THE LOCKET (20) MG FF, link to new thread pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 48

Originally posted by: chavvi16

geet is getting more bold
that is so cool right
not for maan though
how much more can he control i wonder
hope their wedding is soon
so he teased her about their wedding date
and said if its too far away they can always get married in a temple
no way dude no way
he was enjoying her drooling over him
well he has the right to enjoy
and she the right to srool
ahhh the thakurs and chandan
what about him
he is the only one who is without his love
will he get his love
megha is so naughty right
what she did there was cute though
that brij urghhh
hope we are getting rid of him once and for all
geet following brij hope she told maan too
lets see what happens with him
cheers for pm

Originally posted by: kavya.sravya

morning started so beautifully in both the houses !! one with young love...with hopes of beautiful future with each other...waiting patiently for their dreams to take shape...with contentment and confidence... on the other hand...the beautiful family morning ... a surprise gift from the almighty...each and every one of them were in deep sadness ... leading a lonely life...and suddenly such wonderful reunion...a feeling of belongingness and family...living moments which were long pending ...superbly written !! when all of them were knitting dreams of wonderful future ...the entry of brij...villian of many many lives...with devious plans...!! waiting anxiously...

Originally posted by: singh24

Originally posted by: abinaya.m

Hey Avi,

this update was beautiful and scary at the same time. loved the first half of the romance and i just hope chandan gets back his wife. and y such a cliff hanger as to what will happen next ?????? tho plz agla update jaldi de dedena ab wait nahi hota.

tc

Abinaya

Originally posted by: mannu_minnie

Awesome update Avi. Geet has become bold now. Maan ke majje ho gaye. No shy Geet. 😆.

I loved family time. Chandan is an awesome person. I m really waiting for Chandan-Punam private talks. I liked Megha's prank. and i m also happy that she has no idea about how broken her family used to be. she has seen enough till now.

here comes the villain but we have 4 heroes this time. Brij has no chance against them. 😛

Originally posted by: libros

Fabulous update...loved it ❤️

maneet moments...☺️☺️☺️...family time of the thakur family and the naughty megha😆😆

brij ki toh 🤢

thanx 4 pm😊😊

Originally posted by: supernasahu

Fabulous update...👏 👍🏼

Maaneet romantic moments...☺️

Maan teasing geet...😆

Naughty megha will bring chandan nd poonam closer...😊

Brij... 😡Geet following brij hope she inform maan...

Thanx 4 d pm...😊

Continue soon...

Originally posted by: Onir

Chapter 85: Hayee the start of the new day was indeed Mishty 😳😉Well if Maan is the fianc, how can we expect less?😆😳

Bambi rang gayi Maan ke pyaar mein 😆 She has been able to accept and embrace her desires and passions due to his patience and undying love. 👏 Loved their morning and masti involved... Much needed to brace us before reading about that Evil Brij 😡

The song and the way you used it in different context for MG and for Chandan -Poonam was beautiful and apt for each of them.

It is amazing how well you notice everything I try to do Onir.🤗

Megha is finally living all her dreams and everything she desired as a child in need of a family. Chandan is still someone who is in broken state, and I loved how you explained his turmoil... that his fear of building hopes makes him scared as feels it could all be a facade which could all be taken away from him in a moment.

Though Chandan has seen heaven, he is still on the fence. Until he can get forgiveness from Poonam, he will not have peace. I went through phases in this story, first was the passion for Dev, then the reforming of Kabir, finally the redemption of Chandan. Maan is perhaps the only one who I could not do much with because he represents an ideal just as Brij/Sumeet and Pammi represent evil. In those terms, these characters were pretty much black and white. If I could write better, I would have liked to make them a bit grey but my imagination lacks in this part.

Brij 😡 And his plans . I guess this time would altogether be an end to everything that he has planned as well as all the destruction he has caused to all families involved.

Continue soon Avi 🤗

Originally posted by: punam2712

brij is back to hs dirty tricks

but he doesnt know that he has been seen and is now being followed

hope maan kills him for even thinking bad about his mishty

Originally posted by: srikrithi

So maan & Geet want to get married soon with elders blessing.

Hope dadi has good news.

Megha is naughty. Hope poonam gives positive reply to chandan regarding their future.

Brij missed geet the previous day otherwise he would have planned for her also

So that evil mind has started his plan.

Let's see what happens.