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daredevilisback

@daredevilisback

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#461

di paglon ki toli pe aao and scrapbook chk karo

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#462

Yaar ye sasha to piche hi padgai!!😆

Waise maan ye geet handa h!!

Hasi to phashi wali line ispe nahi match hoga😉😆

Loved the update waiting for the next !!

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lena

@lenageorge

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#463

wah wah wah wah wah😳
superb superb superb😃
geet finally got concerned for maan 😊😳

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-Gemini-

@-Gemini-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#464

Lovely update
Maan trying to talk to geet to ask forgiveness...but she gives him work...
Finally geet forgave maan

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fariya20

@fariya20

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#465

love this love this

geet back hitler back in maan life

n maan hapy

lo ji geet avoid maan lo kar lo gal

maan ab mafi kasey maaney ga

i love this ulti ganga

sasha ab main is kiya khaho stupid ya witch

maan punch the clien team idoit msk sirf ek punch itni body banai hai do char aur lagana tha kamena ko msk ki girl par nazar

geet first tim call him maan not mr khurana

mafi mil gye

yahooo

precape dont tel geet handa hate rain

yeh gandagi yeh kichad maan dailogue in geet

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-Lehar-

@-Lehar-

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#466

awesome part

loved it

geet was back from london...she came to office and walked past to maan

maan was delighted to see her after so many days he went to attend meeting in conference room but geet told him that she hired back her old PS...maan sadly went back from there.

maan went to her cabin to ask forgiveness but geet didn't gave any chance to him ...he tried so many times to ask sorry for he failed in all atempts as geet continuously avoding him

at the party maan punched that khanna guy for calling geet as b****

geet was angry on maan for this and she yelled at him for his behaiour

maan finally went out all his build up emotions before her

and finally geet forgave maan

she called him as maan for the first time he felt happy hearing that

waiting for the next part

continue soon

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divya22

@divya22

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#467

Hey lovely part...

Dont know wats going in geets mind...

She jst left for 5 days...

Den ignored him..n nw she forgive him so easily..

I want to know hr POV...

N m loving this cute maan...

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sparklingeyes11

@sparklingeyes11

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#468

Mayu that was Awesome!!!

Aww Maan was so cute in the beginning... all waiting and restless for her arrival and her arrival was so dramatically portrayed... "sudden cool breeze made him stop on his way"... And when she entered he was waiting for Lady Hitler's wrath and she completely ignored him... *Geet look plzzz don't do this to him...He is working so hard for forgiveness...* ( I was literally saying this in my mind...)

And the Party Scene was FABULOUS... the song chosen actually portrays his feeling at the moment... and Obviously any man will fall in love with such gorgeous beauty...

And Sasha's part I was laughing my head off... *I actually could imagine Maan running away from her*🤣)

The fight scene... Thank God Maan punched that Guy... Should have gotten more from him from saying anything to his Hitler... 😡

And then finally trrrahhh Maan apologizes to her... though in anger but it was really cute...

And actually Geet wanted to console him... and forgave him ❤️

The last scene was perfect i think... they are back... I want more of Lady Hitlers and Maanu scenes...

And the precap... Is Maan really in love or celebrating that he got forgiveness from her??

Will be waiting for the next part eagerly!!!

And u r welcome dear... I think u deserve all the appreciation ppl are giving to u...

U are really a good writer!!! 😃

Edited by sparklingeyes11 - 11 years ago

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SRK

@KINGKHANFAN

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#469

loved the update...
seems like Maan has fallen for Geet...
finally maan appologize and geet accept with smile😛😉...pls cont soon..

waiting for the next part

continue soon

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#470

wow...geet ne maan k naam se pukari...yeh toh eightth wonder ho gaya...maan balle balle...

superb n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...