MG - SS ~BEKASI~ # 2 LAST PART pg/13 || April 20th || - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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congrats for new thraed
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Originally posted by: sona_jyotika

hi
sorry couldn't comment on ur story as i came online after july 2013
jst completed this ss and now posting my comment
i really enjoy ur writing

all updates are really good

like the way NAKUL informed Maan ... first i thought ISHIKA is a girl who is spoiling geet bt now i love her as she is the only support of Geet in her hard time

i think dadima has bribed the doctor to abort geet's baby so that maan misunderstood her...

update soon plzzz



thank you for the wonderful comment
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Originally posted by: sdlife19

you only sleep and dont update



lol di 😆
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PART 15:

Ricky I want to speak to Geet ... Isn't she with Roop? A guilt ran through his veins learning that his Geet had been facing a lot of things and he was completely unaware of everything.



Geet ... Roop ke ghar se bhag gayi Maan, jaha tak maine Ishi se suna Vicky was torturing her!! He felt like a rotten idiot listening to Ricky. What was he even thinking when he left Geet?? It had been a month he had spoke to his wife, knowing that she was with Roop he had moved away. He felt like punching the life out of Vicky for even laying his eyes on Geet. Maan stomped out to leave to Ishi's house, enough is enough he will get his wifey back he thought.


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Maan's heart sunk as he found her pale and lifeless body on the bed, she was given medicine to sleep. Ricky who stood behind Maan tried to console him but there was no use, Maan broke down holding Geet into his arms ... She was a kid, a plain teenager and knowing this fact he still married her. And when she had put her heart out he had simply walked away from her leaving all alone and shattered.




Maan held Geet into his arms and began to leave ... Ishita stood by the door blocking his way and determinedly spoke ... Meri Geet aapke saath kahi nahi jayegi, when you didn't bother for her in this one month then why now?? Kabhi yeh janne ki koshish kiya ki woh kaisi thi? Kis haal mein thi?? Uss waqt nahi toh aaj bhi nahi




He inhaled sharply and glared Ishi ... don't block my way, just let me go he roared ignoring her questions. Ishita came forward and held Maan's collar, kaha leke jaoge aap isse?? Wapas uss ghar mein jaha usse har din taana milega?? Ek achi bahu hone ka class lagega?? Agar bahu bann nahi paayi toh usse badla lene uski bache ko maar diya jayega??




Ishita bas karo ... Maan is her husband and right now Geet needs him more than us ... please, Ricky tried to cut her off but She was nowhere to stop, kyun chup rahon main Ricky?? Kya yeh aadmi nahi jaanta tha ki Geet was just eighteen when he married her?? He couldn't wait for her to grow mature like you did for me!! Tumne iss liye wait kiya taaki main samjhon ki shaadi kya hoti hai ... He didn't and when Geet was lost in her adolescence this man had crossed every limit with her ... He had taken away her teenage, Geet bachi hai ... Usse kuch pata nahi tha, maine usse barbaad kiya ... Na main usse woh sab dikhati na yeh sab hota ... And Mr. Khurana like your family blamed Geet for her lustful desires on you ... She could have easily given into Vicky, she would have been sharing a bed with him ... But she didn't, she only loved you ... yeh baat koi nahi samjhega, sabko bache ki padi hai ... Meri Geet kisika kuch nahi lagti, agar lagti toh aaj yeh haal nahi hua hota uska




Ishi ... Ricky's hand lifted on Ishita but he left in the mid air ... I told you many times, its their personal matter ... Hamara koi haq nahi banta ki hum kuch bole




Kyun nahi bole?? This man has sent divorce letter to Geet, then why not?? Koi Geet se pyar nahi karta, na uski maa, na baap, na uski behen jo usse pyar karne ka dawaa karti hai ... She is a big idiot who had never cared to take Geet to the hospital ... kamse kam hame uski baby ka toh pata ho jaata na?? Ricky helplessly put his hand on Ishi's mouth ... bas karo Ishi, he is still her husband and we cant do anything ... let them solve, agar kuch nahi hua toh hum dono hai Geet ke saath, he pushed Ishi out of the way and pulled out a visiting card from his pocket ... Maan my mother is a gynecologist ... Geet ko unke paas leke jao, you will find a way!!




So many revelations at a time, first her pregnancy and then the divorce issue ... Things were going more and more tangled. He drove Geet to the address of the doctor given by Ricky, and waited outside while she was being treated... the words of Ishi came back to him. She was right ... he could have atleast asked about Geet's wish regarding kids. After coming back to India he had not cared to use protection, probably she wanted to insist him to use it ... but didn't. So many things changed after they landed back.




He was called by the doctor inside ... Geet was still unconscious, handing the papers to Maan doctor spoke ... She had two minus one pregnancy Mr. Khurana!! And I guess the doctor didn't make out while giving Geet the drug that it worked on one of the babies and the other one was safe ... one baby was extinguished ... I mean one of two healthy fetuses was killed, almost as if having half an abortion. The doctor inserted the needle into Geet's abdomen, aiming at one of the fetuses, not knowing that she was pregnant with twins!!




Tears ran down his eyes for what he learnt ... his wife had a miscarriage and he named it to be carelessness ... though it was right but it was the only thing that hammered his head. It was a right saying of all the good things a person has done ... one bad thing and the accumulated unimpeachable goes wrong!!




This is sad Mr. Khurana ... She is just twenty ... I guess this miscarriage had helped her out, she is too weak for carrying two babies ... but the way one baby was being killed ... no one could make out that she had another life inside, not even Geet ... agar sahi waqt aap hospital nahi leke aate toh dusra bacha shaayad maa ke pet mein hi mar jaata ... you can take her back home tomorrow, for now let her rest.




It was his responsibility to look after her and he had ended up hurting her ... I am sorry jaan, really sorry ... He spoke it loud enough for Geet to hear it. She came into her senses and stared at her happiness ... she was about to open her mouth when Maan stopped her ... no Geet, don't say anything ... I have decided we are going back to London tomorrow, we had enough!!




I didn't kill the baby Maan ... I didn't, I can never do that, he pulled his wife into arms promising himself that he will find out who did what.




So these were the things which Nakul told him few hours ago!! He wanted Maan to find out by himself. The divorce thing was still a mistery ... who could it be?? Maan rang up the police station and got Brij and Vicky arrested. That was Geet's family, that was the reason she was like that ... When he had to play the role of a parent he left her to face the world. He was cruel more than the others ... guilt began to eat his mind and soul.


Vicky and Brij were charged completely in unrelated matters but none had the courage to ask Maan. While Dadima wondered what happened so suddenly that Maan left to London with Geet, she rang him up to find out the truth ... and then he heard from her ... Humne hi sab kuch karaaya Maan, but still that girl managed to take you away from us like Meera did ... Dev bhi aise hi chala gaya aur ab aap ... Hume laga ki agar koi aur ladki aapki jindagi mein aati toh shaayad aap hamare saath hote lekin wahi hua ... history repeated!!




She was his grandmother and being tied up in this mess ... he lost his baby for which he would never be able to forgive her ... we will never come back dadima, main nahi chahta ki Geet ke saath aage kuch galat ho!!



Precap: last part!!



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Edited by dreamyharika - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update
maan came to know all the truth!!!!!
good that maaneet went back to london, now they can live in peace
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG meri jaan di wht an emotional update it was aur di jaise maine kaha tha ke it was his dadi who did all this😡😭 aur di ishi was so right today aur she did confessed ke she too did a wrong thing in showing geet all those adult things which got imprinted in her teenage kid mind lekin di she was right ke koi yeh nahi dekhega ke she truly loves her maan warna just for pleasure she could have been wid tht ghatiya vicky😡😭 aur di maan got another shock abt divorce papers lekin ricky ne badi mushkil se ishi ko roka aur told him to go to his mother who is a gynac aur di there maan got another shock ke there one twin baby died 😭 aur then doc told how geet is weak to carry two babies aur agar thodi der aur hoti tau her this baby could have died in her womb😭 aur di maan realized his mistakes aur just went in to apologize her wife who crazily loves him aur was so happy seeing her love her life standing there aur di maan did the right thing of moving away from India as this place has hurt his geet aur di jaane se pehle I salute maan ke he punished tht vicky aur brij rightly aur aise ke woh zindagi main kabhi bahar nahi aa sakte😡👏 aur di his dadi confessed her henious crime aur di maan rightly said ke he will never return back to india ever again to make his geet go through any other pain 👏 di precap says last part aur me sad ke meri this fantabulous story is ending😭 di jaldi se next dena ur baby is waiting😭😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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dadi was selfish
to keep maan with her she did this..poor geet
its fine now maan took her to london..
loved ishis love to geet.
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Ishi too was right.. N Ricky too right... Now Maan got to know real reason... So finallly Maan came to know abt Dadima's bad intentions... Still their one baby is alive... Waiting for their happy moments now...Amazing part..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG..


dadima she was all the time she was asking for the child and she herself killed the baby.. how disgusting was she.. it was not love or fear but mere nonsense of wanting maan to stay with them leaving his wife... and such people does not require anyone as they only thing about them.


and Maan wat did he do.. ishita was right and for the first time i liked tat she was saying all tat.. Geet was just a child and was not even into anything like this and when she got some love she was selfish for it.. but she did not hurt anyone.. she only feared of losing maan.. i did hate her first but now when we see all the circumstances its only geet who is at loss..wat did maan, roop or dadima lose nothing as they were only selfish in all and it was only geet who was at loss

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