~||Prohibited Love||~ thread 1 - Page 11

Originally posted by: love2_soma

interesting starting...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

Originally posted by: nupurjain1234

awsome start yaar.

looking forward for more👏

Originally posted by: goldenmoon

amazing start...
at some point i hate maan bcoz of his thinking money can buy everything...
now what will happen 13-14 yr old girl...what the 13-14 yr old aldki 25 kis angle se lagi maan batana zara...
poor girl...

Originally posted by: sparklingeyes11

Very interesting! I like the way you are bringing social problems in your writting... 😊 and i think ppl should be well aware of this

Originally posted by: nehakapoor7

omg.. Maan is too shocked after hearing her age... its interesting... waiting for next part

Originally posted by: manikka

awesome start...

i hope the girl will be fine...

Originally posted by: tehzeeb25

Interesting...

Originally posted by: mandy15

fantastic start :)

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

hi
the up is really different as well as interesting
the concept u have chosen may be mature but u have presented the real situation which is going nowadays and whose victim are young as well as children
as per the up its awesome maan who is man who thinks he can buy with his money but by knowing this fact gets really frozen
plz cont soon and pm me

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

Wow kya start tha !!!!😲

Totally unexpected!!!😕

Ab geet ka reaction dekhna h k kya hoga!!😕

Waiting for the next !!