MG- SS-The Mist-Thread 11- UPDATED Pt 91/Pg 108/ 18th Jan. ........ - Page 73

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Posted: 11 years ago

yeyyy babbie is back!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mauaa



OMG.. aaj sab itni jaldi aa bhi gaye.. or babbie ne updating chalu bhi krdi... woww.. kya baat hai..

hi mauaa aaj itna bada shock laga kya😆
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babie aaj mona ne chutti leli hai
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Originally posted by: singh24



🤗 Hi mauaa...kya pic hei..😆😆
guruji ka asar aa raha hei..😆


ji nahi.. guruji ne to sirf gyaan batorne ko bola hai.. asli gyaan to aap sab baat ti hai.. wahi se mila hai...😆😆😆 so all credit goes to u...
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hi mauaa aaj itna bada shock laga kya😆



ab adda change😆😆
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Originally posted by: mauaa


Lagta hai babbie k ghar guest wali ghanti baji😆😆


😆😆 aree nahi dinner ke liye gai thi..
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hi mauaa aaj itna bada shock laga kya😆


hii dona.. hw r u.. yah kabhi kabhi esa surprise babbie deke kuch zyada hi khushi de deti hai.. jo digest na hone pr ese expression me badaljaati hai.. its not babbie's falt but its human nature...😆😆😆
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ab adda change😆😆

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For banner credit goes to my dear Lakshmi....🤗



We need a little tears to clear the Mist in our eyes,
a little assurance to clear the Doubts in our head,
a little hug to nurse our Aching hearts,
and a little rest to carry on Moving forward.

Glimpse ...

Nothing is there to trust, nothing is there to love , a broken base of relation and a misty way to go.
Their heart full of pain , their mind full of hate , an uncertain relation and a long way to go.

Note... This is a fiction. If someone feel that it reflect any other writer's work , then plzz pm me . I'll try my best to keep it un affected ... This is all imaginary not reality so enjoy it . Plz avoid if u find any mistake.












Part - 91



He turned to go and saw that Geet was watching him from far talking to her and he felt bad when Geet lowered her head and moved away with a heavy heart . He followed her with swift steps and saw that she was going towards exit * he cleared d bill and came out that place where she was waiting .

Maan: Geet , ..


Geet coldly: i want to go back .


Maan: Geet , listen to me please.


Geet: please , Maan , not here .


Maan: OK , we have to wait till ship moved back to jetti .


She stood there quietly at d dock for an hour and then ship touched d jetti * Maan was just watching her painfully * he knew she is very upset * he was feeling very bad for ruining her day * he called at his hotel and gave some instruction at d reception * they reached hotel at mid night * he collected d key from d counter and came to their room * he opened d room and they entered * Maan switched on d light and Geet was surprised to see d room * beautifully decorated with flowers and twilights .

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She slowly moved ahead but Maan held her from waist and came very close to her * he kissed on her head , nuzzled in her nape and moaned ... Geet , don't go away . She closed her eyes painfully * he faced her and kissed her forehead and eyes deeply immersed in love * she was feeling very weak looking in his deep brown dreamy eyes * helplessly she nodded in a NO but he was nowhere to stop and cupped her face * giving her feather kisses he complained ,,, kuch bolo na , ,,,, esse chup rahaker meri jaan matt lo ,,,, * when it became unbearable for her she hugged him tightly and tears rolled down from her eyes.


Maan: Geet , puchogi nahi mai ku gaya uske samne, hhmmm ?


She nodded in a NO .


Maan: sun to sakti ho na ?


She didn't reply .


Maan: chalo change karo then i'll tell u everything .


He consoled her showering his love and after few min she parted and moved to change * she settled in her side of bed turning her back .


Maan came after change and hugged her from behind but she didn't react .


Maan: Geet , i went to thanked her and to show her real place * there was a burden on my heart , ek sawal ki agar kabhi future me wo mere samne aa gai to mai kaise situation ko handle karunga?


Geet turned her face towards him giving an understanding look .


Maan: Geet ur presence besides me made everything very simple for me and i m so relaxed today * I thanked her to leave me at d right time bcoz of her that step i got my angel that day , i got u Geet .( he softly packed on her cheek which was touching to his * he turned her to face him ) Geet never feel insecure , i'm always with u and never stop talking to me * my world stop right there when u avoid me .


Geet: sorry , i felt dejected when i saw u talking to her , why didn't u tell me?

Maan: Geet i knew that was hurting for u too and didn't want that u face that s**t . Geet as i told u before Maan is yours, only yours but i have a request i don't want any communication gap between us , never stop talking to me ,,, apna gussa mujh per nikalo ,, tumhara haq hei * tum ek smiley bhi msg ker dogi na to mere liye kaafi hei , promise me Geet.


Geet: I promise .


Maan:Thanks , now sleep it's too late and i have meeting in morning and we have to attend d New Year party at night. ( he gave her a GN kiss and both slept with contented hearts )


Next day Maan was busy in his meeting till afternoon and Geet spent time on her net * Maan msg her to take her lunch coz he was busy meeting with some businessmen * Geet half heartedly ordered her lunch and had that and thanks to her IF at least she has something to spent her time * she started to read a FF and forgot d track of time. Maan came and find her busy in her IF and thank God ... accha hei esme busy hei warna naraz ho jati ki akele chod diya yahan laker.


Maan: Geet, do u want to go for shopping ?


Geet: haan Maan , i want something in white for d party , please.


Maan: OK as u wish , get ready, we'll go for shopping .


Geet: aur mujhe sabke liye kuch-kuch lena hei .


He nodded with a smile * they went in d well known market of that city and Geet enjoyed d shopping * she bought many things for all * there were many new things which were not introduce in Indian markets .


At night they attend d party which was very beautiful and enjoyed d music and dances of this country * at d time of starting of NY both wished each other * after that they wished HNY to d host and took their final leave biding him bye as they were coming back India on 1st Jan. Geet wanted to spend d 1st day of d year with d family * they came to their room and Maan switched on d decorative lights * d room filled with dim blue light coming from corners and everything appeared very romantic * he held Geet from waist , pulling her close he smiled naughtily at her * his touch on her bare waist tingled her * she was looking at him shyly knowing that he is up to something * rubbing his nose tip to her he asked .


Maan: do u enjoy d night ?


Geet: hmmm, thanks Maan.


Maan: sshhh,,, no thanks , my happiness reside in ur smile .


Geet: OK, then what u want in place of thanks ?


Maan: i want something special for my New Year.


Geet shyly: kya?


Precap---- a romantic night...


Part - 92


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Sorry for mistakes.


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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago

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