THE LOCKET (18) MG FF 2, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED

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Posted: 11 years ago

#581

Originally posted by: muskanp
Ok I am not at all happy where u stopped it 😡

😆 sowie ...

mujhse yeh sab nahi likha jaata... 😳

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#582

avi... mujhe ek baar aur pm kardo pls... thinking that the update is in thread i deleted the pm... aajkal main pm dabba saaf karne main lagi hui hoon...

mujhe with pics phir padna hain...

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priya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#583

😡😡kya timing avi sab ka hosh udane keliye stop kiya😆😆

poora padne ke baad i felt it is more emotional update than romantic.
daarji's plight and his inner feelings was so touchy only and father of girld child can have that feel. Really i felt very heavy by heart after reading that part. aankhon mein paani aagaya.

ab giit ke baareemein kya kahen usne ab decided jo kiya ki wo apna shyness sab kuch dur kardegi aur maan ko apna pyaar dikhayegi ki wo bhi kitna desparate uske liye😳😳😳which maan always wants from her. and already she is showing her boldness😳😳😳

maan making geet ready haaye haaye kitna dreamy😳😳

ab lakshmi nair itni achi photographer hai tho humein zaroor maan aur giit ki perfect pictures milne waali hai😆😆😆😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

#584

thanks avi...

yahaan tho aur hai padne ko... mein miss kar dethi tho... 😲

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priya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#585

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-
thanks avi...

yahaan tho aur hai padne ko... mein miss kar dethi tho... 😲

wahi tho main bhi socha open karne ke baad kuch jyaada hi nikla😆😆😆😆😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

#586

Originally posted by: priya111111

wahi tho main bhi socha open karne ke baad kuch jyaada hi nikla😆

avi ne cheating ki...

agar muski ka comment mein daarji nahi padthi... tho wouldnt have read it now...

good morning priya... aaj subah subah?? i have to leave for my new house at 10... cleaning ke liye log bulaaya hain... usse pehle socha daily dose lethi javoo😆

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#587

Originally posted by: muskanp
The whole feel of butterflies went away reading t darjis plight
I could feel a lump form in my throat
Very beautifully narrated every bit
His memories down t lane
Baby geet to jhali geet

Wink wink to maan ki naughty wali geet (yet to be seen)
Though we had a jhalak as tigress 😉

Umm hain saree
Uff maan really knows how to do that
Thud thud
Thud

Aur ek nikamma puchki doesn't even know how to undo one 😆

I am so latoo over this simply perfect maan
Offcourse he had his share of sharmeela panti blush blush

Loved it

Yes that's why I decided to have more than one part. I wanted to bring Darji's part, another for romance and another for the ceremony. No Brij until after.😆

Itne saare kisses toh kiye, sleeping on a bed with sher😳 ab aage kaha se himmat karegi😆

Dare you saying anything against my puchki... I was the only one on his side since thread one when every one was cursing him😆

Yes Maan knows the saree thing😉 What a surprise even Avi can't wear a saree properly😳

Thanks Muskan.😃

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#588

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-
thanks avi...

yahaan tho aur hai padne ko... mein miss kar dethi tho... 😲

cheating kaha re? I told you abhi likh rahi hu.. incomplete hai 😃

😲 and you were not going to read it again?

Even Mari knows that I edit till the last second...😆

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priya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#589

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

avi ne cheating ki...

agar muski ka comment mein daarji nahi padthi... tho wouldnt have read it now...

good morning priya... aaj subah subah?? i have to leave for my new house at 10... cleaning ke liye log bulaaya hain... usse pehle socha daily dose lethi javoo😆

aur main bhi wahi padkar open kiya😆😆nahi tho kya hotha humdono ka😆

bas tere jaise hi mera hi haal hai morning dose lene aayi afternoon shopping keliye jaana hai so uske baad no online😆😆aur phir kal hi darshan hoga

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#590

Originally posted by: dqno1

cheating kaha re? I told you abhi likh rahi hu.. incomplete hai 😃

😲 and you were not going to read it again?

Even Mari knows that I edit till the last second...😆

mari ko patha hoga... ujhe nahi...

i would have read it in night ... u think i would have left reading😲 😆