MG~ SS~The Torment-Thread-5- UPDATED Pt 41/Pg 136/ 21st Mar. .. ... .

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-Lehar-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#241

awesome part

loved it

dev tried to force geet..but maan came at the right time and beaten him blue and black...

maan called dadima and told they are leaving the function

nice precap

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Twilightsparkle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#242

i am die hrard fan of kurbaan and this pic taken away my heart re

laks 👏 no words to say mardala tune

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Twilightsparkle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#243

heyy

ohhh i am totally late again sorry first health second this week busy with my interview you know i would get clear telephonic also i will get job by end of week re feeling happy for that

yep sorry for delay in comment will try to be here all ways hope so lolzz

first the title attracted me so much and then the story proceeding also

well maaneet meeting and falling in love directly it wobt be happening in maaneet and in ur story u have taken up there journey in different way i loved it

ohh how can maan do that to her lieing for his own good he shattered one innocent soul dreams heart because of it

geet's family is such a cowards hate them i am glad at least rajji helped her at that point of her almost death time also he haven't her

even dadi oops that is not really for givable here

haha at last he got his so called ture love here sam its better i wont talk about her

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Twilightsparkle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#244

ohh man he got realised what he did but its too late for his one mistake she lost her life

i love the way you presented maan feelings when he saw her after long way and even that slap he deserve more here

geet being cold is very much normal here so there is no point of blaming maan even dadi also

but at end she given chance to them to meet her at home they got to know how she suffered

now this accident bringing them close to one another its very hard for geet to be with both maan and dadi the reason of disturbance in her life now the same persons taking care of her

now at last geet going to KM wow will read missed parts soon

will be here with comment

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gurti30

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Posted: 11 years ago

#245

Loved maaneet scene.maan helping geet to wear necklace and geet is feeling somethung with his touch
that disgusting dev tried to misbehave with geet but maan reached on time .maan would have killed him if geet didnt stop him

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sanghita0000

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Posted: 11 years ago

#246

awesome update...but u didn't pm me from part 31...but I managed to stalk ur updates...😆

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Desigirls12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#247

wow lovely emotional update... te way my maan helping his geet to get ready was lovely..te way my maan ki pov abt wat he missed in his stupidity was lovely..te way my maaneet with dadi to marriage and were enjoying was lovely.. but tat b** dare to touch my maan ki geet., te way geet struggling with him and my maan came to save her was lovely touching.. te way my maan ki gussa , oh god if geet have't stopped he have killed dev.. i love te update