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Posted: 11 years ago
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status change kiya bina hi chali gayi ?
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part 43
nice part...
the witch searched about Geet...
but glad there was no info about her...
lovely part...
Daadima and Geet and Maan are having a good time...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow lovely cute update... shasha wat ever u try u cant separate my maaneet.. te way my maaneet ki busy life and geet was sad thinking she cant go shopping with her friends and dadi taking her, leaving my maan as bgs for them was lovely cute.. te way my maan planing for fh, his smirk, did he ask her friends to join them to give geet surprise..i love te update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello friends...
Lakshu, priya,lily,mauaa,dona,indu,rashmi,sona n mona...🤗


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Posted: 11 years ago
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heyyy beautuful ppl.. i m back.. hw r u all.. missed me?? awww.. me too...😃
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kyaaa aaj bhi priyaa ki gulli... badi irregular bacchi hai.. pta nhi hmesha 1st kese aa jati hai...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: mauaa

heyyy beautuful ppl.. i m back.. hw r u all.. missed me?? awww.. me too...😃


mauaaa..
😆 yes dear we missed u...🤗

net bahot slow hei ,, pata nahi update hoga ya nahi...
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For banner credit goes to my dear Lakshmi...🤗


Prologue...


She was for him , but he denied her in an illusion . He forced her and she embraced death for his happiness . she was Selfless ,pure and mature. He was selfish , stained and immature. What would happen when his illusion disappeared and he would face the bitter truth .

The sorrow of losing what we love is nothing to the torment of having it present but denied us .



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.





Part - 44


They wr in green valley area ,, small hills wr all around ,, they entered in a beautiful farm house nd d Mexican family was waiting for them ,, they welcome them and brought their bags in side ,, Dadima and Geet entered in d living hall ,, Maan instructed d lady and her husband for further works ,, they kept everything ready .

Dadima: Maan u decided it in advance and told them to settle everything .

Maan: ji Dadima ,, aap ki princess ka mood off tha morning mei aur fir Geet ko easily time nahi milega ,, so decided to spend weekend here , now happy u both d ladies ?

Dadima: so much , thanku beta and i request u too ,, plzz enjoy d time nd don't shut urself in d room .

Maan smiled and went to his room to freshen up ,, Dadima showed Geet her room and then went to her ,, all gathered in living hall after few min .

Geet: Dadima i'll cook today .

Maan: aaj nahi , morning mei BF .

Dadima: haan Geet kal hum aur tum banayenge ,waise Geet tumhe pata hei Maan bhi badi acchi cooking kerty hei .

Geet : really !! Maan aur cooking ,, hehe ,, sab pheeka banatey honge , Italian .

Maan : wo healthy hei tumhare jaisa fatty khana nahi ,, jise khane se pahale sochna pade .

Geet: aahaaa,,, sochna pade ,, dekhey hei kal ?

Maan: OK .

They wr pulling each other leg when Geet heard some familiar voices outside and looked at Maan who stood up and went out * next min Geet's eyes wr wide opened and jaw dropped seeing Meera , Prem , Arjun and Annie there at d door * Meera run nd hugged her tightly then Prem ,, A&A too showered their love at her and all wished Dadima * Geet looked at Maan with a wide smile and thanked him ,, Dadima too gave a sweet smile to Maan and she thanked God for bring back her jovial Maan.

The FH filled with noise and laughter nd all had a gala time * all wr sensing that Maan n Dadima wr taking extra care for Geet * all enjoyed their dinner and spent time together then left for their rooms,, Meera shared with Geet ,, both settled in bed nd talk n talk n talk ,, Geet teased her for Prem and Meera too decided to take sneak peek in Geet's heart .

Meera: Geet , MK nd his Dadima r taking good care of u .

Geet: yeah , nd Dadima loves me a lot ,, i got family love after so many yrs .

Meera: aur MK, i think he has a soft corner for u ?

Geet: he's a good friend like u nd Prem .

Meera: but his eyes shows something more than friendship .

Geet: no , it's not like that .

Meera: it's Geet ,

Geet: i didn't feel that.

Meera : bcoz u didn't think about love .

Geet: love ???

Meera: hummm .. love ,, didn't u feel anything in his closeness?

Geet: Means ,, what type of feel ?

Meera: dumbo ,,, didn't u feel anything in ur heart and tummy when he talked to u and looked at u ?

Geet: nahi to , wo to hum roz hi baatey kerty hein .

Meera: wo tere paas nahi aata kya , like me n Prem ?

Geet: paas ,, jaise tum aur Prem , pagal nahi ?

Meera: buddhu ,, kabhi essa nahi hua wo tere bahot kareeb kada ho ya baitha ho ?Tujhe kuch nahi feel hota ?

Geet became quiet remembering their car moments in that rainy night when both wr very close ,, she gave a confusing look to Meera ,, Meera smacked on her head playfully .. buddhu hei tu . Both slept but d fleshes of that night wr becoming alive in her closed eyes.

Sometimes I wonder how I feel about you,
Scared of these feelings because it's still new
I catch myself thinking of the best way to share,
Hoping you'll return my confession showing you care
And then I catch myself again... and drag my thoughts back to reality
I am back at square one, does this just happen to me?

Next day was d full masti day for all ,, in morning Maan went for a light run in his farms ,, A&A went for morning walk and spent beautiful morning with romance in orchids ,, Dadima was in d garden and instructing and talking to care taker while Prem babu was roaming around Meera in kitchen ,, Geet was enjoying their chori-chori romance ,, Geet prepared BF for all and Meera helped her ,, they made many things like Meera made cheese sandwich for Prem ,, Geet made aloo and cottage cheese parathas for all and Pasta for Maan * Everything was ready ,, Prem , Meera nd Dadima wr waiting for A&A and Maan for BF ,, Dadima called Maan but he was not picking d call .

Dadima: Maan phone nahi utha rahe ,, kahan hei ?

Geet: Dadima mei dekh ker aati hu .

Geet entered Maan's room nd called him ,, Maan ,, Maan ,, ooopss ,, sorry ,, mai baad mei aati hoon nd she turned to go ,, when she entered in Maan's room he was coming out from his washroom rubbing his hair with towel ,, he was only on jeans nd his upper body was bare ,, Geet saw him nd turned to go giving him time to dress up but Maan held her wrist nd pulled her inside ,, pasted her to d wall ns asked

Maan: kahan bhaag rahi ho Geet ?

She was bewildered with his sudden action ,, looked at him with open mouth ,, he was very close to her ,, all most towering her ,, her senses became active ,, his colon and deo's fragrances hit her nose nd forcing her to inhale more n more while his fresh bare upper body with tough muscles was attracting her eyes ,, his wet messy hair making him more luring ,, she was looking at him bounded in a spell and felt a churn in her tummy ,, her breaths becoming uneven .

Maan's eyes wr on her face ,, he was stunned at his action why he stopped her like this ,, everything happened in a blink nd now he was very near to her ,, he whispered ... bolo na ku aai thi ? She didn't reply, Meera's words wr roaming in her mind ,, everything became oblivious for her ,, she didn't heard what he was asking ?Her hand was on her tummy clutching her shirt tightly in her fist.

Geet ,, hummm ,, bolo na ,,, kk y a ,,, ku aai thi ,,, wo,, wo ,, wo kya ,, kuch hua ,, kya hua ,, kuch,, kahan ,, tummy mei,, tummy ... Geet , he came in sense ,,, haan ,, haan ,, G e e t . He shook her ,, kya hua ? wo , bhook lagi hei ,, chlo na ,, Maan smiled listening her reply , he shook his head looking at her nd she nervously chewed her lower lip ,, a food particle on d corner of her lip got his attraction ,, he picked that with his thumb nd finger ,, she parted her lip with a lil gasp and felt a shiver in her body when his fingers touched her ,,, his all attention was on her supple lips which wr tantalizing him to capture ,, she was losing herself in his magnetic aura.

Their dreamy moments broke with Dadima's call ,, Maan's phone buzzed again nd broke their reverie,, Maan moved back , looked for his phone , took out that from his track pant's pocket nd replied.

Maan: hell0 Dadima.

Dadima: Maan where r u ? we r waiting for u on BF table nd where is Geet she went to call u ?

Maan: i'm coming Dadima ,, aumm ,, yeah, Geet is here ,, coming Dadima ,, he looked at Geet who moved out from there .

Dadima: OK.

Maan cut d call ,, food particle was still in his pinch ,, he saw that and ate with a smile ,, Cheese ,,, Geet tumhe to tummy mei hi kuch hua lekin mujhe to bahot jagah bahot kuch hua ,, sshhh,, ye ladki mujhe pagal ker ke chodegi , mai kya karoon?

Geet stopped in corridor resting her back to wall ,,, Babaji!! Ye kya tha ? ye mujhe kya ho raha hei ? Her breath wr heavy nd face was burning ,, she cupped her face ,, breath in and out to compose herself ,, then went directly to kitchen .


Precap - is this love..??



Part - 45

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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


mauaaa..
😆 yes dear we missed u...🤗

net bahot slow hei ,, pata nahi update hoga ya nahi...


hey babbie.. i missed u too... net ko maro goli.. try karo 1 baar agr ud ho to its ok vrna aajao gappe marte hai.. 😉 ud kal aftrnoon me dedena..

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