THE LOCKET (20) MG FF, link to new thread pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 68

Originally posted by: priya111111

thank god geet sahi time par maan ko inform kiya and maan and kabir aakar megha aur tara ko save kiya par insab mein poonam aur chandhan bachon ko save karne keliye brij ke paas gaye. poor chandan really loves poonam and his daughters a lot hope maan aur kabir usko bachale

and geet kitni dimaag chala rahi hai 😆😆😆iss waqt wo apne maan ko chodkar nahi jaana chahthi aur uske peeche peeche chali gayi its good because usko sab raasthe maloom hai

Originally posted by: LILY111144

climaxx,,,,,,much awaitd brij ki dhulai ceremny,,,,😆😆

geet alwys wid maan ,,,,tu janha jnha chalega mera saaya saath hoga,,,,

lov it,,,jhalii ki super intlignce,,,brij ka scootr ki hawa thus,,, wow,,,,grt,,,,👏

Originally posted by: aditi_2010

come on di!!! You write so good that no matter how big you update it feels less... 😉

Waiting and trailer ne toh meri jaan le li...mera fav gaana on my fav couple !!! Haye!!

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

hai avi... am here😉

part85

geet niharofying sleeping maan😳... i love the way u bring the smallest details in them... u describe them so beautifully that i can visualise them in front of my eyes...

Main yehi toh chahta hu! Chipku BB! Every man's dream girl .😆😆

maaneet love in ur words is a treat to read avi... really... so much love u for making me love this couple more😳
Avi thodi se paagal hai for Maaneet..😆 so it comes with that flow...
when ever chandan and poonam comes into the picture... i really feel sad for them... the years of their longiness, hurt, loneliness... make me just wish for them atleast that their future is filled with love and togetherness...and thanx to megha that we got such a moment of them...
There had to be a bridge for them to cross to each other and a child binds like nothing else.
brij... kamina kahinka... ulte dimaag logon ke dimaag ulti taraf kithna tez chaltha hain... but how much speedy thoughts he has, evil will always fail...
Chahe kuch bhi kar le, iss baar bachne wala nahi hai..

United we stand

part 86

such an action packed update... was biting my nails reading each lines...

all thakurs, maaneet, kabir , maithili are together... except dev and tara... dev ko bhi laathi tho uske haathon ke punches bhi mil jaathe brij ko😉

To be honest, the biggest problem in this chapter was how to get everyone on the hilltop😆 4-5 people on the scooter, nahi ko sakta tha, neither could I use the jeep they came in, isiliye Tara aur Dev ko hospital bhejna pada.

Somedays you may not walk together, one may simply follow the other.

I am not walking beside you Maan, but I will remove every obstacle from your path..

just beautiful words avi👏

Thank you Lakshmi. I tried to end every MG part with a line regarding their journey together.

Originally posted by: Desigirls12

wow lovely emotional thud thud thrilling update..te way three men were struggling to save their girls was lovely ..te way my maan asking geet to leave but she is very stubborn, and my maan ki gussa was lovely emotional.. now brij u will soon meet ur hell, in my maan..wat ever my maan try to make to leave for geet ki safety, geet is geet wont go without my maan.. i love the update

Originally posted by: UNICORN75

Damaka update...Each man has a reason to trash Brij..
Brij will be facing a strong and dertermined womenfolk as well...Good
Wanting to read about the last of evil
Lovely teaser...VM and pic u posted gives me a feel it will be Maneet v/s Brij
All excited for the next update.

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

oh thank God Brij didn't see Geet following him and Maan also reached there with Kabir...

villagers are also coming to Hilltop to rescue girls from Brij clutches but Maan has already taken out from his grip...now Chandan and Poonam are trapped and Brij is beating Chandan...Chandan ke andar Mard jaag gaya hai...now he should take revenge of all the bads did by Brij on his family...

although Maan has instructed Geet to go back but she is determinant to help him...now I am sure Brij is trapped and his game is over...

wonderful update...

thanx for pm...

Originally posted by: libros

lovely update...full filmy style action...😉

acha hua ki brij confessed his deeds in front to chandan and poonam...hopefully that'll clear the air between them

yayie everyone working together as a team...abh maan n kabir dhulayi karenge brij ki🤢

very bad aapne aise cliffhanger pe update stop kiya...not fair

update soon😊😊

thanx for pm

Originally posted by: custodian75

Loved the teaser. Very nice song, hadn't heard the song before.

Originally posted by: maanland

That was a tension filled update

but even under all such tensions

maaneet are together

geet acts as maan's strength not his weakness

superb

both maan and geet were superb

loved maan and kabir working together to come out of this

geet helping her maan throughout

👏

waiting eagerly for the next part

superrrb song selection