MG SS: MENTAL LOVE updated part 16 on page 87 on 22.09.15 - Page 5

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maaneet first meeting and they bumped into each other

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Part 2

Khurana mansion :

Maan : maa, m getting ready for office.. yash and pari still sleeping.. raat bhar uss disc me rehte hai aur din bhar sote hai...

Maa , m in my room...

He opened the window and was standing there and reading newspaper and having tea..

He saw a shadow...

Maan peeped out of the window but couldn't see anybody..

Then he aain started reading it.. then again he saw someone noticing him..

Maan pulled the curtain and went on is bed to wear his tie and ge ready...

Geet : heheheee to ye time hai Mr khurana ka tayaar hone ka...

Geet(st) : but geet tu kyu picha karri hai inka.. drms me bhi dekha aura b yaha tak aa gai..

Koi kya sochega.. he baba jee.. maine na inka picha nahi kiya.. vo to mai bus iss raaste se jaari thi to dekh liya inhe to ruk gai...

Haan Geet, tune bola aur baba jee maan gaye na.. ye raasta to tera roz ka hai na.. khotti kahi ki.. first time ayi hai iss raaste pe tu Geet.. sudhar jaa, varna gir padegi...

Maan : m going office.. der se aunga Maa...

Geet went college..

Pari : hey Geet, nice dress..

Geet : thanks pari..

Nuts : wat is nice in her dress pari ? its so downmarket..

Pari : style doesn't mean short clothes nuts.. its ok.. its upon choice.. lets go.. bye Geet..

Geet smiled and went to canteen with pinky..

Night time :

Geet : maan save me.. this guy will kill me..

Maan : u dnt need to be afraid Geet, ur hero ur Maan is der with you..

Geet : yes my hero, my super hero...

Rahul : spider man, spider man, spiderman.. ye hai hero sabka hero..

Madam utho... kya badbadati ho drms me aur kya dekhti ho tum hi jaano..

Geet : haan bhaiyya..

Geet (st) : shit ... mai roz kyu uss smarty ke drms dekhri hu.. Geet tuto gayi.. pagal ho gai hai...

Aaj jake dekhu to usne kaunse colour ke kapde pehne hai ? ya fir aaj vo kaisa dikhra hai ?

Jaldi se ready ho jati hu...

Again Geet handa reached back side of khurana mansion and looked at the same window.. she almost stood der for half an hour waiting for him..

Geet(st) : jhalli. Dekha nahi aya vo.. khade khade paer dukh gaye baba jee.. ek jhalak hi dikha dete, apka kya jata.. kaunsa gale lagne ki dua karri hu... Geeet kya bole jari hai tu.. chup kar besharam..

With this Geet just turned to go but heard a noise..

She again turned to see and noticed Maan near window with a cup..

She kept noticing him.. he first was moving his hand on his chin and then he brushed his hair..

Geet : ohhh Man... wow... hes looking dam hot with his hand on his hair yaar.. his jaw line is so awesome..Geet mat dekh, pyaar ho jayega tujhe use..

Maan again notice someone.. he looked down but again found no one..

Maan : y m I imagining someone every morning.. who have time for others in this world and that also early morning... no one.. evry one is selfish in this world..

Geet (st): does this hottie has gf ? ohhh no no no.. hw should I enquire... jus a min.. khuranas rt.. they own the discs and all.. I ll visit der.. I ll kn abt him... yesss...

She shouted yesss a lil loud... Maan again peeped put but found no one as Geet hid herself behind tree..

Night time :

Geet : bhaiyaa, m going to disc today with all my fnds... u ll come to pick me ?

Rahul : ok dear, carry on.. I ll be der jus gv me a call..

Be safe..

Disc...

Geet came with her frnds.. pinky , aadi, ravi, n gang...

Nuts : hey Geet, tum yaha? Hw cm behen jee gang got time for rocking places...

Pari : nuts stop it...

Welcome Geet... u came here for the first time rt.. welcome n enjoy..if u hv any probs, do let me know..

Geet : yes sure pari.. thanks a lot..

Pari : any time babes...

Nuts : y do u behave so nice to her..

Pari : she s nice girl nuts, I like her.. she s innocent and fun.. I cnt make fun of her..

Come lets get drinks for us...

Geet was thinking abt Maan and was present physically in disc but not mentally, as she was in search of him...

Pinky : kise dhoondri hai Geet?

Geet : are hottie ko..

Pinky : kya ?

Pinky : ohhh.. chal na lets dance, ladke baad me taad lena...

Geet : ok chalo guys...

They all went for the dance..

Geet (st) : inn logo ke to itne saare discs hai, ab kya pata, hottie kahi aur gaya ho to.. hey Baba jee mere sath aisa kyu? Ab kya mai roz alag alag disc me jake dekhu ? nahi nahi loot jaungi mai to, aur rahul bhaiyya kaccha kha jayenge vo alag.. itna karne ke baad pata chala ki he has a gf wo bhi serious wali to.. Geet fir to tu gayi kaam se... nahi Geet.. think positive.. acha sochegi, acha hoga...

She was dancing with very sexy moves...

Maan entered disc today but that time Geet dint notice him as she was busy dancing..

He went directly to upwards through stairs..

Upwards was couches and drinks area and downstairs was dance floor and few couches to sit..

Maan was standing near the railing and watching people dance...

Yash : hey bro.. aaj aap yaha? Kuch kaam tha ?

Maan : haan tujhe ghar le jaane aya hu..

Yash : wat????

Maan : chill joking.. nai re.. kaam jaldi ho gaya to socha ek round ho jaye..

Yash : dats good for u bro.. enjoy.. I ll carry on..

Maan smiled when he said abt enjoying..

Maan took a drink of his choice..

Pari and her frnd nuts came and saw Maan..

Pari : bhai aap ?

Maan : yup pari..

Pari : nuts drink le aao na, mai bhai se baat kar leti hu..

Nuts : ok babes..

Maan : pari, whose dat girl with good dance moves?

Pari saw carefully and noticed it..

Pari : ohhh, she is Geet handa.. my classmate..

She dances very well, its jus good to dance with her..

Maan : she comes regularly ?

Pari : no bhai, infact she come hardly .. she is happy in herself.. nice girl..

Maan : hmmm her moves are realy clean

Nuts : hey sexy, can we have a dance..

Maan saw at pari and pari jus smirked and then Maan got ready..

Maan : sure lady..

Lets go...

Maan enterd the dance floor...

They were all dancingwith the DJ beats.. it was rocking..

While dancing, Maan moved back but dashed Geet and his drnk fell on her dress..

Geet : hey dude, wat the craaap...

But when she saw him, she couldn't move her eyes from him...

Maan : hey m really sorry ... really I m... I ll take u to washroom.. plzzz...

Geet : no its ok.. I ll manage ...

Geet(st) : hey Baba jee, haan Maan aao na mere sath... mujhe achaa lagega...

Maan : hey plzzz... Haaan...

Geet jus came from washroom ad was searching for him..

Geet saw him talking to nuts and pari..

Geet(st) : y this chudail is talking to hottie... hmmm.. Geet, vo pari ka bhai hai aur nuts pari ki bestfrnd... to kya hua.. mai bhi to pari ki frnd hu.. haai naa... ummm nai.. hum to sirf class mates hai.. but hum roz baat karte hai ek dusre se... haan Geet kitni saari baate karte hai na tu aur pari.. baapre.. ek hi and smile..

Kya karu mai...

Piky : arre Geet , rahul bhaiyya ko bula le.. unhe aane me time lagega na...

Geet : haaan pinky...

Then Geet was walking upwards when nuts purposefully drop her drink on Geet,

Maan notices dat Geet got wet again..

Maan : shitt man.. u again got wett.. ur day is too bad dear..

With this he winked his eye and went away..

Geet smiled and cleaned her dress.. ( he called me dear)

( vow... Geet dear bolna ek common ho gaya hai.. tujhe kya vo aisi hazaar girls ko bola hoga. To kya hua, aaj to usne mujhe kaha na.. buss...)

Geet : dear... Deaaarrr... Deeeaaarrr...

Love you deeeaaarrr...

Pinky : geet tu pagal ho gayi hai...

Geet : pinky maine bhaiyya ko ph kar diya hai..

Tyjhe ek baat batau.. mera fav word..

Pinky : fav colour , fav hero suna tha.. ab ye word kya hai..

Geet : arre, hota hai naaa.. tu nai samjhegi.. sunn naaa..

Mera fav word hai " DEAR"...

Pinky : haan bola b, kya hai fav word..

Geet : arre, dear..

Pinky : haan bol naa.. dear..

Geet : haan, vahi to dear..

Pinky : haan geet mujhe pata hai ki mai dearest hu tere liye, but ab bus, word bol nai to mai nahi sunungi..

Geet : are baba.. pinky.. mere fav word hi dear hai..

Pinky : hhhuuuhh ????

Geet : haaan... bus I love dat word a lot... deaaarr...

Pinky : mai iss jhalli ka kya karu...

Okkk cha lab.. shayad bhaiyya aa gaye honge..

Geet : hmmm jaana padega...

Geet (st) : baba jee, mujhe nahi mann jane ka.. mujhe yahi rehna hai.. bt disco me kaise rahu aur vo to chala jayega kuch der baad, fir tu yaha kya karegi... makkhi maregi kya??.. vaise bura idea nahi hai.. maine kabhi try nai kiya na makkhi maar na.. interesting hoga naa.. Geeto.. kyaa tu bhi.. kuch bhi sochti hai.. kuch kar varna nuts udda le jayegi tere makkhi ko... arrre makkhi nahi.. " MAAN " ko .. ;)

Pinky pushed her out of the disc.. Geet turned around to take a glimpse of Maaan.. she saw pari and nuts around him.. she was hell jealous of her now..

Maan droped again a glass of wine on her dress,

Maan : oopss Sorry Geet.. really sorry.. I dint mean it dear..

Geet : dats ok Maan.. its my pleasure..

Maan : huuh drink girna is ur pleasure.. ur dress is spoiled Geet coz of me..

Geet : its ok dear.. dats fine dear..

Maan : ill help u clean it dear..

Geet : yess dear...

Maan touched her waist to clean the spots of drink.. his touch tickled her..

Geet : I want to touch ur cheeks..

Maan : no dear, first I wana touch ur cheeks.. the chubby one..

Maan took his hand to touch her cheek.. he held her cheeks and squizzed it..

Geet : aaahhh dear , its paining...

Rahul : hehheee.. haaan to pain ho tumhe iss liye to tumhare cheeks squize karra hu.. taki tum apne dream land se bahaar aao... Geet utho yaar.. kitna soti ho... kaun shaadi karega iss sleeping beauty se...

Geet hugged rahul and said

Geet : bhai... tension not.. apki behen kisi na kisi ullu ko pata hi legi... but ullu is not her style... my style is diff, my choice is hatke...

Rahul : hmmm thike.. but abhi.. jao college ko...

Precap : dance ?? will maneet dance together or ???

Words: 1911

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