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Posted: 11 years ago
part 15
nice...
oh ho the twins are dangerous...
poor Geet...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow wht an upd dear
awesum
superb
mindblowing
maan n ayaan i love dem
par geet sirf maan ki hi hogi
maan ka pyar sacha hai
ayaan to geet ko share krne ko bi
ready hai jo maan kbhi accept ni krega
aage kya hoga
plz plz plz upd soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
will geet be able to differentiate between the twins if they change their eye colour
thats what i wanna know
wonder if there might be swappage of the brothers
that would be good test for them all
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chavvi16

will geet be able to differentiate between the twins if they change their eye colour

thats what i wanna know
wonder if there might be swappage of the brothers
that would be good test for them all

that would be an interesting track for sure..😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

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Thanx a lot to all who liked & commented on the previous part. I am glad you are enjoying this story so much. Do keep on showering your love & appreciation like this only for me to continue writing.🤗





@All readers i know many of you love ayaan and many are hating him. Specially after his dialogue of sharing geet. I would like to say that i am glad i could get such strong reactions from you all. My writing is worth all this. And about the twins vow i would like to say that , they had taken the vow during their childhood completely unknown what their future holds for them. I would be giving more details about their past too for you all to understand their bonding and the reason of the vow.Enjoy & keep on showering your likes & comments like this only.😳





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'The tears were denoting one's helplessness & the other's anger of not being able to deny the truth. The former being ayaan & the later obviously maan.'

'The vow, the promise, they had taken during their childhood was the bond of their love and togetherness. It was a promise written in blood , their blood and the blood of their bast*** of a father whom they had killed together, those dark nights and ruthless days of childhood still had an intense and raw printing on their heart. The merciless pain and suffering from their father towards their mother and them. Their helplessness to stop the pain of their mother, the beatings , the hurt , the wh**es whom their father took home only to inflict immense pain to his so called wife. And them being the live witness of those dark cruel sufferings had made them stone. And they turned into little monsters when they had finally nailed their father in a coffin. Yes, they killed him as their mother told them to do so. They did it fearlessly because for them killing a monster who was responsible for their pain and their mother's pain was worth it all. But wait. was it really worth it? I guess not at all. The moment they thought of getting some relief, care and affection from their mother , she had already fled away with an unknown man, leaving them behind to suffer. They couldn't believe what had happened? how and why it had happened? The only voices they could hear was that they were killers...their mother was a wh**e, their father was a drunkard, a gambler and soon both of them will follow the same path, society shunned them completely , the cruel fate was standing and looking down from above smiling at their pitiful condition, when the people tried to kill them , the innocent eyes were lost in complete darkness with no way no light. But as the saying goes after night a bright day awaits you and completely unknown to those two tainted souls , a ray of hope in the form of balraj singh khurana and savitri devi khurana came in their dark life only to brighten it with their love , care and affection. They looked past the dark souls and found the innocent children. That day was the day when they took the vow of being with each other till eternity, no matter what , from that day they had shared everything , completely unknown that even love would find a way to their hearts one day in the form of geet. At that point they had never known what was the feeling of being in love. Young blood wanted to enjoy life and so they did , after all when life gives you a hundred reasons to smile why not? they had already witnessed the pain. But the pain was not far behind as both lost their foster parents once again in a plane crash making them grow at once and taking the responsibilities of the khurana empire. Maan remained in India only and Ayaan went to London. Till that moment their bond was unbreakable , but both were unaware about the future until maan met geet's eye and once again it changed completely. Moreover it changed maan , meeting geet made him realise the true meaning of love, though it took quite long , but it made him forgot his bond with ayaan . For maan geet was his & his , he owned her completely , unaware about the fact that his possessive feelings were also making their way in Ayaan's heart. And the result was now standing infront of him.'


'The past was painful, very painful but it had its moments of bliss and happiness too.'

'Breaking the silence maan singh khurana spoke finally'

'Ayaan i am sorry, but today i maan singh khurana is breaking our vow of sharing love. Geet is mine and mine only , she is maan ki geet and i will kill anyone , mark you anyone if they even dare to look at her, so sharing is out of question. Forget our vow and leave this country once for all, never to return back, enjoy and live your life away from us. Forget about this life forever. I am giving you a fair chance so grab it and go away, move on . Otherwise i won't mind to drench my hand in another bloodshed once again.'


'A dangerous yet dark smile covered ayaan's lips as he spoke.'

'Really so you will kill me, hmmm interesting very interesting, i like it the fiesty maan singh khurana, so tell me one thing what made you so sure that geet loves you only? i mean are you sure na geetu loves maan only and not ayaan?'

'Maan singh khurana has never been so sure about anything in his life until now.' maan replied in his dark tone.

'Ya, ya i know...' ayaan replied back with a yawn.

'But don't you think Mr. maan khurana, that geet should have a choice of choosing whom she wants in her life? after all she is a human being. Aren't you being harsh by marking her as if she is your personal property ? Can't you see she is growing into a curvaceous woman, beauty with brains i must say.' ayaan replied with a devilish glint as he spoke about geet.

'Dare not ayaan' maan snapped while throwing a punch which ayaan caught easily.

'Not this time maan, since the vow is broken , so there is no need to pretend , and another finger if you will point towards me, i will kill you without any warning, so better mind it and talk in a human manner.' ayaan spoke with full venom.

'Ayaan how dare you?' maan stared at him with intense dark eyes filled with extreme anger.

'Don't maan singh khurana, just don't you dare lay a finger on me, you have already dared enough and have broken our bond mercilessly, you have killed our brotherly relation for love and now just wait and watch, how i ayaan singh khurana will kill your love if it meant the destruction of both of us. Either i will have geet for myself or i will bury our sinful love in a deadly dark coffin forever and i vow , you will be helpless maan, completely helpless as today i am.'

'Maan, ayaan' her soft melodious voice took their attention and broke the deadly atmosphere.


'Geetu' maan called out.

'Babydoll' ayaan called out at the same time.

'Rubbing her sleepy eyes she asked them...'what are you both doing in the gym at this time?'

'Ummm geet' maan tried to speak only to be interrupted by ayaan.

'Geet tell me whose body you like? mine or maan's?' ayaan questioned her playfully. Only to receive a death glare from maan.

'Ummm she stared at both of them ...i ..before she could reply back..maan grabbed her hand and took her away.'

'Leaving a smirking ayaan back.'

'The game begins maan singh khurana' ayaan thought in a devilish way.






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Edited by _Ms.Foxy.Angel_ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
maan & ayaan killed their father😲
nd their mother too left them!!

they faced so much together..
pr ab pyar ne majbur kr dia becharon ko..
i have sympathy for ayaan.. bt he's wrong!!

haaye kya question pucha ayaan ne..

geet ko answer dena chahie tha..😉😉
Edited by Appy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Maan's N ayan's past was really.. They both have suffered a lot... Now the enemy is of his own house.. How Maan is going to deal with him? Still Geet believes maan more.. Hope so she won't be in ayan's trap.. Nice update.. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful update...Loved all parts😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
maan aayan killed their father...that was shocking...
loving both...
but geet is maan's only
awesome update...
loved it❤️
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
so they murdered their father... one question is cleared...
their past is very sad but wat will ayaan do?? is maan in love with geet or obsessed of her? same 4 ayaan? arent they taking advantage of geet's innocence???

waiting 4 other doubts 2 b cleared as well

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