oh god wat a update, first i want to ask u one thing shobaji,wat u felt wen u wrote tis update..tears were flowing on stop from my eyes..
wow lovely thriller, emotional heart wrenching, painful heart tearing, tearful update..wat all words i use for tis update it was not enough..te way geet too drag with my maan vicky even though all her family stopped her to see Anni and to be with her was lovely emotional..yes tis is geet wat ever anni did but as girl she cant bear wat a girl going thru was lovely..te way vicky pleading her and my maan ki warning making her to fear was lovely emotional..te way trio entering to rajveer's place, geet heart was paining to hear Anni's voice, even though his heart pricks with thousand needles hearing his baby sister 's voice but once my maan didt turn to see her making his heart hard was lovely emotional painful, wrenching, oh god no brothers can bear to see their sister like tis wat ever she did..i can feel wat my maan and vicky going thru,but they controlling himself was lovely painful..te way rajeveer ki lustful eye on geet and te way he trying to make my maan angry but geet ki words making him angry was lovely emotional..te way raj shooting my maan and trying to touch geet, tat time ur hell nearing u raj, ye my maan is correct u have faced my maan as prem not as raj to msk, ur dealing with te real hell.. te way my maan captured call of them, with his smartness, tis my msk who will be prepared to face anything was lovely..te way vicky gussa wen raj try to touch geet and breaking his each bones was lovely emotional, touching...te way geet trying to reach anni but she pointing gun to end all her sin and apologing was lovely emotional..te way vicky slaping her and bursting his love for his dii was lovely heart wrenching...te way anni gave her life to save his geet and asking her to smile, all her sin vanished lying in geet's arms was heart wrenching..yes i do hate anni for wat she did to my maaneet but as a girl wat she paid to tat is very much, yes geet is innocent soul who only know to forgive , how can she see anni like tis was lovely emotional..in all tis scenes, i was justing staring at My Maan who was not once wrenche seeing all tis, but i know wat his heart going thru, why im saying i saw scenes, shoba ji, u have brought tis update live in front of my eyes..i think tis part is te soul of tis ff...thanku u very much for giving tis part..i love te update so so so much
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