MG~ SS~The Torment- THREAD-3 - UPDATED Pt 22/Pg 129/26th Feb. ... ... - Page 24

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Prologue...


She was for him , but he denied her in an illusion . He forced her and she embraced death for his happiness . she was Selfless ,pure and mature. He was selfish , stained and immature. What would happen when his illusion disappeared and he would face the bitter truth .

The sorrow of losing what we love is nothing to the torment of having it present but denied us .



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.







Part - 17



Geet finished with a deep sigh * she saw that both wr feeling very guilty but their remorse can't erased d scars from her heart * they deserve her hatred and punishment specially Maan whose selfishness and lie put a life on stake * she almost lost her life because of them and if she is alive that was a miracle and her Babaji's blessings.

Geet: I told u everything bcoz u both wr requesting me again and again , now I have a request and hope u both won't disappoint me .. Plzz never disclose this truth that i'm alive and forget forever that u met a girl .. .. Geet.


Maan and Dadima's heart sank in in deep sorrow * they didn't have courage to utter a word * this situation was more worsen than before n now they clearly knew that Geet suffered all bcoz of Maan's lie and selfishness * their lil trust and help could mend some damage but they closed all d door that day and now Geet. Dadima looked painfully at Geet with her wet eyes but Maan was like before, still with lower head * Geet felt that both wr really ashamed and realizing their misdeeds but this thing couldn't sooth that pain which she was bearing from last many months.


Silence prevailed in d room all wr rooted at their places and d buzzing sound of Geet's phone broke their chain of self thoughts * Geet received d call and it was from Meera * a smiled adored Geet face listening Meera's talk * Geet didn't want to give any hint about Maan and his Dadima to Meera so she was replying in very few words .


Geet: hi Meera,

Meera: ******

Geet: it's a very good news, i'm so happy for him and where r u ?

Meera:*****

Geet: i'll be there TM morning and we'll celebrate this , OK , bye.


Geet cut d call with a smile and Maan guessed that may be it was from Arjun's sis who is Geet's friend bcoz here Geet only knew Arjun and visited them every weekend.


Geet had said everything from her side and now waiting for their next move * d old lady was not ready to lose her again and pleaded .


Dadima: Geet beta , kya aap ess budhi Dadi ko ek mauka nahi dengi apne gunah ke bojh ko kam kerne ka ? apne bte aur bahu ka kiya hua waada to hum pura nahi ker sake, ye dukh hi humare liye bahot tha lekin ab tumhe bhi itni chot pahucha ker hum kaise jee payenge ?


Geet didn't say anything ,, who would like to see those ppl who gave u pain * her coldness showed them that she was not interested in any further talk. Dadima stood up from her place and came close to Geet with heavy feet * she placed her hand on her shoulder * Geet felt d trembling of her hand over her shoulder and sensed d weakness of this old lady.


Dadima: Bado se bhi galtiyan ho jati hei aur humne ye prove ker diya lekin maaf kerne wala to aur bhi bada ho jata hei na , mantey hei humri galti maafi ke layak nahi lekin fir bhi sazza ya maafi jo bhi tum hume dena chaho humme manjoor hei .


Geet felt bad for d lady who was pleading to her drown in d guilt and her remorseful pleas melted her heart .

Geet: plzz aap esse matt kahiye , aap bahot badi hei aur bade choto se maafi nahi mangtey * aapko ahasaas hei ki jo hua wo galat tha ye kaffi hei mere liye * bas mere bare mei app unn logo ko kuch matt kahana yahi kaffi hei mere liye.


Dadima: jaisa aap chahengi hum wahi karenge , apne aap ko akele matt samajhna , hum aapke sath hei .

Geet: mere liye etna kaafi hei , aap log bhi aaram se rahiye aur mujhe bhi rahane dijiye .


Dadima caressed her face lovingly and moved back to leave d place * she came close to Maan and gesture him to go * both came down and sat in d car and before leaving Maan looked at d window painfully where Geet was standing and looking at them * their eyes met for a moment and then he drove off from there with d burden on his heart .


After coming back from Geet's house Maan spent his all time in his gym * he was doing vigorous exercises , punching bags, broke wooden planks and hurt himself with chain * his whole upper body got marks and wounds , his knuckles wr bleeding but he was nowhere to stop * hell tired and wounded he slumped down on floor * every word of Geet was piercing his heart * he was cursing himself for throwing Geet in hands of death * there was no end of his grief .

In her room Dadima was saying sorry to her son and DIL and shading tears in front of their pic for not fulfilling their promise and hurting Geet * till now she had a lil doubt about Geet's leaving home like that but today everything was clear that it was all bcoz of Maan's lie which threw her life in danger. All dreams and hopes wr scattered like a glass castle.

In d other side Geet was relieved with this thought that Khuranas wr really feeling very guilty and won't disclose her truth * now she could live without a fear and in future they won't disturbed her * d chapter of Khuranas is closed and in future if they would come in front of her she could face them without a fear . A big doubt and burden released from her mind .


Precap---Every new beginning comes from some other beginning's end .


Part - 18


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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Guilt and remorse are torturing them.
I am glad Geet can continue without fear.

When the heart is free, only then can come the feelings of care and love.

A new beginning is on its way.

Loved it.

Thanks for updating Babbie.
Edited by dqno1 - 11 years ago
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dadi ke liye thoda pigla geet ne aur usko maaf bhi kiya par maan ka guilt shayad kabhi kam nahi hoga.
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haila avi aaj tune baazi maari😆😆😆
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yeh kya valli bhi waiting
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priya..jijuko aaj bhi n8 shift hai kya😉
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Originally posted by: priya111111



yeh kya valli bhi waiting

haan haan mei bhi
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saw updating status n gusgayi..b4 sleeping thought 2 read..

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