THE LOCKET (17) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED

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kamna

@kamnagupta7

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#301

Gud update.

maan nd geet on d dance floor. So romantic.

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cristallus

@cristallus

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#302

Poor Maan has to bribe his own brother to be with his Giit.
Giit in short dress and Maan is unable to resist her.
song selection for the dance was good.
nice to see all 4 characters together.

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sohni_kudi_111

@sohni_kudi_111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#303

awesome part... u know when i read d teaser part, i was in a restaurant having lunch with my family! i had to literally control my expression not to LOL or keep smiling crazily... it was too goooddd

haha... devil dev!!!
n maans 101 seduction plan... i mean gel-shel n all just for dinner at home...isn't he making it too obvious... haiz... guess that wat it means crazy in love!
dev's singing n dadi was too good
n chotu's part...haha

all in all, i was laughing throughout d update

n dev is too smart... maan's BMW in exchange for maan spending time with hs beloved giit...
always wanted to ask u, y u use giit instead of geet for maan???!!! 😕

maan imagining or dreaming of geet in d dress! d whole part was so passionate, seductive as well as funny!

dance n disc part was awesome but im more interested in d precap!
i mean maaneet alone, at night n champagne... definitely not a good combo 4 unmarried maaneet but a definitely awesome combo for us readers!!!! haha

will they or one of them end up drunk! hopefully geet is d 1...she'll b 2 cute 2 handle after all maan is looking irresistible n definitely kuch kuch hoga... well waiting 4 that kuch kuch

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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#304

an another magic from avis maaneet magical wand😳

dinner ke liye ithna saj dhaj ke tholadkiyaan bhi nahi jaathi hogi😆 but maan is on the seduction mssion... as if he needs them to do... bambi tho wase hi clean bowled hain😉

hayee dev... but mujhe aur chahiye... ye tho teasing waala tha... i want them more and more...

atlast maan ki dimaag ki bathi jali... and he came to know that devs chotu is none other than his precios giit!!!😆

my heart to pound harder than Shiv Mani's drums⭐️ how much i love his drums yaar and the way he just rotates the sticks ... hayeee

I am going to dream about you in this dress ... kathilaana waar tha woh😆 bambi bechaari... maan in seductive mode and avi dono peeche padh gaye hain😉

dance waala part was also to lovely...

Dont pressure urself for not writing more on maaneet... all love it ... just bring it on babes... we r here to read it... we can read them on and on and on... 😳

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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#305

after reading the precap.. i have no idea how am going to wait ...willbe waiting eagelry. for the next avi... samjha kar ab...

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harshita

@harshita27

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#306

Nice update!! Maan is sure in trouble if he doesnt keep Dev on his side! :)

The song that Dev sang really hit the nail. Waiting for next.

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#307

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

after reading the precap.. i have no idea how am going to wait ...will be waiting eagelry. for the next avi... samjha kar ab...

I wish time milta .. I am dying to write it too.

Hopefully soon..😃

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Muskan

@muskanp

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#308

Awesome song Avi
I love this one

Just amazing update loved it

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vidyaniru

@vidyaniru

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Posted: 11 years ago

#309

One of my all-time favorite songs. You really have a way with songs and use them so well in the story. All 3 couples are in the happy content mode and full of love for each other. The song totally conveyed the mood and feeling.

Loved the Dev-Maan interaction. Bargaining with BMW, good choice Dev!

Dev's humming reminded me of Dev teasing Tara during initial days. And the bike ride went back to their college times. Thanks for bringing back small links to the past.