MG~ SS~The Torment --Thread 4-UPDATED Pt 29/Pg103/5th Mar. ... ... . - Page 52

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Posted: 11 years ago
Uff.. ho gayee inki fight shuru wapas.. but slightly Geet anger is mellowed down.. Geet n dadi's talk.. she got to know abt man's past.. she can analyze how he was at that time n in his stubbornness mistake happened...
Nice part..

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Posted: 11 years ago
Maan forcing her to stay at their house. Geet adamant but finally accepts. Arjun marriage. Geet needs shopping for marriage.

Dadima volunteers n gives hey saree. Waise bhi Geet hi pehenegi baad me.
Maan., Geet n Shopping!!!!
Can't wait for it.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24



Lakshu,priya,lily,dona,mauaa,sona,indu,rashmi N mona..🤗



tum roz mujhe bulaati ho
par main kabhi nahin aati
sorry yaar
but this time I m here
Hii Babie
how are you?
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Posted: 11 years ago
LO
ye geet abhi bhi itni reluctant kyun hai
Dono itn care kar rahe hain uski phir bhi wo aisa kyun kar rahi nhai
I know they did wrong with her but how many good works they will have to do for her for their one act?
I hope taht geet stays here for some more days
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful update dear
geet wanted to go to her apartment but maan and dadi didnt let her go
Geet wanted to go for shopping for arjuns marriage dadima gave geet her saris to wear for funcions
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Posted: 11 years ago
maan is angry hearing geet leaving 2 her house
n she was again struck with them
finally geet came to know maans past
n dadi giving her lehenga n saris..
maan n shopping..wow..
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Posted: 11 years ago



lakshu,priya,lily,dona,mauaa,indu,rasmi,sona N mona..🤗



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Posted: 11 years ago



plzzz give me space for 2 posts..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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For banner credit goes to my dear Lakshmi...🤗


Prologue...


She was for him , but he denied her in an illusion . He forced her and she embraced death for his happiness . she was Selfless ,pure and mature. He was selfish , stained and immature. What would happen when his illusion disappeared and he would face the bitter truth .

The sorrow of losing what we love is nothing to the torment of having it present but denied us .



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.





Part - 27

Next day in afternoon Dadima called Maan that she and Geet r going for shopping which made him tense coz Geet can't walk properly then why this shopping in this condition?

Maan: no Dadima , don't take Geet ,,, she can't walk or stand for long .

Dadima : but we r going for her ,,, she need few things for her .

Maan: Ok give me list , i'll do that .

Dadima: Maan , how could u give her measurment to a tailor or how could u bring her shoes ,, try to understand.

Maan : Oh !! but why this tailor and shopping ? koi function hei kya ?

Dadima: haan engagement hei aur fir shaadi.

Maan: engagement aur shaadi !! kiski , kab ? he got a shock and felt a pit in his tummy in fear .

Dadima: Maan tum esse ku react ker rahe ho ? arree Arjun ke hei aur Geet ko wo attend kerni hei coming weekend mei ,,, apni chot ki wajah se wo kuch bhi prepare nahi ker pai esliye hum usse shopping ke liye le ja rahe hei .

Maan took a sigh of relief and said: OK , don't go alone ,, i'm coming with u .( he himself was shocked at his reaction )

Dadima: tum chaloge ? soch lo , ladies shopping hei aap to humare sath Indian Store tak nahi jaate.

Maan: wo , safty point of view se . kuch prob ho gai to ? i'm coming to pick u both .


He shifted d time of his meeting and rushed to KV where Dadima and Geet wr waiting for him * all came to a Mall where some NRI had their boutiques with Indian stuffs * maan sat in a corner and Dadima and Geet got busy in their work * maan's one eye was on Geet and when a tailor came to take her measurement and touched her with measuring tape Maan became restless * Dadima was with Geet and advising her so he can't say anything but he wanted to throw out that tailor who was touching her here and there ,,, bloody why don't they have a lady tailor in a ladies garment shop ..grrr * he hardly passed d time there * they came out and Maan held Geet's hand for support .


Maan: ho gaya ya aur bhi kuch baaki hei ?

Dadima and Geet annoyed ,,, lo ho gaye shuru .

Dadima: Maan , keep quiet ,, I told u in advance ,, now let us do our shopping.

Maan rolled his eyes and huffed .

Geet sadly : Dadima ess plaster leg mei mai shoe ya heels kaise pahanugi ?

Dadima and Maan looked at her sadly ,,, really this was a big prob for her * all stood there for few sec in thoughts then Maan brought them back in boutique and called their tailor .

Maan google and showed him some pics and asked him if he could make like that shoes with silk aur net fabric matching with d dresses * d tailor was master in his work ,, he thought for few moments and replied in a yes * Maan told him to take d size of Geet's feet and specially her plastered foot ( her heel and ankle was covered with plaster) * d tailor took d size and assured them that he'll make d same designs with matching fabrics.


Maan showed d designs to Dadima and Geet and they wr awed * Geet gave a beautiful dimpled smile to Maan ,,, hyeee ,, I could do anything for this smile * he smiled and mouthed ,,happy * she nodded and Dadima was on cloud 9 seeing both of her child's smile .

They shopped some more stuff and a beautiful gift for Arjun and Annie * when they wr coming out from d mall Sasha got that sight ... Maan holding Geet's hand * he was talking to her and smiling * Dadima was also with them and all wr looking very happy * this thing burn her alive ,, she plastered a fake smile on her face and went to them .


Sasha: GE Dadima , ,, GE MK .

Dadima: GE Sasha , how r u ?

MK: GE Sasha, what r u doing here?

Sasha looked at Geet from top to toe and replied : yeah , i'm coming from office to buy a gift for my friend .

MK: OK ,

Sasha: Dadima , who is she?

Dadima: she is Geet , our close relative's daughter.

Sasha : Oh , but I heard that she saved MK so u r helping her .

Maan gave her an angry glare and said: Sasha is there any rule that my relatives can't save me and we can't look after them ?

Sasha : no , not at all ,, I was just...

Maan cut her between ,,, it's OK Sasha , we r getting late , plz excuse us , chalo Dadima ,,, he moved away from there leaving a fuming Sasha behind .

Maan didn't like that look which Sasha was giving to Geet and he didn't like ppl peep into his family life .

They came back home and Maan was in a very happy mood after long * all had their dinner and retired to their rooms * Geet talked to Meera and Prem , surf on net for some time but soon became bore * sitting at home without work and study is like a torture for her * she took her phone and called Maan ,,, he came at once seeing her name on d screen * she was calling him after many days .

Maan: Geet what happened , need some help ?

Geet: yeah , i'm getting bore at home , shall I go to office ,plzz.

Maan: office ku Geet Marathon ya bungee jumping ke liye jao ( he mocked her crossing his arms )

Geet pouted at his remark and turned her face * Maan smirked ,, he knew that she was feeling bore sitting and bounded at a place * he sat near her on d edge of bed .

Maan: Geet wo construction site hei wahan jana abhi theek nahi ,, chot lagne ka darr hei .

She gave an annoyed look to him and replied : mere haat aur dimag ko chot nahi lagi hei wo fit hei.

Maan: accha mujhe to pata hi nahi tha , he mocked again .

Geet: jyada mjak matt udaao, tumhe lagti to pata chalta ,, dekhti kitne din ghar mei baithte esse?

Maan: tum mujhe dekhne aati Geet ?

She looked at him blankly ,, bolo Geet mujhe chot lagti to kya tum dekhne aati?

Geet: Pata nahi , jo hua nahi uske bare mei mai kya bolu ?

Maan: essa to bahot kuch hei Geet jo nahi hua, lekin ho jata .

Both wr talking in a trance , lost in their past * Maan changed d topic seeing her quiet and sad .

Maan: mere sath office chalogi Geet ?


Precap --- Geet in office ... which office ??🤔


Part - 28

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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago

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