THE LOCKET (18) MG FF 2, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 107

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Posted: 11 years ago
thx for the pw and the updates,loved it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wht a well knitted story..not let me go 4 a break evn once be4 fhinishing d chapters..
I don't hav wrds 4 ur writing..lets not talk about story n its cncepts 2day..ur writing..wrd selection..presentation..dialogues..byond wrds..all makes d scenes alive as vedio in my mind..as i m watching it wid ny open eyes..i hav cmpleted 76 prts of d ff pr abi b vaise hi curiosity h jaisi 1st prt k wqt thi..
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Posted: 11 years ago
started reading this story now. liked the way each parts are written. all the characters and couples are different and makes the reading interesting. would like to read further. please pm me the blog link.
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg brij is in hp.. he found out geet n going to drug her... waaa pinky came on time saving her
n maaneet moments hav left me speechless
darji's thoughts for geet r so emotional.. his pain fr leaving her..
maan is absolutely the best.. kaash my parents get a maan to me in future 😛
n maan himself dressing up his bride.. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
The song selection was Brilliant again. And it was a Blush-licious update. Loved their passion for each other, Geet's innocent question n Maan's coming back to his senses with her question n fears. She to has grown passionate n desire for him but her fears are overpowering her senses and isnt letting herself love him with all her being like he does. Loved the understanding they shared n Maan again controlled his feelings that too after expressing it openly that he wants to love her. That was a big confession he did in this relationship today n admired how he remembered he had decided to make this special for her n them and he wouldnt rush in this n give her that right to feel of being special, loved and belonged. And to make the situation little ease up he got back to teasing her with his besharam comments making her all red with blush and return she again seduced him unintentionally making him more hard to control over his needs. And at last the peaceful sleep they both had after the separation n torture they went through in each other arms was overwhelming.

And the last part of the song you chose for Dev-Tara was just amazing. Finally some Dev-Tara parts, i missed them real bad. Loved to see them together spending some time in all the hustble bustle around in their life.









I really never had thought Darji could be so mischievious too n a bit open minded. I always thought he would restrict Geet but he really surprised me. Love him for allowing Geet to go to Maan with the lunch since she wouldnt go herself for the respect she has for Darji. And Maan with a plan is always a treat, he needed to make her open up n express like he does without any hesistancy and he has finally started on his plan understanding Geet's fears. Loved his controlling himself n not doing what Geet had expected him to do, this distance will definitely make her take some steps forward in their relationship n match his passion without resisting anymore.

Okay m kinda confused over the whole Brij's incident that happened in the market or rather say i dint understand it completely. Is it that Pinky bumped into him n his cane fell but then what was that needle which poked on his back, i mean where it came from?

So the bumping with Brij got Pinky his memory card which was fallen out from his cane. And the rest of the revelations Maan kept doing to Geet n Darji kept increasing my heart beats rapidly n scared me to death. I was wondering about the rape accusation Navika did on Chandan precap you gave when Maaneet had their lunch in Geet's apartment. And m glad that even before having another stress of rape case on Chandan you proved him innocent by having him with the PC himself at the time the rape was being said to be done. Liked all the dots you joined n revealed Brij's face n plans in front of all, how Megha is in danger. And seeing Pinky's father too involved gave me some relief as he one on whom all can trust knowing Geet n Pinky are friends since long n also Darji is respectable so he would help them with all his might. And Brij is just a disgusting monster, he raped girls taking their MMS so that they open their mouth against him. Such men deserve more than a death sentence n i simply loath them. Though it was nice to see the experienced eyes of Darji seeing through Maan n asked him clearly about what all he was hiding n he honestly confessed about Geet being in danger too but not revealing about the attack done on her once so that Darji n Geet doesnt get scared. Geet is being kept out all of this scary world where people doesnt think before harming anyone n was busy in engagement preparations. Somewhere is all this tensions i myself missed the feeling of two couple who are madly in love with each other are getting engaged. My mind was completely stuck on Brij n the danger lurking around until you gave a respite by giving some Maaneet moments, in all this tensions seeing an innocent girl like Geet would melt anyone n glad to see Maan smiling just with the sight she made of being his would be bride dressed in a ghagra-choli with hands full of mehendi n giggling unaware of the tension he is in keeping her all protected from the dangerous world. And Maan was finally successful in his plan of making her express herself by her own n not wait for his move. That putting mang tika in the parting of her hair reminded me of show's Maaneet pre engagement scene. It was so beautifully shot n the pics made it more clear to imagine it happening in real. Loved how he distanced himself from her torturing himself too in this process but Geet took it all wrong n as a punishment for her denying him all the time. But he was quick enough to come n explains his real motives which made her take the decision of not letting herself restricted anymore n give him back all the love he deserved n waited for so long. Eating, roothana-manana, teasing was good to read with finally sleeping in each others arms by Maan taking complete advantage of her disability to shove him away cos of the mehendi. And since he knows that there is threat out there he has grown more protective, his real intentions to stay in her bedroom was to keep her safe, his fears made him take this step n not his desires or passion. Loved to see a possessive n protective Maan who would not let a scratch harm her. Update was long with so many happenings n tensions ending with some Maaneet moments. Hopefully their engagement would happen without any hurdles n obstacles.











The morning love session with no hesitations, shyness, restriction was so amazing. Maan made this phrase true here Distance indeed make hearts grow fonder and his Mishty has now started showering n expressing her love to him but when he is asleep. Chalu hai yeh ladki, foutunately Maan was awake aur na bhi hota toh with Geet's such sensual touches would have made him stark awake. Maan Khurana enjoying his lady love's dominance n once when he couldnt bear anymore he started returning his love and gladly Geet reciprocated too surprising him. M happy too see this progression in jhalli Geet n seeing Maan happy about the same n not leaving her at all even when she kept insisting to let her go for the engagement preparations but gave up in front of the stubborn Khurana. And i brust out laughing at his naughty comment of shower bhi on her saying sab kaam saath karenge, he is a besharam and its true people who are silent in nature are more passionate in expressing their but not through words but actions.

Seriously who could actually tell Maan is the MSK and is managing a constructions business, i so so admired him seeing him do the smal stuffs like any normal son in law would do n respect their in laws. Him helping seeting the chairs n seeing the arrangements are done perfectly to tasting the food to check if its good enough n then appreciating them for the same, all this brought a teary smile on my face seeing Darji so proud n feel lucky to have him as his SIL n partner for his Geet. Maan dint let him miss his son's absense was the greatest achievement n blessings he could ever get. And i cried along with Darji, true he was the only companion, best friend, mother, father, sister n brother of his Geet. He played every character in her life to not let her feel any of ones absense n crave the love n warmth. He gave her everything n she too was also the only one he had in his loneliness n aged life. And now with her going forever n never having her care for his, scold him, shower her love, smile for him he is doing to miss her dearly and so would Geet. Both were each other's only family n strength n now seeing them getting separated is tough to even read. Though he is happy too for his Geet for getting such a lovely in laws but now the house where she created so many memories with him is going to haunt him when she leaves. Darji's part just made me too emotional.

Maaneet made up for the emotional part of Darji's. And i knew Maan was super close to his mom helping her in the kicthen too n all but helping her in saree pleats just gave more insight to how strong bond they had shared. Usually helping mommies speically in saree
is a done by daughters mostly n reading a boy doing it just made him so much of mommy's boy n he indeed was. Wish his parents were there today to see how much he had grown n was starting a new life n family of his own with his Mishty. His mother would have danced like crazy in her happiness. He was truly an apple of everyone's eyes in KM, sharing special bond with everyone. Kinda missing Annie n Arjun here.










You make small small gestures look so beautiful Avi. The whole update was Maaneet-licious with tons of moments back to back which just made my smile biger n biger. Gosh i so love this couple like crazy n imagining things you have written so beautifully send me to some dreamland where two lovers were just loving each other, expressing to each other with some tadka of roothana n maanana. The song did the magic again, how come you get perfect songs for each updates? It must be so difficult uppar se lyrics ke tarah update bhi likho. Hats off to the creative brains of yours. Itna if i start thinking m sure i will grow some grey hairs till the time i reach to be even 1% perfect as you. Of course Maan ka Geet ko apne se haath se sajana reminded me of the KC episode of GHSP n the intense passion Maaneet had shared in this scene had burned many TV screens, the same happened here too with this update. Both lost in their need for other n still controlling and those small kisses which would make anyone lose their senses n later a dominating Maan who couldnt let her get away from him even for a second n ended up showing his possessiveness through the kiss which immediately melted her, teasing n style of manaoing her, everything was so romantic n every gestures n actions were speaking volumes along with their passionate n intense eyes which conveyed the need n pure love for other. And that "jaan" and "maan jaan" of hers was totally dreamy though that brought Maan out of his passion n made him happy n the compliment he gave her after getting her ready was so romantic. Both are now sailing in same both of desire n finally Maan's wish of walking a path holding her hand came true with this engagement. This exchange of rings will give him a right to hold her hand in front of the world n claim her as only his forever possessively. Now there is no stopping for either of them, Geet's tiny miny of hesitations will also be fled forever by this step.







-Sanjana!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sweet, Romantic and very emotional update...
continue plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
I am new reader of this story. Password plzzz.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nitika20

I am new reader of this story. Password plzzz.

52 chapters are on IF already
password is not needed till ch 53
comment pls
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 74 was totally romantic nd passionfild updt... Bth cpls r hvng nic time plz dnt disturb dem...
Plz gv link of part 75
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh my my!!! Me surely going 2 put all maan's shairies in my shairi book with the heading ''THE LOCKET''...
Both were the mind-blowing updts... Oye the openg prt wid maaneet scene... Nd maan wishes k geet shd want him... Nice thought bt uss bechari ko tadpao to mat... She s so much craving 4 ur touches... Mehndi wale hath nd maan's indifference... Oh she was soo helpless i really felt bad 4 her... Nd atlast she couldnt take it... But d dialogue was dhamaka!! ''Punishment de rahe ho'' followd by maan's ''punish ni kar raha intezaar kar raha hu'' nd ya all d barriers broke away... Nd our besharam maan is out wid a determind geet... Aftr such a lvly scene... Ths ugly man cnt go away or wht?? Man! How much i'l love 2 chop ths Brij guy into small peices nd den smaller nd smaller into kheema nd den gv it to d most ugly nd untidy dog of d streets... Phir b mere dil ko sukoon ni milega... Nd the woman sitting infrnt of him... Ghrrhh cant she talk in low voice,,, bekar mein iss bhoot ko rehne ki jaga mil gai... Khair in sb baato k peeche acha b to happening na... Its nice dat pinky gave dat memory stick to maan... Nd even nicer k maan knw abt geet nd megha being in danger... I really feel bad 4 megha... Poor grl... Hv 2 face sooo much since brth... Bt instead of being in such a danger nd tension maan babu apna favrt kaam ni bhula... Aahaan!! Wah maan wah!! Ab mrng se to bechari tere jaisi banneki koshish kar ri h... Bt if u keep on lookng dat way phir usne to pani pani hojana hai... Wah maan wah!! Best SIL ever!! (i thnk ye jo naya shw aa raha hai na jamayi raja usmein iss maan k jaisa character hona chaiye) he s d best jamayi raja already...
1- Full responsibility of mega nd geet's safety.
2-Arranging all wrks of engagement.
3- Rechecking the food.
4- Making sure dat daarji take rest.
5- And mst imp one... Loving geet 2 d core of his heart...
What else would any1 want in dier sil??
Darji's pov was so emotional... His little guddi has bcm so big haina... The song selctn was addng beauty 2 d scene... Nd wow he s so undrstndng he let maan go to geets room nd then what follows r d blushy moments... Helpng geet wid d saari nd dat too wid such a romantic shairi!!! Haye haye!! geet u hv d luck yaar!!

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