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Hello,, lakshu,priya,lily,dona,mauaa,indu,rashmi,sona
and mona...🤗



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Hello,, lakshunpriya,lily,dona,mauaa,indu,rashmi,sona
and mona...🤗




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hi babiedi,priyadi,lakshidi,lilydi,mauaa,mona sona
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hello guys... hw r u???? wish u a great evening and very sweet dreams!!! -babbie, lakshmi, dona, priyaa, lily, mona...

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hello guys... hw r u???? wish u a great evening and very sweet dreams!!! -babbie, lakshmi, dona, priyaa, lily, mona...



😲😲 hi kiddo..
me fine..😊
but why sweet dreams..??
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Originally posted by: singh24


😲😲 hi kiddo..
me fine..😊
but why sweet dreams..??

darro matt.. kahi nahi jaa rhi.. pr achha lagta hai jab koi hame sweet dreams aaye esi wish kare.. ajj hum log darr dekhne gaye the na.. 😳
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don't post plz..😊
give me space for 2 posts...😊
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For banner credit goes to my dear Lakshmi...🤗


Prologue...


She was for him , but he denied her in an illusion . He forced her and she embraced death for his happiness . she was Selfless ,pure and mature. He was selfish , stained and immature. What would happen when his illusion disappeared and he would face the bitter truth .

The sorrow of losing what we love is nothing to the torment of having it present but denied us .



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.





Part - 21



Maan got up many times at night to check her * he knew she won't tell him anything but she was in deep sleep bcoz of d meds effects * early morning Maan called Dadima and told her to shift his stuffs in his study room and arrange d bedroom for Geet * Dadima suggested for guests room but he denied saying that his bedroom is adjacent to study and has separate entry/exit so it was easy for him to check her and help her . Dadima sensed his concern and arranged d room * she was very relieved and happy that Geet was coming in KV.

Maan finished all d formalities for Geet's discharge * Dr came to check her and repeated all d precautions again * Geet was very tensed with all this long treatment.

Geet: Dr for how long I have to bear this plaster and when I'll be able to walk ?

Dr: miss GS this is ur temp plaster * after healing ur leg's wounds we gave u hard plaster next week and that will be for 30/40days * in this one week don't give any stress on this fractured leg * u have to come after 3 days to change d bandages * after a week of hard plaster u can walk with d help of walker/stick.


Geet became sad and numb after listening this * she was chocked and wanted to cry out loud but she couldn't * feeling helpless and frustrated she threw all d things which came in her reach after leaving d Dr. * tears wr rolling down from her eyes on her miserable condition * Maan rushed and hugged her to control her.

Maan: Geet plz don't hurt urself , plzz * hurt me , curse me but don't hurt urself * plzz calm down ,,, plzz Geet.

Geet cried out ,,, why me , why Babaji threw me in such conditions ,, kuuu ?

Maan: sshhh bas ,, sab theek ho jayega ,, plz shant ho jao .


Geey was crying and Maan was consoling her * his eyes wr also wet seeing her this much disturbed * her tears wr stabbing his heart * again she was in pain and tears bcoz of him . She controlled herself ,, parted and wiped her eyes but didn't look at him * Maan came out and called Dadima who went at Geet's house to collect some of her stuffs and clothes.

Dadima came in d hospital with Geet's dress and helped her change * Dadima sensed that Geet is very silent and sad .

All came to KV and Dadima brought Geet's belongings with d help of their Indian servant Nakul * Maan lifted Geet in his arms and entered in KV . Dadima saw this ... her dream was in front of her ,, Maan entering in KV with Geet in his arms but this dream is far-far away from reality ,,, she sighed and followed Maan in d room.

Maan settled Geet in d bed and covered her with blanket * Geet was half laying with lowered eyes ,,, silent and this silence was pricking Maan and Dadima * both gave a helpless look to each other * they knew she is not happy with all this.

Dadima: Maan aap fresh ho jaeye hum khana prepare karwate hei.

Maan: ji Dadima .


He left for his study giving Geet a painful look who was just looking at her palm blankly.After half an hr Dadima came followed by Nakul with a trolly arranged with eatables * Maan too joined them and sat in a nearby chair * Dadima prepared a plate for Geet and handed her which she took silently and then she served for Maan and herself * Geet nibbled slowly and lastly left more than half portion ,, placed d plate on side table ,, turned her back and lie down closing her eyes * salty drops slid down from d corners of her closed eyes * Maan and Dadima sighed .


Dadima arranged Geet's clothes in d cupboard and then left for kitchen * Maan peeped from his study after small intervals * he was working from home and giving instructions on phone to Manish-a * he arranged his video conferences and got busy in work but he was very punctual taking care of Geet ,,, though she was not speaking a word to anyone but he was asking everything without a flinch * he knew he has to bear all this torment.


At eve Dadima came with a glass of juice for Geet and woke her up * she knew she didn't take a proper lunch .


Dadima: Geet beta , don't avoid ur health ,, it'll harm u more ,, plz take this juice and tell me what do u like to eat in dinner * she handed Geet d glass and Geet took that quietly and emptied that but didn't open her mouth * Dadima left from there defeated * Maan was looking at her from glass door partition * All wr in a very odd situation and marooned.

Maan was busy in discussing on his phone with Sasha when he heard some sound from bedroom and came near door * he was shocked seeing Geet was standing on floor holding bed and trying to walk on one 1 leg * he slid d glass door in a go and shouted ... Geet ,, no o o , what r u doing ? He rushed to her cutting d call at mid * he held Geet from her waist and hand .

Maan: ye kya ker rahi ho ? Dr ne mana kiya tha yaad hei na ? Mujhe ku nahi bula liya ? Kya chahiye mujhe kaho na .

Geet looked at him with teary eyes and then turned her face * blinked many times to stop her tears with sniffing.

Maan: Geet kaho na kya chahiye , mai deta hun ,, OK, Dadima ko bula deta hun ,, bolo na .

Geet chewed her lower lip but didn't voice out * Maan made her sit on d bed and cupped her face .

Maan: plzz Geet , bolo na.

A feeble voice came from her mouth with lower eyes ,,, washroom jana hei .

He understood her discomfort and hesitation ,,, there r many things which she can't say and express easily * Maan quietly lift her and carried her in WR and settled her there * he came out saying ... just knock at d door , i'm waiting outside ,, don't try to walk and hop * he came out after closing d door and sat in d chair thinking ... God!! Why I didn't think about this ? After coming from hospital we wr just taking care of other things but what about these very personal things * it's really very tough for her to take favour in all these matters * I have to give some hint to Dadima .


He heard d knock at d door and he brought her back * settled her in d bed carefully .

Maan: don't do this again and call me when u want something ,, i'm feeding my phone number in ur phone and just press 1 key to call me .

Maan fed d number in her mob and told her that just press d M-key * he left from there .

On d other side Sasha was walking on burning coal after listening Geet from Maan's mouth .


Precap --- in to the memory lane ...


Part - 22


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ho gayee na 2 post.. or me 1st.. yeyyy!!! pata hai me Udaipur jaa rahi hu.. meri momm ki friend k bete ki shaadi hai waha..
ho mare hivada me jaagi dhokni.. tu chanda me thaari chandi..😳

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ohh my poor geet.. cnt maan appoint 1 nurse.. but i forgot.. its us.. waha nurse badi costly padegi... wnt sm more than this.. bt dnt know what?? take care geet..

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