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hiii kalpana.. urf BB.. finallly i read all 8 parts.. and i loved it.. v nice work dear.. yah in the starting it ws v dark n gray shaded.. i hate dev.. i know all do😉 n loved the arnav n khushi in this story.. yah the story hs its own charm n maaneet for sure... so good job dear..👏
Thanks for the review!
I was planning to complain to you today that you did not read my work yet and here you are already having read it! Wow! So happy! BTW if you want PMs, have to buddy me as I am number one bhullakkad and will forget to inform you when I update!
About the darkness of this story, you should have read LJ coz it ends in the same action packed way. Do read it as it shares the same first seven chapters as in this story and then it ends in next two chapters. So LJ has total 9 chapters but you have already read first seven here so you just have to read remaining two! It is as racy as the first 7 chaps! Happy that you liked my version of Arhi!😃
Once again, thanks for the review!
P.S. You will love Dev of DFL coz he plays an important role in getting MG together! If you have not read DFL, you are missing out on best MG nok-jhok and best comedy by Dev!😆
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