she is hurt and so I came to convince her" Maan said and Maan looked at Geet who was staring at him, "right Geet" Maan asked and she nodded a yes, "Yes Dadi maa" she said and Dadi maa looked at him puzzled, "Maan Singh Khurana convincing an Girl, just because I said she is hurt, not so believable" Dadi maa thought, "Dadi maa, I am getting ready to the office now" Maan said and went away,

Dadi maa then went towards Geet and held her hands, "Geet, tell me the truth, did he yell at you again, did he say something to you," Dadi maa asked worried, "No Dadi maa, he is so nice, I think his anger had calmed down so only he came to me, he is so good" Geet said with a smile and Dadi maa too smiled up, "looks like Geet's life story had made his heart melt a bit for her," Dadi maa thought with a smile,

Precap: (on Wednesday)



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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderful ud
running hiding searching escaping
adventurous pt
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superb.. Maan knowing @ geet's past from dadimaa n then went in search for her n brought her back home. Maan trying to hide @ geet's leaving from dadi n asked for the same from geet. I think geet started to get attracted towards maan
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Posted: 11 years ago
FABULOUS UPDATE
JUST LOVED IT
BECHARI GEET ,😭😭😭😭😭😭
SHE HAD TO BEAR a lot in her past,but thnk god dadi knocked sum senses in maan's brain , n he understood tht geet is innocent n he bring her back😃
hopefully soon he will cum out frm his shell😳
waiting😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n terrific emotional update! Maan sees dadi awake n is worried! Dadi worried abt Geet! Dadi ask Maan y he was so rude 2 Geet! she tells him Geet n hw she suffered! she arranged the pooja so that her friends can help her find a suitable groom 4 Geet! Maan stunned! He goes n asks the servants abt Geet! He realises wt he did! He reflects on his action n Geet's words! Maan took out his anger on her bcos of NT! Maan goes 2 find her! Geet at the railway station! She is confused! she does nt no where to go! Maan arrives n they meet! GHSP way - love hw u incorporated it here! Missing the show so much! Awsome pics! Maan takes her with home! She silently follows! Maan tells her nt to tell dadi tht she left! dadi shocked seeing Maan in Geet's room! Maan lies that he came to say sorry n Geet agrees! Dadi suspicious! interesting precap! Wonderfully written! update soon...waiting 4 Wednesday! 😊
Edited by khwaishfan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb 👏update

dadi said maan about her life... u wrote it so emotionally ... i felt so sad for her once again😭😭 ...

thank god maan find out geet 😃

ohhh geet is so innocent n cute ... she did all whatever maan said without any question n her lovely nature not go unnoticed by maan ... so nice⭐️

still maan n his temper ... hope he will change soon


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