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Posted: 11 years ago


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Chapter 18




Hmm.. Geet?

Yes?

May I accompany you to nursery to pick Lee up?

I was surprised at his sudden request. His eyes held so much hope like a kid which I find adoring.

Of course.

His eyes lit up like a Christmas tree.

Thanku so much Tesoro. Then we can go to mall or restaurant after that. What would she like to eat? I know Lee loves ice creams, but

He went on and on and I knew how much he loved her. Her ignorance is making him so hurt that if she tell him to lift an elephant, he will gladly do.. I mean try it..


You know, Lee loves this car. Since the button practically controls the driving, she wants this car to ride herself. In the ad, they practically showed how to operate. Her biggest dream is to drive this car with you and roam the city. That day I ordered this one and it got delivered yesterday. This is my another b'day present.

Shock will be a small word for this news!! I never knew that!! And he bought this Porsche boxster to fulfill her dream?? Before I could say anything, he sprinted out after parking the car. He is such a kid at times.



Lee, your dad is so handsome.

One of the cute girls gushed looking at maan. Even a kid is so floored by him. He was helping one of the kid when she fell down from swing. After a second, the crying child was giggling and laughing. All grace to his charms!!

I know.

Lee gave the girl a sharp look and stormed to maan's way. I followed her giving the girl a sorry look. Maan pecked the forehead of now laughing girl and gave her to a man.

You should not kiss other girls. You will get cooties.

When he bent down to her level, Lee wiped his mouth with her hanky. She then stomped towards our car.

What just happened?

She is jealous Mr. Khurrana.

Jealous? For what?

For kissing other baby girl, but not her.

Oh fish!! I m ready to give thousands and thousands of kisses to my baby girl. But when I went she ignored me as if I was not there. That's when the girl fell down. I will go and apologize.

Not now maan. She will come around.


When we reached, she was looking admiringly at the car.

Mom, I love this car so much. In tv, they showed its working. Its so easy. They say its auto.. auto..

Automated..I know baby. Maan bought this for you.

She looked at him hesitantly.

Thankyou.

Do you want to drive it?

No.

She unlocked the back door and settled in back seat.

She is till angry at me.

He pouted and I gave a peck to his pouty mouth. When he still pouted, waiting for the kiss, I smacked his lips with my palm and entered the passenger seat.

When we entered the mall, he dragged her to toy's section without waiting for me. After some seconds, the sight I saw was just unbelievable. Lee was walking like a princess in front and Maan was walking behind her carrying all the toy bags. He was panting heavily but there was a small amused smile on his lips.

After paying it for toys which I think it must have cost him some thousands we walked back to car. I m sure half of the toys is of no use because she don't like it much.

Momma.. I want to go St. Mary's

St Mary's?

Yes mom. The place where we went last week. Lots of babies..

which place Geet?

It's an orphanage Maan. But what is she going to do?

When we reached there, the mother there came to greet us. She was a friendly lady. After having some friendly talk, Lee grabbed all the toys and started to give it to the kids there. I was not at all surprised. Whenever we visit, she used to give something to them. She is so kind hearted at this stage.
Maan was all the while silent. I think I saw some unshed tears in his eyes.

After donating large amount we were going to restaurant.

Why you gave all the toys to kids there? Do you not want it?

Mom buy me enough. She loves me so much. I don't want anything.

I choked the sob that erupted. Maan parked the car to a less traffic road. Picking Lee in his lap, he pecked her forehead.

I m so sorry Lee. That day I shouldn't have ignored you. But can you give me a chance? I want to make things right between us.

You are good. Momma says those who gives money to poor is good.

Then she bit her lip in thought.

You want to be my daddy?


Maan looked at me and smiled.

Yes. I want to be your daddy.

Will you hurt my mommie? She was crying always after you left.

Lee noticed that. She cares for me so much.

No. I will never hurt your mommie. Its my promise.

Pinky promise?

He held her pinky finger and kissed it.

Pinky promise.


I sat up in the bed as loud and some hushed voices from room. We reached the beach resort late that night. Lee was already asleep and I dint get a chance to look around how the resort. By the sound of calming ways, I know its going to be beautiful.
No daddy. Momma uses this type of cup for cookies.

But in this recipe there is a different cup.

Silly daddy. This has a cutter.

Oh!! You are an intelligent girl Lee.

She felt so contempt hearing the duo bantering. Lee always longed for a father figure in her life. And now she is fulfilling all her wishes through him. Last week, he amazed me how good is he as a daddy. Memories of my own childhood with my dad crept into my mind. He was so amazing. But fate as always was cruel in her life, or I should say Mo..

Make it fast dad. Mommie is going to wake up.

I threw the blankets aside and listened the hushed voices again.

This is too sticky.

Put the flour. You don't know anything daddy. But I love you.

Love you too princess.


I took a sneak peak at kitchen. Lee was sitting at the slab while Maan was busy cooking something. The whole place is so messy along with their faces. Its like a tornado hit the place.

Momma is going to kill us if she sees this. She likes clean places.

Don't worry. We will clean it before she wakes up.

They did high five and continued to cook. I mean Maan cooked while Lee instructed. Maan would be a wonderful father. He was kind and patient and loving. Anyone would feel secured under his embrace.

Without disturbing them , I walked back to take a quick shower.



How is it Momma?

Its amazing angel.

The cookies looked good if the shapes and taste were to be ignored. But if we see the love, then it's the best cookie I ever had.

See. I told him how to make like the lady in TV show.

You mean you taught him?

Yeah..

You guys did a wonderful job.

Their grins were so adorable, but Maan gave me a look as if asking Really?


One hour later we all went out to take strolls through the vine garden, 10 minutes drive away from our beach resort. There is a gaming room for kids and lee wanted to go there. Only kids were allowed. So Maan double checked all the security and assured her inside. She dint even wait to wave goodbye and joined the other kids.

The vineyard was amazing. All types of vegetables and fruits were planted. Maan said that the best wine is produced from here. Even the nearby hotels stock it for their clients. They were ready to give a sample to taste it, but since it was early in the morning, I refused.

Then there were culinary shops and other kitchen accessories stall. Maan bought me some stuffs while I enjoyed our intimate hand holding. At one point he stood closely and hugged her from back while I checked some cooking books.

You are looking so lovely my Tesoro..

A self satisfied smile plastered on his face.
When we reached back I was tired as hell. Maan tugged the shoes I wore. Then he started massaging my ankles.

Maan.. You don't have to do that.

I want to Geet..

But.

Don't worry.. I will have something in return.

He eyed my lips mischievously making me blush. I purred delightedly when his hands did wonder. Oh god!! I could get used to this.

Where is Lee?

She is sleeping. I wonder after eating lots of ice creams she could sleep soundly. I would have jumped with energy.

Hey.. She is my baby.

No darling. Our baby.

Oh god!! He is so Perfect!!


After taking a nap, I decided to make some tea. Maan was snoring a little. His lips wide open. At noon we all slept in one bed like a family. The more I thought about it, the more I got excited. We dint confess our love with words, but at times words were not needed. Our actions are much stronger than that. Lee was no longer in our room. May be she went to play room with her dolls. I wonder how he managed to set up a play room for her. He surprises me every second.

I looked for Lee at play room. The room was deadly silent. Dolls were scattered on floor. My heart was beating rapidly thinking the worst.
Lee..

I looked in each room, outside and back to play room. She will be somewhere here. Don't need to panic. From the corner of my eyes, I saw a red paper on table. My entire body was shaking and I could feel my fear was turning right.


Lee lacks manners. So I m taking her away to teach it. You know she is safe.
Your s Loving Mom.


Maan.. Maan..

I started sobbing hysterically. Maan came flying to room. He cradled me in his arms.

What's wrong Geet?

Maan.. My angel.. She took my angel away. I need her Maan.

Who? What are you saying Geet? Where is Lee?

My mom.. took my baby.. She must be crying. Mom will kill her Maan.. I want my baby. I want.. my..bab

My body felt limp and everything went black.




Thanku Guys for so much support. Silent readers, pls comment not only to my story, but all the other beautiful writers over here. You guys play an important role making GF active.

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@all: I have nothing to say about my sudden disappearance. Its just my personal life is a little bit tough these days. I dunno how this part turned out. Hope you guys like it.

According to anu di's suggestion, I havechanged Lee's age to 3 years. Thanku Di and i m happy you are liking it.

@Jeevana.: This update is for u my chulbuli girl. I dunno how it turned up. But u have to bear with it. My b'lated Bday wishes to you.🤗 Better Late than Never.

@sdlife: Shobha, Your comment made me help to take this sudden twist. Thanks girl.😃


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Posted: 11 years ago

Thanks Remya...😃

Another twist in the tale...
Lee maan gayi itni jaldi...😆
But where did Maan lack with security... He did check everything na ...😛
Lee ko doonde ne chalega ab Maan & Geet ...
Heading change karo na
Edited by JeevanaP - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
oops i forgot Praf.. My mind is not with me.. A lot of things are going on lately..
Thanks yaar..
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Posted: 11 years ago
aww i was loving family moments
the way lee behaved is so mature she understand when her mom is sad nd hurt but she did not disturb her at that time
aww baby lee got J of other girl bcoz maan was kissing her
maan sambhal kar rahna bith the girls in ur life is very possessive for u
finally Lee forgave maan nd maaneet moments were awesome but this sudden twist hope Lee will be fine nd soon with her parents
I think now geets past will unfold
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

oops i forgot Praf.. My mind is not with me.. A lot of things are going on lately..
Thanks yaar..

abhi tak shaadi bhi nahi huvi hai teri... abhi se dadi ki jaise kaam karne lagi tu 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
why was it too good to be true
no fair on her
just when she got her love
mother from hell comes back
she is her real mom
god knows man
where did she take lee
awww isnt lee the cutest kid ever
well she is
and also the kindest
he does make a good father
bless seems lee is letting him be her daddy
awww that was so cute
how she gave the toys are adorable
but this twist is scary
how did she find them
damn this is bad
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Posted: 11 years ago
It was an awesome update!👏

Lee and Maan bonding is sooo cute😊

Geet's Mom seems to be the evil step mom of Cinderella and Snow White😈...except for the fact that Geet already has her prince charming to help her out!😳

Looks like its time for Geet's past to unfold!

And hope everything is fine in your personal life too.

Edited by Dia_Kapoor - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome part
lee j..bcoz maan kissed another kid
loved maaneet & lee moments
geet's mom took lee...why...eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow...nice n long update... 😊
their family moments were sooo cute...maan bought car as lee liked it...
n lee is so sensitive...she thought to donate toys to orphanage...
bt twist aa gaya beech me...now geet will b telling maan abt her past...n thy'll rescue lee...
n abt geet's mom...well for tht we hav to wait for past to unfold
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg.. such a nice update and a horrific end.. hope Lee is safe..

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