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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#411

maan ko geet ki letter milna chahiye...usse sachchai k pata chalna chahiye...

painful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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simran

@Pumpkinseed

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#412

awesome part
I dont why but it looks like dadimaa knows the person who raped geet
by marrying geet maan gave more pain to geet

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SGuru

@CuteTommy

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#413

a wonderful part...

n maan is going to face the real fact nw... wat wud he is reactions nw...

already he is so confusing Geet... n nw ...

waiting for an early update ...

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Teju

@--Zehnaseeb--

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#414

Geet is simply brave girl.. now I can understand how she has survived after that dreadful incident.. She told dadima.. everything n dadima accepted her as it is.. Wish.. dadima could be very well by her health.. then she would give Geet that motherly affection which geet needed most..
Nice part.. Now why does maan want to see her..?

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#415

Maan should be clear on what he wants... poor girl.. she is getting confused..

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Maangeetlove7

@Maangeetlove7

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#416

Maan is such a confused man -.- doesn't he notice that by doing this he's treating her just like her family treated her in hoshiyarpoor! Aw dadima is so sweet! Good she told her. Beautiful update! And yay! Glad your laptop got fixed :)

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Isolophiliac

@Isolophiliac00

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#417

Read all parts in one go..

very nicely build up concept..loved it..

the characterization of geet is something that highlights to me.. even after facing so much in her life, her being so positive is commendable..she could take out one positive sentence from his outright harsh words..

haven't understood maan's character though..one point he wants her to stay away from him and another side his heart isn't at peace if doesn't eats a day..

waiting for next parts..

loved the concept as a whole and waiting for the mysteries to be out as how and why maan raped her, he doesn't seem to be that type of person..

and have to appreciate your writing skills..from expressing geet's pain to maan's turmoil..beautifully written..

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#418

feeling bad for geet...how much she cried knowing the fate of her future, that she is no one to anybody...

glad that she told everything about her past to dadi...but surprised that dadi did not reacted loudly as geet expected...has she know about the man was maan...why she is mute to maan...has something happened bet them...so much questions...

liked that maan missing her and ran just to get a glance of her...

cont soon

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lena

@lenageorge

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#419

superb updatepoor geet is in so much pain;;;;
maan too is desperate to hv a glance of her

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#420

wow lovely emotional update..te way geet felt hurt with my maan ki words and decide to stay away from him was lovely emotional.. te way my maan too left for tour but staying in some hotel was lovely emotional.. te way geet talking to dadi and saying abt her past making dadi to cry for her and felt sad for her was lovely emotional touching...te way geet ki excitment and happiness wen she ask dadi didt hate her was lovely touching... te way my maan ki restless without seeing his geet and running like a mad maan and craving to see her face was lovely emotional.. buddhu maan why u stopping urself see wat u have done to ur geet, she is living lonely with broken heart..i love te update

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