Originally posted by: Nosheen4MAANEET
This is so beautiful!!
I had not commented for few previous updates due to busy schedule but im compelled to press "reply" after reading this one.
I didn't realise when did my tears start falling when I read the previous chapter, Geet tells Maan of her past and he lets her cry. That was a very painful scene from all aspects, Geet telling her most bitter past sharing her loneliness and how she lost the one person who fulfilled her need to be loved. And then Maan hearing all that from the person who is so dear to him, and also knowing about her immense pain.. Pain which can not be healed with words. Pain which needs one thing to subside.. Time.. Watching the one you love suffer so much pain is very difficult.
And this part.. See people leave us, maybe the part when ways are parted wont hurt that bad if that would only have been in that moment.. The actual thing is how much we miss them later.. How much we need their presence in our life.. Those flashbacks which make us smile, then make our eyes teary and again we smile through the tears, struggling through the loneliness and pain. Its all very difficult. She saw the painting and she couldn't help thinking of Armaan and how dearly he always encouraged her to paint. U did a marvellous job with the scene and its amazing how u depicted Geet's emotions.
And Maan stepped in and wiped off her tears and so dearly told her to paint again, and this time he failed to conceal his own emotions towards her, his eyes gave away his secret. I dont think it could have happened in any way better than this and at any time better than this. And he promised how his feelings are his own concern. This takes strength. A lot of strength. Being a friend of the one you love, knowing they dont love you and giving them a shoulder to cry on. It kills within. But one part of us is happy because they are happy :) And see.. She brought back colors in his life.. He also has something hidden in his past which made him close his doors on happiness..
Beautiful story and i am looking forward to the next.
Hope Maan's past is revealed soon. Whenever it would be perfect according to you.
Carry on soon.
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