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Gmsk..

@Gmsk..

Explorer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: priya111111
lovely start its very interesting just liked gunjan very much how confidently she came and claimed maan as her father

lol
thanx
its gungun nt gunjun
;)

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alekhika

@alekhika20

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Asum part & interesting concept.
Update soon.

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_Maaneet_

@_Maaneet_

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

so gungun is maan's daughter

where is geet??????

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zaara2212

@zaara2212

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

oh this is an interesting story 😊
pls add me in your buddy list

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crazydream

@crazydream

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Beautiful update.

Awesome concept.

Gungun has the same attitude as Maan. Entering in mansion without fear. Dadi n Meera confused meeting her.

Does Maan know that he had a daughter??? He was calm n composed wen he saw her.

Continue soon.

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

hi thanks 4 da pm n emotional update. lovely cs, prologue.

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Binish

@mayurmaaneet

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

nice.. lovely interesting concept.. cont soon

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sparklingeyes11

@sparklingeyes11

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Loved the first part!! Do Pm when u update the next part!!

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lena

@lenageorge

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

wow superb concept
different one
lot of confusions are there
waiting fo more updates

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Gmsk..

@Gmsk..

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

TEASER

gungun looked at the person standing infront of her , he wasn't saying anything , his silence was killing her she just wanted to ask him why did he not accepted her..

gungun : Mr kHurana ...

the words pierced his heart and he asked her straight

" who are you young lady and why are you here...

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thnx for the likes and comments ...