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Posted: 11 years ago

@Bhanu di : Congo di...for the first time first😃 Long long update...😳... love you for such long long comment...thank you for comment on part 5 also... Loved it ...long 😳

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Edited by daredevilisback - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

I know most of you have queries that why Geet is like this...in one moment hard and other moment sweet... After past revelation, I kept at least 2 parts for Geet's POV...so don't worry you all will get answers regarding her behaviour...

Part 7

Even after few days to that party night Maan still couldn't forget that night. Whenever he closes his eyes Geet's smile flashes in front of him though it was very small smile... but that's enough to make Maan happy. After that night there was tremendous change in Maan. Though Maan's heart got guilt free after her forgiveness but the restlessness was still there. The very next day of Party night Maan was as usual eager to go to the office, once he get inside his eyes was searching for her. When she came in the office he expected her to be at least greet him but she just left ignoring again. Though she was not silent and cold towards him like before but he thought she was different that night like there are two different personalities she gains. From then Maan always try work under her or at least be around her. It's like it has become his hobby to see her. With his each step nearer to her he gets to know a new Geet.

As all of you know we have latest project in our hand... which is Mr Chopra's. Construction site is in Shimla. This is very important project for HC so you all will have to work hard and less mistakes...Is it clear? Yes ma'am a reply came from all employees who are present in conference hall. So one team will be coming with me to Shimla... Adi, Sasha, Mr Anand ... You all three are in team... with it she goes silent again indicating only those three will accompany her. Maan was excitedly looking at her hoping she will take his name too but she didn't. He pouted with anger but decided not to lose this opportunity so he raised his hand to tell her to take him at last he is ready to request even plead. Before he could say anything what about me, Ma'am? Someone snatched his words he turned to see Tasha was asking Geet the same as he wanted to...Geet glared at her Silly me!!!! Yes silly of you Ms Tasha. Is it any type trip for you? Geet shifted her eyes to Maan as his hand is still raised in mid-air what you have to say Mr Khurana...? Maan looked at his hand looked at Adi bye Adi... he said waiving at Adi with raised hand then with sad cute pout he just sat there. Noticing his enthusiasm towards this visit Adi said Ma'am we will need Interior designer there too... Geet took a minute to reply ok... Mr Khurana packs your things too... Maan was on cloud nine hearing her acceptance. Geet just rolled her eyes seeing him making those face again. She just shook her head and left from there. Maan jumped on Adi Thank you Thank you Thank you!!!!! Your welcome buddy...

Next day they were in flight. Due to Maan's naughtiness and his chatter the ride went with enjoyment for everyone except Geet who completely ignored his blabbering just kept her eyes closed leaning on seat just sat there peacefully. After reaching Shimla they got in hotel and fortunately for Maan his room just beside her. After getting freshen up everyone lefts to construction site. As usual Maan was working beside her only much to irritate Geet. Whole visit he just kept blabbering about almost everything. She took her headset put a music on turned to him put headset in ears she smirked at him wickedly maan twitched his eye brows twisted his lips keep going on with his blabbering.

Good afternoon, Ms Geet Handa. Good afternoon Mr Chopra... As I see work going very well Ms Handa. I must say I am impressed with HC work qualities... Mr Chopra I'll make sure you will not regret for giving this project to HC... Mr Chopra smiled at her. Ms Geet Today is my daughter's wedding reception ...I would love to invite you for party. Hmmm Mr Chopra sure, It will be our pleasure.she reluctantly accepted invitation. With that they left to hotel. Hey guys, we don't have party like dresses... Should we go to the shopping? Sasha suggested... everyone agreed to her. They left for shopping Maan took beautiful black sherwani. He was moving towards other section when his eyes fell on something.

Once they reached at hotel Maan goes towards Geet's room. Geet was relaxing when Maan came in with her permission.Do you have anything to wear? Excuse me??? I mean for reception party... she kept quit as don't have any... But she will purchase it what's the big matter? She thought... Don't worry, I have one... Maan said excitedly...You have ladies dresses Mr Khurana??? She asked amusingly... No no... we were out for shopping we bought something for you. He kept packet there. I will pay for this Geet said rudely. We bought it from your account money only... she nodded her head. Maan left to get ready for wedding. Everyone came out of their room after getting ready. Sasha was already drooling over Maan as he was looking Handsome in that black sherwani.

But Maan's eyes were waiting for her to see her adorn in his choice. A click of room door's sound Maan looked towards her. There she is dressed in blue color looking like goddess of beauty.

(Ignore her smile here 😉😆)

They all left to wedding. Maan was all the way half openly drooling over her. It's like he couldn't change direction of his eyes.

Once they reach on the location Mr Chopra welcomed them with respect. Everyone goes towards newly married couple, Congratulated them. Maan noticed that there was sudden hustle between Mr Chopra and some of their relatives. Geet too noticed that both moved there at a time what's wrong Mr Chopra? what's wrong Mr Chopra? Both asked at same time... Actually there was Music program was organized for tonight. The singers were coming from Delhi ... But now they said they can't come now due to some curfew over there. We can't even arrange anything at this time... It's too late...Mr Chopra sighed sadly. Maan thought for some time we will do it Mr Chopra... You can? You can? Both MR Chopra and Geet said at time one with happiness another with shock. Maan nodded with confirmation. Thank you so much beta!!! Saying so Mr Chopra left for making changes in arrangements. once they were alone are you out of your mind? Geet tried to keep her voice down. Ma'am he is our client, we have to do this... It is not related business anywhere... And wait a minute what do you mean by we? Of course you and me...I can't do this alone. What? I am not going to do this...no way Ma'am If we will do this, Mr Chopra will be happy... Mr Khurana, I do Business of construction not Santa clause's to make everyone happy. You have to ma'am... Are you ordering me? Nope blackmailing you... Maan said naughtily. Geet stared at him confusingly, what does that mean...? Dance with me... otherwise I'll tell everyone that Geet Handa is scared of darkness ... It took a time for Geet to understand what he is talking about. Her eyes flared at him angrily understanding what he said... before she scream with his name Maan pulled her towards stage.

You know she like the drama
Yeah she is sexy mama
When she dance everybody go o o O! (x2)



Lights gets on, with music everyone's attention turns towards stage where Maan and Geet were standing. Adi, Sasha, Anand cheered for both. Maan danced around her challenging her to dance. But was he kidding, He is messing up with Geet Handa no one can beat her. She held his collar pulled him towards him and left she showed him her moves...

Haan, dekho bholi kitni
Utni par tedhi cheez hai
Baatein kare hai kadwi-kadwi
Phir bhi lazeez hai

Ittar gulaabon wali
Botte sharabon wali
Total tabahi wala scene hai

Maan as well other who know Geet gets shocked seeing her dance that too this efficiently... Maan stopped dancing seeing her moves. She pulled him to dance... Then they just rocked the stage together ...

Adaayein badi funky
Kare hai nautanki
Ye chhori badi drama queen hai
Ho badi-badi aankhein hain aansuon ki tanki
Ye chhori badi drama queen hai (x2)

(movie:hasi toh fasi)


Geet showed each expression smiling, crying, angry and cute with dance moves...Maan dance like around her saying drama queen. At the end Adi, Sasha and other excited people joined them.

That was really awesome Ms Geet and Maan... People enjoyed a lot...Thank you much. Mr Chopra appreciated them both nodded as an answer. We will take your leave now Mr Chopra... Geet said. MR Chopra agreed. Adi, Sasha and anand left the hall. Maan was coming with Geet... Geet was quit doesn't know what to say... where maan wanted to appreciate her for her performance. Before they could move out of the hall water fell on Geet's dress by waiter by mistaken. . Maan kept staring at her as she gave that waiter a good scold for spoiling her dress. She is just like wicked witch from west... He laughed out loud on his imagination but there was something missing...What..? What? Yes "BROOMSTICK" Geet looked at him as he was laughing Maan saw she was looking at him he blurted out Why don't you carry broomstick...? Maan put his both palm on him mouth but the damage was done Geet's eyes got bigger and bigger Mr Khuranaaa!!!! She screamed out so loud Maan got scared he just ran for his life outside of hall with Geet behind. They kept running Ahhh!!! Maan stopped on his track hearing her painful moan turn behind where Geet was holding her ankle. He ran towards about to touch her ankle but stopped in midway... he shrugged all his thought aside seeing her bleeding leg. She probably hits her leg with stone on way while chasing him. Adi and other employees also came there. Maan asked for first aid box Adi came up with first aid box from car gave him. Maan dressed her wounds carefully gave her hand to get her up. She couldn't even walk with her wounded leg. Maan stared at her for minute then bent and picked her in his arms. Other didn't found it odd as it was needed otherwise as Geet couldn't walk. Geet instantly gets stiff but didn't say anything. Maan took her to car placed her on seat. Once they reached hotel Maan went to her side again picked her took to her room. All the while Maan was trying to read her eyes but she didn't let him as she kept her eyes downwards. Maan placed her on bed If you want anything call me He said expecting her to look up at him but she nodded dejected Maan left to his room and changed into comfortable cloths left towards hotel terrace.

Maan was in dilemma since he saw Geet in pain. He simply couldn't understand what is this feeling? Why for her only? With each moment he found a new Geet. Her each side amuses him. With her every new side he wants to know more and more about her. It's like he never get enough of her. He never gets bore of staring at her. He had read her eyes, there was some kind of emptiness, pain always which he want know... he wants to sooth her. He wants to capture her to himself... But WHY???? Why he can't see her in pain? Why he wants to sooth her? In party they could arrange for other things and she said they do business that was completely personal ... but why he asked for dance? Why he want to spend more time with her? Why it pains when she ignored? Maan just held his head it's like his head will burst out with all these questions... Maan was completely drenched till now... as he didn't notice it was raining heavily. But Maan give damn about it... He wants to have answers to his questions.Can it be L...no no this can't happen ... How can I? he stood still staring at sky as realization dawned him... his hands slowly spread in the air to feel those drops on him.

I AM IN LOVE!!!!!!! I AM IN LOVE WITH GEET!!!!! He smiled...giggled ... laughed with whole heart realising his feelings for her. He danced liked kid in that rain... He was so happy getting a name to his feelings.

Precap: Tera hone laga hu😳...

Part 8

hopefully you liked it... done with Maan's realization part... May be pace of story going fast but the main story still remaining😉

I am obsessed with song guys...so u have to bear song in each part... atleast once in 2-3 parts😆...

please ignore mistake from this parts... I didn't even read just typed...edited...Running out time. And next part will after 3 days...Going on college trip😃

Thank you so much...

Like and comment!!!!!

Edited by daredevilisback - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Me back in action..again came first!!! 😃😆
Banner my looking sexy while bheeging in rain!!!! 😳
Maan ke liye meri taraf ek gaana ... Phela nasha phele khumar ,naya pyaar hai ,naya intezaar,karlu kya aapna haal ye dile bekar tu hi bata!!!!😆(ignore my gaana pls!!!!!!😆🤢)
maan ko bas geet ke paas hi rehna!!!!!, yaha toh bhwara bangaya aur geet phool😆

cutiepie maan too wants to go shimla with geet , adi helped him,wah dost ho toh aissa!!!

Shimla mei geet ne mujhe shock de diya!!! 😲🤢
Hayee maan brought a dress for her and she weared it too without showing nakaraas😆
awww ... Maanu toh chalu nikala he blackmailed her,geet handa phas gayi re...
Now a song for me ... Shock laga laga shock laga... (if this song exists!!!!😆)
She danced !!! Me faint! ! 🤢
Geet hurted her while running behind maan😆
agar geet ke pass broomstick hota toh usi se maan ko target kar leti toh geet ko chot bhi nahi lagti😆
maan worried for geet he dressed her wound 😳
hayee lift bhi kiya!!!😳
He is so caring re.. 😳
Geet back in cold avatar!!!

finally after lot of thinking maan realized that he love geet😳
Lovely update loved it!!!

scene of the update...
As all of you know we have latest project in our hand... which is Mr Chopra's. Construction site is in Shimla. This is very important project for HC so you all will have to work hard and less mistakes...Is it clear? Yes ma'am a reply came from all employees who are present in conference hall. So one team will be coming with me to Shimla... Adi, Sasha, Mr Anand ... You all three are in team... with it she goes silent again indicating only those three will accompany her. Maan was excitedly looking at her hoping she will take his name too but she didn't. He pouted with anger but decided not to lose this opportunity so he raised his hand to tell her to take him at last he is ready to request even plead. Before he could say anything what about me, Ma'am? Someone snatched his words he turned to see Tasha was asking Geet the same as he wanted to...Geet glared at her Silly me!!!! Yes silly of you Ms Tasha. Is it any type trip for you? Geet shifted her eyes to Maan as his hand is still raised in mid-airwhat you have to say Mr Khurana...? Maan looked at his hand looked at Adi bye Adi... he said waiving at Adi with raised hand then with sad cute pout he just sat there. 🤣🤣🤣
Edited by -MSKdeewani- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
res!!
me still 2nd!!!!😭

or ye paglu 1st aa gai...😲

judwa behnen dhokebaaz hai!!!!😉

😛😛


beautiful banner... haaye maanu ki smile...
maan eager to go to office.. ha hoga bhi kyo nai!!! uski mishty waha hai..

maan babu geet ki smile yad rkhna bht km logon ko darshan hote hai...😉
ab vo apna real self maan k alawa sb ko thode na dikhaegi jo office me bhi hanse!!😆
warna uss se sb darenge kaise!!!😆
maan ko bhi le jao na apne sth...

SILLY ME!!!(yes silly you tasha!!)🤣

tjhe kyo le jaegi chipkali ki dum!!!(sasha ki dum)😡
aww.. bechara maan.. he's pouting.. he would look so cute..☺️
adi sir.. u r a gr8 help.. maanu ki help ki👏

maan blabbering!!!😲

its unusual nd shocking😆

they'll go to party.. maan bought dress for her of his choice..😳

maan couldn't change direction of his eyes..🤣

haaye.. maan is so caring sb k bre me sochta hai mera maanu...❤️
maan blackmailing geet..😲
pr baad me tera kya hoga maanu??😎
geet dancing🤓*THUD* me faint!!

WHY DON'T U CARRY BROOMSTICK!!🤣🤣

maan nd his imaginations...🤣

geet got stiff due to maan's hold..

past wale kamine ki wajah se hoga!!!😭

it all happens bcoz u love her!!!😡

finally he realised...

loved this one.. geet danced.. i was imagining them all the while..
Edited by Appy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Appy

res!!

me still 2nd!!!!😭

or ye paglu 1st aa gai...😲

judwa behnen dhokebaaz hai!!!!😉

😛😛

its called luck apple!!!!
Mujhe toh correct time bhi nahi pata tha ki when she is updating...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -MSKdeewani-

its called luck apple!!!!
Mujhe toh correct time bhi nahi pata tha ki when she is updating...



umm...😔

me going now.. ninni aa rai..🥱🥱🥱

ab ek week jam k soenge...🥱

bye all.. sexy maan dreams...😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Appy




umm...😔

me going now.. ninni aa rai..🥱🥱🥱

ab ek week jam k soenge...🥱

bye all.. sexy maan dreams...😉

good night !!!
U have sexy apple dreams😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved the update!!!!
So Adi helps him to come to Shimla!!! FANTASTIC... I was sure about that... yar ab Maan Geet sath nahi hoge to kahani agay kaisay jayegi!!! 😆
How come Geet ignres Maan's blabering... *Geet abh to adat dal lo... Maan tumhe choray ga nahi from his talk!!!😆*
Aww Maan is so sweet he actually bought her a dress... and when he said "We bought it from your account money only" I was like 🤣 and Geet actually wore it...😊 Maan mesmerized by her beauty
Loved the part where he blackmails her to dance.. so Geet is opening up and showing her little self...
When u used this line "She is just like wicked witch from west"and the broomstick wala part... I remembered that line from The Proposal "The witch is on her broom"... and actually Geet hears that part of broomstick and get's angry...Loving their tom and jerry fights...
Loved all the caring Maan.. but i am really waiting for Geet's POV as the things will get clears from that...I wonder why didn't she utter any word... was she lost in past???
And Trahhh Maan finally realised his feeling for her... OMG he is in love with his Lady Hitler...Loved the way u wrote his feelings... his realization... beautifully written...😃
Loved the scientific reason u gave 😆
Will be waiting eagerly for the next part...update soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Maan became soo possessive towards geet
their dance was amazing
And maan realised that he is in love with geet
The story is going good
loved it
continue soon

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