THE LOCKET (20) MG FF, link to new thread pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 99

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dhanyabinu

yaar what an update. after reading the update i have a feeling of seeing the climax of hindi film. i love stunts and you know i have a feeling that i was seeing stunt when i was reading.I love maithali ma .loved the maneet moments.

Glad you liked it. I usually forward the fight scenes😆 so I was not sure I would be able to write it.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aditi_2010

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Superb update di!!! loved how chandan, Kabir, Maan everyone beat the hell out of Brij. Loved how Maithili, Megha and my sweet Bambi did everything on their part to fight against the evil...Loved how you showed that sometimes we had to fight together for the evil to be eradicated...nd do I have to say how much Ii loved the use of my fav song and the silent promises made 😃

so now that the ultimate evil is gone I hope their will be some long due reunions...😉

Yes and time to wrap up too Aditi😃
Thank you.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111

poora action packed movie dikha diya tune avi kya mast fighting sequence tha sab apne apne kaam teek se kiya😆😆brij ki dhulayi mein

chandhan bhi sher bangaya aur maithili bhi achi bowler bangayi aur geet tho ek intelligent sherni bangayi aur megha ek achi bachi ki tarah khood padi maidan mein apni maa ko bachane.


final mein sher ko gussa dilaya brij ne apni sherni ko ghoor ghoor kar dekhar sher tho apna panje se khoob maara.

final blow poonam ne diya jo wo hi thi jisne brij ki wajah bohut kuch khooya

Sab galti ki sazaa deni thi toh bajaa di band uski..
Ultimately it is society that punishes such crimes and so, village walo ko bhi le aayi😆
Thanks Priya. I just noticed you are born 1 day before me, tabhi toh humare khayal milte jhulte hai😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kavya.sravya

wow !! what a climax...all heroes and heroines fighting with villain...awesome action scene tha !! just like all movies ... police came in the last...couldnot even get the body ... aur kuch irada hai kya...!! loved it all ...!! teen teen logoen se maar khake bhi...he still had guts to look at maan's giit...!! punishment tho milna hi tha...for all the lives he spoiled...!! kichak ka vadh tho hogaya...!!👏 now, we can peacefully enjoy all the couples reunion...!! waiting...

Thanks Kavya😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: BDayGal-11Jan

Superb, Mind Blowing, Wonderfulll, Awesome, Jhakkaass Chapter Aviii 🤗
WOW Brij dash ki kia dhulai hui, maza agaya 😃
Chandan ne shuruwat achi ki Thappar aur Ghooson ki, unka sath dene aye Maan aur Kabir 😆
Loved the Pics u used in the chap !
Relived Old Memories 😭
SooOpPperrRbbb !!! 😉 😃
Cont. Soon...

🤗 Thank u Sheen
Yeh fighting mujh se nahi hota... even writing mein..😆
So glad it came out okay.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: JayeetaGurtian

sorry 4 late reply dr...😳😳...very busy with exam...🤔...


Chapter - 86 finally Geet is safe...👏👏...Geet called Maan and told him everything...😎...He contacted the police and some others...👍🏼...They made Megha and Tara safe without letting Brij knowing about it...OMG Chandan and Poonam are trapped......But Chandan at last stop him...Geet doesn't leave Maan alone and plans a trap to stop Brij......loved it...❤️❤️...thank u 4 pm...😃...

Chapter - 87 amazing update...🥳...brilliantly written...👏👏👏...Brij was eyeing Geet with bad intention...😡😡...But with Maan around how can that happen...😉...Brij is dead......beautiful Maaneet hug...☺️...loved it very much...❤️❤️❤️...thank u 4 pm...😃...by seeing the precap can't wait 4 the next update......pls continue soon...😊...

Thanks Jayeeta😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sohni_kudi_111

wow... no words to describe!

brij is just disgusting! loved hiss bashing n d reason to b bashed by all of the three men!

despite being beaten terribly, he still had d guts to use poonam for his escape!

kudos to megha n maithali for their effort! but got to say brij is really stupid n blind in lust! muhahahaha... loved brij's end!

maan n geet part's at d end was beautiful n d song used to portray them... awesome! one of my fav songs infact! all in all... loved it!

now waiting 2 c fireworks at maaneet's n devtara's wedding! hopefully a beautiful closure for poonam, chandan n others as well!

waiting 2 c maan's sherni! btw, will u show their HM as well? n have u written part 88 and 89 as well? saw d post on yr blog?

Usually the next chapters are stuff I am working on.
Hoping to finish soon as you guys will let me😃
Thanks so much.
Happy Baisakhi to you too.
I was out of town so did not get to return your message.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jasraj123

full of action update
love the way chandan hit brij and shed all his inhibitions about respecting him

and then maan and kabir joining the

brij died and he indeed needed to be punished like this
evil has to be punished and it's done

love the vow maaneet took for each others


precap is 😳😳

see you wanted an "action" packed update
de diya na..😆
Thanks Jas😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: crazydream


Beautiful update.

Awesome

ALL IS WELL... After much struggle Maaneet r free from any evil.

Chandan stopping Brij for the first time. Brij shocked to see Chandan fighting. N then Maan n Kabir also vent out their anger for hurting their loved once.
But Brij till his last breath was saying that he will take revenge. Wat a animal he is...

Loved the whole action sequence. Everyone is hurt in this process. Maan worried for his jaan...

Aaj Thud Thud nahi hua dil... Eagerly waiting for Thud Thud moments.
N one separate part for Dev-Tara... Pretty pls. Missing them.

Continue soon.

Thanks so much.
Glad you liked it.
DevTara in the epi now😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

part 87 - wow...what a dhamakedar climax...it was like seeing a movie...fight over devil always honoured with win...glad that chadan also gave a good fight with brij...oh...you gave easy dealth to him...he should have punished much harder..how many lives he ruined ...marte marte bhi usne apni aadat nahi chhodi that he had eyes on geet..

Isiliye toh Maan blackened his eyes.
Thanks Madhuri😃

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