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APARNA TAMBE

@aparna3011

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#691

very nice

no words to express how happy feeling

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Jaggy

@--Fairy--

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#692

Finally Brij chapter closed ..loved the update

it simply wow

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#693

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

hai avi

Hi!

So excited you seem to be today😆

Brij ki band baj gayi isiliye?

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bbindu

@bbindu

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#694

Finally, Brij is gone and done with it. Now the happy times will start for Thaukar family and all. will be waiting for the next part.

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Padfoot_Prongs

@Padfoot_Prongs

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#695

Wat an action packed update. loved it. finally Chandan ke haath chale. i loved that.

Brij was really a 🤬. when geet came out, with Maan i was also boiling. Maan did a gud dhulai.

finally Happily forever coming. hm.

u know it was just like a movie- Romance, Villains, fights, end me villain ki dhulai and finally happily forever.

I m really luking forward for Chandan-Punam talks. they have suffered so much. i finally want to see that one ray of sunshine in their life- that one morning.

U r an awesome writer avi. 🤗

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#696

Originally posted by: mannu_minnie
Wat an action packed update. loved it. finally Chandan ke haath chale. i loved that.
Brij was really a 🤬. when geet came out, with Maan i was also boiling. Maan did a gud dhulai.

finally Happily forever coming. hm.

u know it was just like a movie- Romance, Villains, fights, end me villain ki dhulai and finally happily forever.

I m really luking forward for Chandan-Punam talks. they have suffered so much. i finally want to see that one ray of sunshine in their life- that one morning.

U r an awesome writer avi. 🤗

Thanks Mannu🤗 I am not an awesome writer sadly, I wish I was. I can tell a story though😆

I love your signature line Mannu.

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saba

@luv_DD

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#697

Lovely update

Brij chapter has come.to an end

Lovely

Uodae ssonn

Geet injured

Poor maan to

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aditi

@aditi_2010

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#698

👏

Superb update di!!! loved how chandan, Kabir, Maan everyone beat the hell out of Brij. Loved how Maithili, Megha and my sweet Bambi did everything on their part to fight against the evil...Loved how you showed that sometimes we had to fight together for the evil to be eradicated...nd do I have to say how much Ii loved the use of my fav song and the silent promises made 😃

so now that the ultimate evil is gone I hope their will be some long due reunions...😉

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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#699

Originally posted by: dqno1

Hi!

So excited you seem to be today😆

Brij ki band baj gayi isiliye?

aur nahi tho kya?? ab brij ka no tension...

aaraam se ab ab maaneet , dev tara, chand poonam, kabir megha, cid daadi ... in sab par tum concentrate kar sakthi ho... am ready for reading dear

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priya

@priya111111

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#700

poora action packed movie dikha diya tune avi kya mast fighting sequence tha sab apne apne kaam teek se kiya😆😆brij ki dhulayi mein

chandhan bhi sher bangaya aur maithili bhi achi bowler bangayi aur geet tho ek intelligent sherni bangayi aur megha ek achi bachi ki tarah khood padi maidan mein apni maa ko bachane.

final mein sher ko gussa dilaya brij ne apni sherni ko ghoor ghoor kar dekhar sher tho apna panje se khoob maara.

final blow poonam ne diya jo wo hi thi jisne brij ki wajah bohut kuch khooya