MG- SS-The Mist-Thread 13- UPDATED Pt 100-A / Pg 121/ 31st Jan. .. - Page 52

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Posted: 11 years ago
super hot and awesome update
amazing
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 99 A
awesome dear...
so lovely...
they are now enjoying their marriage fully...
Maan should punish those people...
cont soon dear...
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wow lovely emotional touching update..te way my maaneet waking up and te way they realizie they took their relation to next step was lovely emotional..te way my maan ki aroused seeing his geet and both drowning in they passion was lovely emotional..te way geet said happy b'day was lovely emotional touching..te way whole family was happy to recieve my maaneet and all surrounds geet was lovely touching.. now tat mens have to face my maan ..i love te update
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Lakshu,priya,;i;y.mauaa,dona,indu,rasmi,sona N mona..🤗
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hi ,,,barbee,,,😳
waiting 4 updttt,,,,😊
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kal kaisa updtt dia ,,,mele ko shalam aaying,,,,,😉😆😆
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Updating...





Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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For banner credit goes to my dear Lakshmi....🤗



We need a little tears to clear the Mist in our eyes,
a little assurance to clear the Doubts in our head,
a little hug to nurse our Aching hearts,
and a little rest to carry on Moving forward.

Glimpse ...

Nothing is there to trust, nothing is there to love , a broken base of relation and a misty way to go.
Their heart full of pain , their mind full of hate , an uncertain relation and a long way to go.

Note... This is a fiction. If someone feel that it reflect any other writer's work , then plzz pm me . I'll try my best to keep it un affected ... This is all imaginary not reality so enjoy it . Plz avoid if u find any mistake.













Part - 99-B



Dadima ,Annie and Meera wr with Geet while all d gents wr in YSK's study for discussion * YSK called d cop's leader and asked about d progress but they relied in negative *both d crime partners of kidnapper wr repeating d same thing that they didn't see his face and didn't know anything about him * d cops said they r screwing them and trying to get d clue.

Maan disclosed that he was using Geet's phone and d location was near M****** T***. But that was not a big help coz now he could change d location * cops wr trying to catch d other number which they got from both d guys.


Rano came to KM worried * she understood that something happened to Guddu that's why Maan called her at KM * She saw Mahi too there and asked .


Rano: Mahi tum bhi yahan ho , kya hua ?


Mahi: wo Guddu ko chot aai hei .


Rano: Guddu ko , kya hua usse, kahan hei wo ?


Maan: aunty wo bedroom mei hei , aaiye.


Both moved to d room and she was shocked to see her hands and knees.


Rano: ye kaise hua ? koi accident hua hei kya?


Geet: wo gir gai road per .


Rano cleaned her wounds and applied meds on them then gave her a TT Shot * she saw some marks on her wrists and ankles .


Seeing Mahi and all she sensed that there may be something wrong * she keenly observed all and something fishy * she came down after spending some time Guddu and she talked to Dadima ,Annie and meera also.


Maan knew about Mahi's health also and he was also very tense from yesterday.


Maan: aunty , uncle aur Dadima ka BP bhi check ker lo plz.


Rano smiled and checked them also * while checking Mahi's BP she asked .


Rano: Mahi, kya baat hei ? Sab itne pareshan ku hei?


Mahi: nahi to , essa kuch nahi , KU?


Rano: tumhara BP to kuch aur hi bol raha hei * Mahi, don't forget I'm an Army Officer and a Doctor also.


Mahi: wo Guddu ko chot lagi to mei tense ho gaya , bas aur kuch nahi .


Rano: accha!!! Per mujhe ku lag raha hei sab jhoot bol rahe hei mujhse , aur tum bhi .


Mahi: jhoot , nahi to .


Rano: Geet ki wrists aur ankles ke marks kuch aur hi kaha rahe hei Mahi .


Now Maan thought that it is not good to hide d things from Rano * he called Rano knowingly coz he didn't want that any other Doc witnessed these things.


Maan sat near her and held her hands in her .


Maan: aunty plzz keep it with u , actually Geet was kidnapped last night but she managed to escape from their trap * those wounds and marks wr coz of that .


Rano gasped with shock and looked at Maan and then Mahi * She rushed to Geet and straight way hugged her tightly ... Guddu , etna sab ho gaya, beta tune mujhe kaha ku nahi...? She parted and cupped her face , her eyes wr wet .


Rano: did they hurt u ? r u fine beta ?


Geet: ji aunty , i'm fine , only these injuries due to fall.


Rano gave a pack on her forehead lovingly ... Thank God . she checked her marks again and told her to apply ointment on them also.


Rano came down and looked at Mahi angrily who was avoiding to look at her.


Rano: tum mujhe bata nahi sakte thy , etna sab ho gaya * jab sab kuch khatam ho jaya kare na tab tum mere samne apni majboori ko rote hue aaya karo * kaun thy wo log , kuch pata chala?


Maan: no aunty , d cops r in search , they held two but d main person is still out of reach.


Rano: Guddu se pucha , usne kuch suna ho ya dekha ho ?


Maan: no , she was very terrified at night so didn't talk about that.


Rano: mei try karu .


Maan nodded in yes and Rano and Maan came to Geet * Now Geet was searching something on her lappy * Maan got angry seeing her on net .


Maan: Geet i told u to take rest then what r u doing on lappy? Kisne diya tumhe ye ?


Geet looked at him pleadingly .. bas kuch der , i'm searching something ,plzz. Rano set near her and gestured at Maan not to get angry .


Rano: Maan beta mei hun yahan , dekh lungi , don't worry. Guddu beta mujhe tumse kuch puchna hei , agar tum comfortable ho to .


Geet who was busy in her lappy to find something nodded in yes , but asked to Maan.


Geet: Maan do u know d number from which that man was talking to u?


Maan: no Geet , he was using ur phone every time to call uncle .


Geet: my phone , Oh!!


Maan: maine jadoo se tumhare phone ka location search karaya tha to wo ussi area ka tha after toll.


Geet asked Rano's phone and dialled her number d phone was buzzed but someone cut that after 2-3 rings. She smiled and handed back d phone to Rano.


Geet: aunty ab agar mere phone se koi call aye to receive matt kerna plzz.


Rano: Ok, Guddu do u have any idea about those ppl?


Geet: no, they all wr paid .


Maan: yes, even those two guys also, they said they didn't see his face.


Rano: Maan koi business or personal rival to nahi ?


Maan: no , but he knows us and specially uncle .


Rano: Mahi ko , any demand ?


Maan: yes , 10 cr.


Geet and Rano looked at Maan.


Geet: Dad se mange?


Maan: haan , usne jab bhi baat ki uncle se hi ki .

Geet became silent and got busy in her lappy * YSK called Maan and Rano too came down after few min and went back to her home giving Mahi an angry glare .


In her room Geet got d location of her phone with this latest call and now she was sure who was behind this ? Her eyes turned red in anger .


Geet: mei bhi dekhti hun tujhe ess bar kaun bachata hei , enn logo ko kerne do jo ker rahe hein.


She closed d lappy and tried to get some sleep lost in her thoughts.


Precap --- Face Off...

Part - 99-C





Sorry for mistakes.

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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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ohh balle balle ..me 2nd.. love u babbie for granting our request.. i wish i could hug u n see u..😳

ok so dafinatly not so maneet moment.. but n intelligent Geet moment.. i m so proud of her... this is for her and u babbie, aftrall all we read is written by u.. xoxox to u..




thank u again for updating 2 stories.. we wish this happns daily😉 hehehe..
Edited by mauaa - 11 years ago
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chalo sab time pass krte hai.. wrna me soo hi jaungi..


whos more smart??😉😆😛

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