MG OS: A Moment of Love Part 4 Page 63/10th September

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Khushboo12

@Khushboo12

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Nice start 😃

waiting for next part 😊

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mauaa

@mauaa

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

hahhaa.. bechara rahull.. nice ud.. what will hapn more n next with geet.. waiting..😉

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jasraj123

@jasraj123

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

nice start
wonder what will happen with geet next

waiting for next and
updates for ur other works too😆😆

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..Happy..

@..Happy..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

continues soon and loved part 1 :)

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

awww so cute
that creep rahul was the one who lied
and she thought her friends did
damn that was close
but she sure slapped and knocked him
good on ya geet
but manager hope it is maan
he has to be right

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crazyfanofdsdv

@crazyfanofdsdv

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

loved the update

so can't wait for the next update

take your time and od what suits you

will be waiting for you

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singh24

@singh24

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

😊 Waiting ...

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tabby999

@tabby999

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

hi akriti

happy u r back ...🤗

the first part is awesome ...but plz finish ur other stories ...plz ..

still waiting for them ..

when u will pay attention to them ...plz update them ...

thank u

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

hi dear! Nt gonna complain lol! At least u updated something! Will wait 4 other updates! welcome back! back wid a bang! Thanks 4 da pm n congrats on the new SS! Superb interesting update! Wonderfully written! Geet is so alone! She had friends bt they left her! They spread rumours abt her! Geet shattered! She resigned frm her job! Her family is so disgusting! Geet kinda drunk n Rahul tryn to take advantage of her bt she stops him! Rahul accuses her! Geet incensed! The bouncers of the club assist her n den the boss - MSK I presume! Maan admiring her! update soon...dnt take too long 😉

Edited by khwaishfan - 11 years ago