MG~SS~The Torment-Thread-2- UPDATED Pt 14/Pg 128 / 17th Feb. .. ... - Page 82

Created

Last reply

Replies

924

Views

132.6k

Users

65

Likes

2.4k

Frequent Posters

Donnaa thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111




<font size="4"><font color="#990000">


hello dona
</font></font>


hi di how r u???
priya111111 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago


fine dona tum batao
singh24 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago


lakshu,priya,lily,dona,mauaa,indu,rasmi,sona N mona..🤗


Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
singh24 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago

Hi Priya..🤗
kahan hei sab..??😲
singh24 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
*




For banner credit goes to my dear Lakshmi...🤗


Prologue...


She was for him , but he denied her in an illusion . He forced her and she embraced death for his happiness . she was Selfless ,pure and mature. He was selfish , stained and immature. What would happen when his illusion disappeared and he would face the bitter truth .

The sorrow of losing what we love is nothing to the torment of having it present but denied us .



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.







Part - 14


Maan was restless and this thing was killing him that she was feeling insecure bcoz of him * he wanted to assure her that she is safe here and he'll never harm her but how ? He called Adi and ordered him to come US at once * only he could help him to get info regarding Geet .

On d other side Geet was also very worried though she threatened him but she can't trust him and his Dadima * she was in a tight situation coz only few days back she settled here and joined Arjun * she didn't have any place to go now * she decided that after this sem leaves she never come here * right now she could only wait and watch .

Adi came after two days and Maan told him to get all info about Geet * he told him to look after d work of that site where Geet was working as an employee and try to dovelop friendship with her * don't disclose that u know me * Adi understood and assured him * from d very next day he joined that site as an employee at d construction part of d building * at lunch time he came in d basement in pretext to check d work from KC's side and met to d workers of Arjun's Co who wr laying d elec cables * he casually met Geet and asked a place to live as PG * she excused herself saying that she is new in d city and Pandeyji could help him * Adi met Pandeyji and requested him to find a place for him near him * pandeyji liked Adi's soft nature and assured him to help him .


Arjun stuck at NJ as Annie's Mom was serious and operated * he was contacting with Geet and his ofiice staff on line and giving instruction for work * here Geet and Pandeyji wr looking d work and in San Francisco's office Meera was attending d work with Arjun's help . 3-4 days had passed like this and weekend arrived * Adi too settled in same locality where Geet and Pandeyji wr living and he mingled with them easily coz of his jolly and humble nature * their co and work wr diff but d building was same and all 3 went back home together . After getting some info from Geet in their talks, Adi informed Maan about Geet .


Adi: hello ssiiirrr.

Maan: hello Adi , how is Geet?

Adi: sshee iiss fine siirr.

Maan: hhmmm, any news?

Adi: yeeess siirr.

Maan: hhmm , bolo.


Adi:Siirr, Geet is doing her MS from Stanford Uni and she knew Arjun very well and his sis Meera is Geet's friend * Geet mostly spent her weekends at Arjun's house and he is like her local guardian here .


Maan: OK,thanks Adi and be carefull , Geet ko tum per doubt nahi hona chahiye.


Adi: ji sir.

Maan cut sd call and lost in his thoughts * how Geet knew Arjun ? Arjun is settled in US from many yrs * he became more curious to know about Geet * now a days his day started and ended with Geet's thoughts .


Dadima too was very eager to see Geet and wanted to apolgize for their inhuman behavior but Maan was stopping her.


It was Sunday and Meera had left for NJ * Geet decided to purchase some kitchen stuff for d week and went to Indian Store/Baazar ( there wr 2-3 in SF)* she was busy in collecting and seeing d things in d store when she felt a touch on her shoulder from back .

Geet turned back to see d person and very next moment she shuddered with a shock * she was staring without a blink and then heard her name from opposite side ... Geet.

Geet didn't reply and stood there motionless * nothing is there to say but past rewound in her mind with in seconds * she heard her name again with a soft touch on her cheek ... Geet beta.


It was Dadima who came there for purchasing some Indian items and saw Geet * her palpitation increased and she came close to Geet with shaky feet and placed her and on her shoulder * Dadima was chocked with emotions and happiness * she was so eager to meet Geet and today she find her * Dadima was overwhelmed and decided to talk Geet to assure her they won't harm her .

Geet came in sense with d touch and negativity and anger overpowered her seeing this old lady who being a lady didn't help her that day * she didn't give any heed to her plight and moved on leaving her on d road * Geet removed her hand from her cheek and turned to go without uttering any word * Dadima held her hand with a entreaty.


Dadima: Geet beta plzz ,, ek baar humse baat karo ( she requested with teary eyes)

Geet tried hard to control her anger but some bitterness mingled in her words.

Geet: sorry , i'm not interested in any talk * I don't know u , let me go.

Dadima: plzz beta , hum aapko koi nuksaan nahi pahuchayenge , aap darro matt.


Geet: nuksaan, huhh , aap logo ko jo nuksaan pahuchana tha wo pahucha chuke , ab kya baki hei ? plzz aap apna kam kijiye aur mujhe mera kerne do ,, leave my hand plzz , and u can't force me like this .

Geet removed her hand form hers and moved on taking her trolley * tears roll down from Dadima's eyes and few ppl and attendant wr quietly looking at her * she wiped her eyes and walk few steps but wobbled and pressed her hand on her chest , swayed and fell down unconscious * 2-3 lady and attendant rushed at her at once and then run towards d counter to inform d owner (a Gujrati)* Geet was at d billing counter that time * it became chaos in d store and all rushed towards Dadima * d attendant saw Geet and told her .


Att: ma'am d lady who was talking to u fell down there if u know her plzz help us.

Geet: what!!!

Att: yes, that elderly lady .

Geet was stunned listening this * she forgot everything and rushed at that side and saw Dadima laying there unconscious * d attendant told d owner that this girl knew her and he too requested her to help them * d owner called d ambulance at once * all d ppl became very tense and soon d ambulance was there with all life support systems *they placed dadima in d van asked about d person who was with d lady * d owner gestured at Geet and they told her to accompany them * having no other option Geet sat with Dadima and after few min they were in city hospital * Dadima was taken to ICU at once * D med staff told Geet to fulfil all d formalities at d counter regarding patient * Geet was in a fix .. what to do ? She didn't know anything about Dadima and Maan * She thought and took Dadima's phone and search Maan's number to inform him .


Precap ---- face to face again ...


Part - 15

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3923812/mg-ss-the-torment-thread-3-updated-pt-22-pg-129-26th-feb?pn=21

*
Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
priya111111 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago


yeh maan ne taan liya geet ke baaremein patha lagane ki tab kya huwa jab usko akele beech raasthe par marne keliye choda😡ab adi ko laga diya uske peeche patha lagane ki


maan ke saath saath dadi bhi uske peeche padgayi haiaaram se shopping bhi nahi karne diya. lo ab geet ki behaviour ko dekhane ke baad sahnahi payi aur behosh hogayi .
Edited by priya111111 - 11 years ago
priya111111 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: goldenmoon

koi nahi ha kya aaj 😕



main hoon

babie busy thi isslilye updates padne gayi
Donnaa thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111



main hoon

babie busy thi isslilye updates padne gayi


ohh ok di jiju kab aayenge aaj??
bhakbhartifan thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
Read all the updates at once.. Really nice story..
Edited by bhakbhartifan - 11 years ago

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: tellyme

2 years ago

MG FF- Silent Whisper- Part 28, Pg 106, Sept 09

Overview Two people completely poles apart in career, status and style. One is the epitome of elegant, the other epitome of simplistic. One is...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21

11 years ago

Priya Fan fiction - Update thread /pg 122- 13 sept

hello friends... am not able do pm regularly... so please my all friend follow this thread... i post the link here... so you get link easily of

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Gurti_Maaneet

1 years ago

FATE 3 Updated P 46 on Pg 76 / 7-9-2025

Introduction Small os or ss not decided yet... might be dependent on the response 🤔 I am not sure.

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21

2 years ago

Tere Pyaar Mein Marjawa/pt16/17-pg29/31- 1 feb

previous thread - which get closed now you can read here - click here

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Dragon-Heart

9 months ago

Perfectly Imperfect 3 Updated P 7 on Pg 15 / 7-8-2025

Introduction Ss or Os may be I am not sure but couldn't stop myself to write on this....

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".