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hi babie main dinner karke aathi hoon tab tak bobby ke thread par jaakar meri edits dekho
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Originally posted by: priya111111

hi babie main dinner karke aathi hoon tab tak bobby ke thread par jaakar meri edits dekho


😆 Hi priya...
OK, mai bhi Bhojan kerke aati hu..😆
abhi dekhti hu..😛
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Prologue...


She was for him , but he denied her in an illusion . He forced her and she embraced death for his happiness . she was Selfless ,pure and mature. He was selfish , stained and immature. What would happen when his illusion disappeared and he would face the bitter truth .

The sorrow of losing what we love is nothing to the torment of having it present but denied us .



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.






Part - 46


All settled in their respective cars to move back home after spending beautiful time in d lap of nature ,, d care taker filled their car trunk with lots of farm fresh fruits n vegs ,, next day Meera n Prem wr going to hostel nd they promised Geet that they would come to meet her soon ,, they wr tired so Maan slanted d seat rest more so that they could sit more comfortably in a half laying position ,, after few miles journey Dadima slept taking d side support of car ,, Geet was also drowsy nd her head was falling right or left ,, Maan saw that and settled near her ,, he placed her head on his shoulder so that she could sleep properly ,, she snuggled in to him more nd held his shirt from his waist ,, Maan felt a tingling with d touch of her fingers ,, this was going to be a sweet torture for him throughout d journey but his every pore was filled with pleasure ,, this was a totally new feeling for him which he never felt ,, Geet was filling his life with all new feelings and emotions ...

Nothing is sweeter than your eyes meeting mine
Nothing is softer than your hands holding mine
Nothing is more gentle than feeling your cheeks over mine

Nothing is more relaxing than you talking to me
Nothing is safer than you walking by me
Nothing is nicer than your odor passing by me

Nothing is more enjoyable than seducing you
Nothing is more amazing than dancing with you
Nothing is more adorable than dreaming with you

Nothing was ...
Nothing is ...
Nothing will ever be ...
As sweet as you ..

A smile crept on his lips ,, he touched her hand and then closed her eyes to take a beautiful sleep ,, Dadima woke up with driver's call ,, they wr near d KV ,, Dadima looked at her two cuties who wr sleeping resting their head at each other ,, she adored d sight nd then woke up Maan and Geet .

They entered in d house ,, Nakul brought their bags and other stuffs ,, all wr in living hall when Maan informed Geet that outhouse is ready for her nd all her stuff was shifted there.

Dadima: arre ye kab hua?

Maan: Dadima wo Nakul aur Manish ne kiya ,, chalo dekhtey hei Geet ko accha lata hai ya nahi ?

Geet smiled and thanked him ,, they came in d out house which was rearranged for Geet ,, it was very beautiful nd simple ,, Geet appreciated that servant arranged all d things properly *

Maan: so Geet do u like ur space ?

Geet: yea , it's beautiful , Thanks .

Dadima: hummm ,, bful Maan.

Mann showed all d places nd from back there was a pvt pool ,, Maan's room was just opp of d pool ,, Nakul brought Geet's bad in d room nd asked about d dinner ,, she instructed him .

Dadima: Geet ,Maan fresh hoker diner ke liye aao , hum wait ker rahe hei .

Both: Ji Dadima..

Maan came to his bed room now ,, he closed d door and switched on d desk top screen nd next moment d pic of outhouse's bed room was there on screen of comp ,,, Geet nd Dadima didn't knew that behind them Maan arranged everything according to him ,, he set a CC camera in outhouse bedroom nd connected that in his bedroom ,, now he could see Geet ,, d OH has 1 big bedroom with a lobby which opened at poolside * he saw that Geet went to dressing room side which was not visible from there bcoz d camera was fixed on a big painting ,, he gave a satisfied smile and went to change.

All gathered in dining hall and after dinner retired to their respective room coz next day would be a hectic day for all * Geet settled in bed but in new place she felt lil scared ,, in house Maan's room was next to her so she was relieved but here she was alone nd away from all ,, she shoot a prayer to Babaji nd closed her eyes to sleep ,, Maan was working on his lappy but he was seeing her on screen ,, he felt that she is restless there ,, he got up and opened his lobby ,,came to OH from backside ,, he called at Geet's phone and told her to open d lobby door ,, she was confused but came nd opened d door ,, Maan was there .

Maan: Geet u r alone here but don't scare , i'm just opposite to ur bedroom nd kept a dim light always on at night ,, don't lock d lobby door , just shut it normally , i'm also opening mine , OK ,,, if u feel any fear just call me on intercom or phone , hum,, i'll be here right then ,, now sleep peacefully ,, KV is well secured with security system ,, GN.

Geet was awed at his care nd concern ,, her all fear blew over nd she passed a smile nodded in a yes .

Geet: Maan, i don't have any fear if u r around me ,, thanks n GN.

Maan wished her nd move back to his room ,, Geet came back and slept with a contented heart * it was true , now a days she was sleeping peacefully without any nightmare.

Next morning she got up and started her routine ,, she was happy nd comfortable after removing her plaster ,, she took bath and came in bedroom ,, she was in short n shirt ,, started a song on her phone ,, took out her dress from cupboard for office humming d song ,, Maan was also preparing for office nd watching her on screen now n then ,, his breath stuck in his throat when he saw that she started dancing in full masti mood .. OMG!! Ye fir se chot khayegi ,, he ran towards OH in full speed ,, next min he was there in her room holding her from her waist .

Maan: Geet, stupid ye kya ker rahi ho?

Geet was hell shocked with all this ,, he came like a storm nd held her ,, she was looking at him with wide eyes ,, she was in his arms very close to him ,, her both hands wr on his shoulders clutching his shirt in her fists * he was looking at her in her wide open hazel ,, she was looking all fresh like a flower ,, d fragrance of fruity shampoo was coming from her wet curls which wr blocking d clear view of her face ,, he softly caressed his finger on her forehead to remove those strands ,, she shuddered with that touch nd blink captivated in his spell ,, oblivious from everything they wr drowning deep in each other eyes trying to read d floating emotions in them ,, he whispered lost in those almond hazels .

Maan: tum janti ho ki tumne kya kiya hei ?

Geet:k,k, kya ?

Maan: jaan nikal le meri , ku kerti ho essa?

Geet: maine kya kiya?

Maan: kya nahi kiya ?

Geet: kya?

Maan: kya ker rahi thi ?

Geet: wo , wo ,, dance ,, she spoke meekly .

Maan: gir jati to ?

Geet: wo ,,

Maan: chup .

Geet: sorry .

Maan: aaj chod raha hun ,, aage gadbad ki na to wapis usse room mei le jaunga tumhe,, samjhi ?

Geet: hummm.

Maan: get ready.

He made her stand properly on her feet and parted to go * he wanted to go back ASAP coz her proximity was torturing him ,, his arms wr aching to crush her in them ,, he wanted to stop d moment to live in it till eternity keeping her in his arms ,,

I melt when you
smile
I can't breathe when you
speak
everything else fades away when you
touch me
I think I might fly when you
kiss me
all I know when you're around is
I love you

Precap - ooppss... what is this?



Part - 47
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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update😊
Edited by jasika08 - 11 years ago
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😛 kahan ho sab..??
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ksin yahi hoon! Editing kar rahi hoon! Isliye thodi slow hoon reply mein!
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😲😲besharam maan camera's lagadiya outhouse mein aur janab geet ko dekh saktha hai har waqt agar geet ko patha chalegi tho uska band bajegi😆😆
haila itna speed to cheetah bhi nahi daudegi yeh maan itna speed se ek jump maara geet ki room mein😆😆😆
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Originally posted by: singh24


😛 kahan ho sab..??


yehi par hoon update padkar comment derahi hoon


mona aagayi hai wahi par aajao
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome dear
loved it a lot

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