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tabby999

@tabby999

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#111

hi nisha

great update

sheru aur miri ki kahani surroro par maneet ki kab hogi

areey pari brij bhai is empty mind ..he works at khurana construction to rather using chemical formula for i love u ..use mathematical equation ...

thank u for nice update

waiting for next ...

plz don't take long time ...

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bhakbhartifan

@bhakbhartifan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#112

loved the update..
how mann is thinking about Geet and how he was disappointed when Baba picked Geet up..
loved the last part..

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#113

aw...msk n sheru...oh no...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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JeevanaP

@JeevanaP

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#114

Loved it...

Miru & sheru would just steal the show for you...

bechari Pari... phele hi confused brij ko confuse kar diya hai...

continue soon na

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TheSunShine

@TheSunShine

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#115

Stumbled upon this story and just loved it. Geet's devotion to her family and determination to help Dev is touching. She doesn't want him to feel inferior but has to apply same to herself. Maan is impatient and jumps to conclusions he need to curb his tendency to understand Geet. Miri is so lovable. Pari and Brij are interesting.

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#116

haha...lovvvd miris dialogues...wonder what will maan n geets reaction be😆😆😆 what a beautiful part...dont know what made you dislike the chapter...hume toh boohuut mazaa aaya padke😊😊 glad that maan is determined to get to the roots of the mystery called geet handa😳 am loving his eagerness to know about her...loved that chemistry waala confession...now thats a new and variety waala idea😳

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Maaneet099

@Maaneet099

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#117

NI-SHA-JI!!! (just imagine me screaming this and dont ask me why I am feeling random today)

Anyways... I think I may know why you aren't per se happy about this update. It's probably because you wrote this update at different periods of time while you were in different moods. All through I could feel every emotion portrayed wasn't complete before another one came by. Even before Maan could wrap his head around his anger or confusion, I was introduced to Geet's thoughts. And before that completed its cycle, another character barges in. The scene keeps shifting so one emotion doesn't completely take charge making me feel unsatisfied with one particular emotion. Do I make sense?

Obviously it doesn't mean the update wasn't good. As a writer you need to get the story moving and trying to elaborate the emotions while doing so gets cumbersome.

I personally liked it. Geet's emotions have been stirred and Maan found a bakra to unravel the mystery named Geet. It's high time Maan reassess his view of Geet. Everybody including Dev knows but Maan needs to realize value of Geet for him to believe in her and realize his deep love for her.

PS: Wow, so much for randomness... have fun reading my "random review" suna hai kaafi random hai ;)

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divya22

@divya22

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#118

Oh lovely part...

Abhi toh pyaar puri tarah hua bhi nai n maan felt disappointed bcoz he couldnt lift geet again...ohhh...n also he is getting attached to miri...

Evn i njoyed pari- brij part... n hr love confession was superb...

Maan u r thinking to blackmail pari... so in dat case i will say dont mess with her... n specially in geets case...

Bt d miri ne bazi mar le... ek he line bola pure part mai..bt kya bola hai...superb...

I love it when she calls maan sheru...

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979861

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#119

Nice update di.

I dont know why u were not happy with this one if u ask me it has all the trivial details necessary for the foundation f future chps.i dont have much Knowledge about writing yet i can say it has turned out pretty well and things are clear.

One should never judge a person based on his r her first impression.And yet we humsns tend to repeat the mistake again n again. Wont say much on this because because there is quite a famous classic dealing these issues.

Maan is veryy much prejudiced against geet and the fact that she still manages to stir unknown feelings in him makes him do things that he himself wuldnt approve. Just for his satisfaction ,to know her real face he broke out pari condition to her and the outcome that it led to did hurt him somewhere in the process.

And i was glad he realized. His inner thoughts gave away many things.The fact that he was satisfied that she was not as unaware as she pretended. And the way he felt the vague sense f dissappointment to b not able to carry her , his anger at that inanimate object.It does point to the inevitable...even amidst all the prejudices nd misunderstandings..the fact is he id attracted towards her r may b more than that.

Pari is a treat to watch. So outspoken and courageous and strong yet love is something that makes the strongest helpless.She wont say straight naa...but then love is love it will make u do strange things.i liked tis part very much.

The periodic table ...i dont know whether ull believe r not i was revising d&

f block elements lutetium

Had no idea u can express ur love like this😆

Yesterday was revising reproductive system.hehe

Next tym do bring in some physics chp it is something that trobles me more.😆

Long comment fr long update

Thanx fr updating .my s block element must b waiting fr me.

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kavya.sravya

@kavya.sravya

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#120

pixie came to sheru's help...warna pari godbole was ready to pounce on maan...for hurting geet !! poor maan...everything anticlimax hogaya...he was watching her through mirrior...car agaya...wanted to carry her...baba agaye...aur aaram se check karna chaha...phone bajgaya...koina...he got somebody to tell him about geet...!!

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