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mayyo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#791

Originally posted by: dqno1

My fav
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Teri mehek ka suroor hai iss qadar
Ke tujh mein kho jaane ko mann karta hai

Teri inn gehri aankhon ka nasha hai kuch yu'n
Ke tujhe apna bana'un aur tera ho jaaney ko mann karta hai

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#792

Originally posted by: mayyo

Teri mehek ka suroor hai iss qadar
Ke tujh mein kho jaane ko mann karta hai

Teri inn gehri aankhon ka nasha hai kuch yu'n
Ke tujhe apna bana'un aur tera ho jaaney ko mann karta hai

Should I say this without giggling

Bohut Khoob...😆

It is lovely but I think you meant it for Maan😆

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mayyo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#793

Originally posted by: dqno1

Kis ne kaha😲
Ab toh ek hi din hua hai😲
😆
Bol na kuch
pic ke saath shayr laga de..
shayar ka chod
apna laga de.. tera collection hai na
Main bohut boring aur sad chapter likh rahi hu..
ro ro ke bura haal ho raha hai..😃

Ek hi din? O.o

Ro ro ke bura haal hai aur emoticon itni badi smile ka! 😆

PS: I don't have a collection. Mostly jo likhti hoon wo kisi na kisi story ke liye hotay hain and I hand them over without saving. The above one is an instant creation. :)

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mayyo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#794

Originally posted by: dqno1

Should I say this without giggling
Bohut Khoob...😆
It is lovely but I think you meant it for Maan😆

Even I won't be able to say this without giggling! It's so cheesy!😆

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#795

Haan re.. Megha and the mummy stuff is making me sad..I am trying to fit it all in one update so time lag raha hai..

song is Tujh se naraaz nahi zindagi hairaan hu main.. Gulzar again😳

thanks for the shayr

mera GN

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#796

Originally posted by: mayyo

Even I won't be able to say this without giggling! It's so cheesy!😆

Cheesy nahi hai

I was giggling for the bohut khoob...😆😆

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mayyo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#797

Originally posted by: dqno1

Haan re.. Megha and the mummy stuff is making me sad..I am trying to fit it all in one update so time lag raha hai..
</div><div>song is Tujh se naraaz nahi zindagi hairaan hu main.. Gulzar again😳
thanks for the shayr
mera GN

Lovely song.. Strikes a deep chord...

Good night! 🤗

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mayyo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#798

Originally posted by: dqno1

Cheesy nahi hai
I was giggling for the bohut khoob...😆😆

Ahh! How can I forget the infamous connection! 😆

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Mishti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#799

I am back Ji 😃

Caught up with all the chapters.. and man as I was reading through the chapters.. there was a point I was singing its a love story baby just say yesss!!!!... then I was wheeling with excitement at the thought of the enactment of Jack and Rose... My heart was breezing with ' my heart will go on'

...Sooo excited with how the story will make a turn on this cruise.. but I am equally surprised that the whole herd turned up hahaa!! .. Vyan ki brewing romantic thoughts got stashed to family drama instead 😃😆

You know I got to admit when you said that Wired Hearts will be from Geet's pov, I felt hesitant to read on with a pinch.. Since I was in the comfort zone of reading from Maan's perspective in its prequel.. and honestly, the delicacy of emotions with which Maan had portrayed his pov I thought would lack here.. but I am so glad now!

Since Maan is no more the same Maan from outer side..its Geet's turn to peel away each layer of his character with her thoughts, emotions and notions... and now I am quite comfortable with reading Geet's pov since she is practical enough to acknowledge her mistakes and move on (for now!) or rather rectify sooner or later 😉

Aaah❤️ The bliss of Friendship.. the days of carefree madness... to reminiscent those moments with those very beloved people is true bliss... and I am happy to witness this on the very first day of the trip..

char din main kya kya hone waala hai Ji... can't wait for this epic titanic rollercoaster😃

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Mishti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#800

Oh oh!! Bhool hi gayi!!

Aapne bohot zyaada taareed ki, of my small touching comment.. I tried my way of showing you how much I have loved your work and tried to acknowledge your efforts.. I am filled with great happiness that u felt so loved with my comment.. thank you for appreciating my small gesture..

And and .. you liked my sketch of Laal Ishq... thank you.. deeply humbled,It was a token of gratitude towards Avi and her work.. it came so naturally that I felt no efforts were required to portray my thoughts 😳