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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


🤗 Hi Dona...
aaj jeej ghar per honge .. so priya gul..😆😆


bt di ne dopeher ko kaha tha ki raat ko wo aayengi issi liye socha k wo laal pari bani hui hongi😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: goldenmoon


bt di ne dopeher ko kaha tha ki raat ko wo aayengi issi liye socha k wo laal pari bani hui hongi😆😆


😆 agar jeej hei to possible nahi ...
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HELLOOO
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For banner credit goes to my dear Lakshmi....🤗



We need a little tears to clear the Mist in our eyes,
a little assurance to clear the Doubts in our head,
a little hug to nurse our Aching hearts,
and a little rest to carry on Moving forward.

Glimpse ...

Nothing is there to trust, nothing is there to love , a broken base of relation and a misty way to go.
Their heart full of pain , their mind full of hate , an uncertain relation and a long way to go.

Note... This is a fiction. If someone feel that it reflect any other writer's work , then plzz pm me . I'll try my best to keep it un affected ... This is all imaginary not reality so enjoy it . Plz avoid if u find any mistake.













Part - 84


Maan understood her insecurity * she never got her own family even she lost her father's proper care and love in her tender age * she was living an isolated life * her Dad was helpless at his place because of his commitment * her scattered childhood and adolescent filled her mind and heart with insecurities * their forced marriage in that awful situation and after that his behaviour towards her wrecked everything * she had lost her trust in relations.

Next day Maan asked Rano for Geet's check up * she told her that at eve she was going to Mahi's FH for his check up coz he was not well from last two days * so he could visit there for Geet check up also. Maan became tense , he knew d reason of Mahi's tension * he replied her that he brought Geet at d FH.


All were busy whole day and at eve Maan rang Geet to get ready for Dr visit * After one hr they were on d way to FH * Geet realised that they were going towards her FH not to A*** H******* , she looked at Maan confused and asked.


Geet: Maan ye route to FH jata hei , hume to hospital jana hei na to yaha ku?


Maan: Rano aunty ne yahin bulaya hei , wo uncle ke check up ke liye aai hei.


Geet: Dad ka check up, per ku ?


Maan: he is not well from last two days and u know d reason .


Geet became quiet listening this * she was rubbing her hands in tension * Maan placed his hand on hers and pressed .



Maan: Geet please try to understand ,, jo hei usse matt kho * he'll be fine and it's depends upon u coz u r d only source of his happiness.


She didn't reply and remained still like before lost in her thoughts.


They reached at d FH * Maan came to her side and held her hand to help her * Mahi and Rano was sitting in d lawn and Mani was surprised to see Guddu there with Maan* both came towards them * Mahi hugged guddu lovingly packing on her head * Maan gave a side hug to Rano after wishing her * Maan touched Mahi's feet and he hugged him lovingly patting his back * he was overwhelmed seeing both of them there and thanked Maan for coming there . Rano lovingly embraced Geet giving her a pack on her forehead * Geet gave a faded smile but her eyes were burning * all settled in d lawn and Rano asked Guddu's about her wounds. Both went inside d hall and Rano checked her and suggested her for next few days * after finishing that routine work Rano held Guddu's hands in her.


Rano: thanks Guddu for coming here , u can see ur Dad's happiness * he was very upset from last 2 days beta , kuch hua hei kya ? mujhe to usne kuch nahi bataya lekin uska high BP bol raha hei ki kuch hua hei ?


Geet: nothing big aunty just some business issues.


In between servant came and asked about dinner * Geet was going to opened her mouth but stopped right there when Rano started ordering him very casually like she knew all about d house and Dad's choices * she was amazed on her authority * Rano turned to Geet and asked about her and Maan's choices in dinner * Geet named few things of Maan's choic * both talked for some time and then called Mahi and Maan inside who were busy in their business talks.


Geet was silently observing Rano and Mahi * they were very comfortable in talking to each other * d care and concern for Mahi , Maan and her in Rano's behaviour was attracting Geet's attention * this was beyond friendship * they had their dinner together and Mahi was showering his love on Maan and Guddu serving them and forcing them for their fav dishes * Geet find that Maan was very happily and heartedly sharing his views with Mahi .


After dinner Rano, Maan and Geet took their leave and came back but Geet's mind was busy in her calculations and she was trying to join d missed dots * Maan was happy at his place for Geet's co-operation though she was not talking freely but she spent time with her father and this was a big thing for Maan and Mahi * he was busy in his laptop but stealing quick glances of her between his work .. God, kya karu ab ? i'm missing my jungle billi and at last he broke d silence .


Maan: Geet , thanks a lot and i really enjoyed d time with uncle.


Geet smiled in reply but didn't say anything and got busy in her chatting on IF .


Maan: Geet, ye tum itni raat tak kisse chatting kerti ho net per ? kuch special hei kya ? aur ye kya cartoons aur pics post kerti rahati ho baccho jaise ? he was trying to bring her back in her bubbly form .


Geet smiled and reply: kuch special nahi friends hei , all r girls on IF.


Maan: accha dikhao.


Geet; no o o.. aapke matlab ka nahi hei.


Maan: what do u mean mere matlab ka nahi hei ? show me kya padh rahi ho ? he closed his lappy and put aside.


Geet : nahi , aap apna kam dakho , ye sab girly talk hei apke matlab ki nahi hai .


Maan: ku tum itna enjoy kerti ho , etni late tak baaten kerti ho , mujhe bhi dekhna hei .


Geet: nahi ,please aap nahi , she closed d lappy when he tried to peep in .


Maan: this is not fair Geet , tumne meri files padhi , maine nahi roka na to ab mei tumhara IF padhunga , dikhao na ,, he tried to take d lappy .


Geet: Maan please , wo sab girly talk hei aur stories hei ,, which we read and comment on them.


Maan: kaisi stories ? show me.


Geet: nahi na . aap ke liye nahi hei .


Maan; ku ? tum read ker sakti ho mai ku nahi ?


Geet: hhww , nahi , essa nahi hei .


Maan: to fir kaisa hei? Dikhao , he tried to get her lappy .


Geet: Maan wo love stories hei .


Maan: love stories ???


Geet with lowered eyes: hmmm.


Maan: tumhe pasand hei love stories ?

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Maan: bolo na Geet , tumhe pasand hei ?


Geet: hmmm. ( he beamed )


Maan: mujhe bhi pasand hei , ab to dikha do , accha chalo dono padhtey hei .


Geet: no o o o. She pouted at him and he gave a teasing smile to her .


How could she allow him to read these stories , where some have very hot stuff ,,, Sari pole khul jayegi humari , kaise roku esse ? Seeing her lost in her thoughts Maan brought his face very close to her ear and whispered.


Maan: Geet , bahot jyada romantic hei kya hmmm ?

She shivered when his warm breathes touched her ear * he rubbed his nose tip to her earlobe giving her many jolts * she gasped and breath struck in her throat * she tightened her grip on her lappy to control her feelings * he was enjoying his effect on her and to tease her more he very slowly blew air in her ear ,,, Gosh !!! she shivered closing her eyes in rapture... Maan , a soft moan came out from her lil parted lips . He wanted to eat her alive right there * his whole body tensile and it was going unbearable for him * to control his desires he fisted his hand tightly and kept his forehead on hers with closed eyes ... Oh Geet !!!


Both were fighting with their arose desires but didn't have courage to break d barriers * he wanted her with all her love and trust for him and wanted to submit himself in her open arms for him .


Precap" family togetherness...


Part - 85

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3877617/mg-ss-the-mist-thread-10-updated-pt-85-pg-123-12th-jan






Sorry for mistakes.


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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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main first aayi😆😆
awesome update...he understood geet so much...her insecurity...loneliness...her craving for love...family...
maan took her toFH...he is trying to reduce the distance between mahi n geet...
geet saw the way rano behaves...so freely...like she knows everything...now geet in thinking mode abt mahi n rano...
maan wanted to see what geet does in If 😆😆
poor geet...
nt fair di inte dino baad laga k kiss hoga bt aapne miss karwa diya 😆😆
loved it very much...

Edited by goldenmoon - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago


mein second aayi😃

lovely update... maan is such a cutepie trying to bring both father and daughter close😳

geet ki tez nazarein have got some idea with regard to mahi and rano... ab beti apne dad ki shaadi karwaakar hi dum legi once she fins out all the truth...

reading maan and geet fighting for IF... i was imagining my self at their place.. kithna danger situation... rationing karke dikha sakthe hain... but how can we afford to give our lappy with GF open in hubbys hands??

and maaneet moment ... just too good...eager to see how and who will break this barrier of hesitancy😳
Edited by -lakshmi- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

😊 Hi lakshu...🤗
😆😆 etna jump matt kero.. thak jaogi..
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update😳😳😳😳😳
Edited by jasika08 - 11 years ago
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hai dona

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