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Onir

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Posted: 11 years ago

#721

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2 Updates!!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#722

Originally posted by: Onir
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2 Updates!!

Doc🤗

It's actually only one, had to chop it for size..😆

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 11 years ago

#723

Originally posted by: dqno1

Doc🤗

It's actually only one, had to chop it for size..😆

🤗 I'm happy as long as there are updates 😉

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libros

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Posted: 11 years ago

#724

Originally posted by: dqno1

It was getting too long so had to split it😃 Glad you liked it.

we don't mind long updates😉😉 infact we love looonnng updates😉😉

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priya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#725

Originally posted by: dqno1

Banda😲

Priya toh ladki ka naam hai..😆😆

Will send you the details later by PM.

Thanks Priya😃

😆😆tuhi uska feminine likh lo

ok will be waiting

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 11 years ago

#726

Chapter 86: 👏 I loved that everyone is uniting in this fight against that Brij 😡

Brij is a good for nothing entity... who gloats on his evil schemes and ill doings without realizing that all of his deeds are piling up and a balance sheet is coming out which will cause him to pay for all the havoc he's caused towards each person throughout hsi lifetime...

He's digging his own grave by boasting about all his plans ... and only good thing that has come out of it is that now both Chandan and poonam are aware of how they were played by him and in the hands of fate.

I just loved the last line ... 👏 Throughout this love saga it was always shown how Maan was sticking to that advice given to him by Aisha years ago at the beach house to always be with her walking beside her or behind her... But in this update you connected these both love birds even through that advice and thought process where Geet states "I'm not walking beside you Maan, but I will remove every obstacle from your path" This vow by her is in some way in keeping with his inner promise and vow to her from so many years that she has felt and lived through his actions and doings towards her.

Loved it Avi 🤗

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valli30

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Posted: 11 years ago

#727

part 86
awesome update
maan informed geet and they resuced megha and tara
geet don't want to leave maan
she is following him and helping him😊
brij😡
poonam and chandan shocked hearing brij's words

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vidyaniru

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Posted: 11 years ago

#728

Chandan, Maan, Kabir pelting down on Brij. Loved it! Megha was so brave. Maithili and her stones was icing on the cake! But of course, Maan and Geet stole the show. Like I said before, it felt like watching a masaledaar movie. You described every detail so well. Finally Brij met his end due to greed. And justice was meted out by the society. Everyone had a hand in nailing him, and justly so.

So, looks like the wedding date is fixed...

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valli30

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Posted: 11 years ago

#729

part 87

full of twists and turns update
still when he was trapped he is thinking about money 😡
geet got injured
sab apni taraf se kosish kar rahe hai brij se sabko bachane keliye
finally brij got his punishment
precap😊

priya di lovely VM😳👏

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Onir

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Posted: 11 years ago

#730

Chapter 87: Finally Brij met his end 👏 And it was one action packed update.. with many twists and turns.

As I said earlier indeed his balance sheet was ready and he had to pay with his life for all that wrong doings. And a what a death but even a midst it he was determined to destroy lives and had lust overpowering him ... Very disgusting character.

I loved how each of the 3 men poured out their anger and revenge on Brij... Chandan for all the heartbreak and pain both he and his wife went through since years and teh pain and feeling of being orphan hsi both children lived through, Kabir for all that Megha and his Mom endured, and mostly Maan for he just didn't fight for Geet but also as a brother for Megha. 👍🏼

I just loved loved the song you used... its as always one from my favourite playlist. Kailash Kher and the emotions his voice renders to this piece of music and the lyrics awesome. And You used it in this update when both MG unite and embrace each other after facing all the trials and it was an apt way of concluding this victory over evil 👏

Waiting for the next one eagerly. 😳

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