SS by Kalpana: Lutt Jaawaa! Complete! - Page 25

maar daala iss chapter ne yaar

well that sure was something
sorry for being such nautanki though
cant help it especially with your stories

just gotta add in some drama from my side sorry
love your geet more than anything
love maan too but geet takes precedence

the way she didnt lose her courage even though she has lost all her family
who were killed brutally in front of her eyes
no wonder he is in awe of her
and didnt lose his temper on her either
warna he himself said had it been someone else he would have lost it ages ago
he respects her for what she did

having the courage to run from dev and his monstrosity
man story from her pov was so much worse

to think she has lost her family and only raji is there
and yet she is strong
now thats truly something
not everyone can be like her

even before how she stood up against dev sure was something
am glad her family was with her when that kameena got his rishta for her
they rather die than see their daughter with someone like him
family ho toh aisi
who doesnt differentiate between their children
and cares for them no matter what

am so proud of geet and raji
they didnt complain or stop too much as they didnt wanna get caught
and maan sure was surprised
even now she was hesitant of asking him what she wanted to ask
what if he left them in the jungle then how will they reach to their destination
but of course he wont
now all that remains is maan side of story

am sure that too will be just as spell binding as geet's

waise i wonder what they did to maan
that dev and his mother
that means dev's mother aint his

hmmm but he has family in delhi right

cant wait to know more
and no thats okay you dont have to write small scene like DFL for dev dhulai

for that maan and geet even raji are enough
woh toh main mann ki bhadas nikal rahi thi
as usual your stories touch me deep

so cant help but react the way i do
even i wish there were more girls like geet
including myself man
then kameene like that dev wouldnt be able to do anything at all
no they wouldnt just hope that can be possible one day
cheers for pm
sorry didnt stalk it